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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Ypung people are often influenced by their peers.This is called peer group pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Today we see kids getting more influenced by their fellow peers in some situations it's good and in some ,cases it's not at last it all depends on what kind of activities the child is taking notes from their peers. In this ,passage I'll be discussing the advantages and demerits of getting influenced by their fellow classmates.

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1.The consumption of the world's resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

It is true that the world is consuming too many natural resources such as oil and water. There are several reasons behind this trend and some solutions should be adopted to resolve this problem.

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The government should ban smoking in all public places, even though this would restrict some other people's freedoms. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.

Smoking is a common activity in this modern society as more and more teenagers start to smoke even though they are not adults already. Not all people like the smell and the smoke from cigarettes, so government tends to impede their residents to smoke in public. As far as I am concerned, I cannot agree with this strategy from the government for several reasons.

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent do advertisement influence our choices as a customer and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? Discuss the issue and give your opinion, give reasons for your answer with examples.

Nowadays advertisements are everywhere. Exposure to all different types of ADS has a huge impact on our behaviour in shopping. However,I partially agree that it has an impact on our taste and way of living. In this essay I will explain why as well as give my opinion and support that with the reasons behind it.

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It is important for people to take risks,both in their professional lives and their personal lives.Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

We all are aware of the fact that finding the courage to take risks in both professional and personal lives is very essential.Although this courage may lead to some problems,I personally believe its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Today, the techniques continue to evolve and our living supplies are getting better. However, despite these developments, a handful of people voice out that there are still a number of them going hungry. This essay will discuss this case and the possible solutions that could be made.

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In some countries owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why this might be the case? Do you think this is a positve or a negative situation?

Recently, the quest for reaching higher standards of living has forced people to obtain things and commodities. It is preferable for some nations to buy their own residential places than to pay monthly rentals. I am in agreement with the notion that this is a constructive trend both socially and economically. In the following lines, the rationales behind this tendency and evidence that substantiates my claims will be further scrutinized.

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Nowadays The Differences Between Countries Are Becoming Less Evident Because People Follow The Same Media

These days, people across the countries spend a lot of time on the internet and follow common trends and events that make them less different from one another. There are some advantages to sharing the same views and interests; however, loss of culture and original identity could be a drastic result of this trend. In my opinion, there are more negative aspects to this development.

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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

Human beings have always been seen in a hovering contest with each other since time immemorial. Some people consider this tendency of comparison and copying one another to be even more profound in certain sectors such as fashion and consumer goods. I agree with this notion. In the paragraphs to follow, I shall be elucidating my perspectives on this school of thought.

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right exclude males and females from certain professions because of their genders?

To begin with, that problem is really common. Every day I listen that women have fewer strengths and weaknesses than men. And a lot of males agree with this and consider that females can not work in a factory. However, in my view, women have more restrictions in work than men due the gender. It's not right.

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Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nations do not develop without a successful education system, which is essential to every country nowadays. Despite being in the era of technology, schools’ curriculum has not changed to meet today’s needs. Schools are still teaching traditional subjects with old methods.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Advertising changes the buyer's journey. This is a fact. Some people argue that advertising encourages us to buy things we do not need. On the other hand, some say that advertisements educate us about new products and how they may improve our lives.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

The advancement of the internet in human daily lives has resulted in significant changes in the way individuals conduct daily activities. However, it has brought with troublies that did not previously. I believe that cybercrimes such as online fraud are something that we need to be aware of. Then, data security issues need to be considered to avoid more abuse.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, more and more people choose to read online. Some of them guess we do not need paper books anymore and we can read everything on the internet in the future. I disagree with this view for two main reasons in terms of the usage of digital things for some people and personal preferences.

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Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think that this is beneficial for the children of these families, while others think that children will find it difficult. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many households are migrating to foreign countries to have a good work-life balance. Consequently, it has been debatable that some people accept this is good for children life, however, others think that it makes children to(X) have difficulties. In my opinion, I believe that children can get benefits because of (x) their families are moving to abroad.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

While some people believe that they are able to see films with electronic gadgets without going to the cinema, others take the view that people should see it in a cinema in order to get full enjoyment. In my opinion, I accept that watching movies on phones or tablets make people enjoyment and more convenient for them.

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Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children?

The scientific era has made it viable to thwart a number of preadolescence infections by the use of available vaccinations. However, numerous parents stay away from this path, owing to which their children suffer. Thus, it is said that there must be mandatory laws to get vaccinated, and I agree with the given notion under certain conditions.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

People have been arguing about whether or not to study in a classroom. While there are some strong opinions against about advantages of studying with a team of students in a classroom than learning online at home. Personally, I completely agree with that.

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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the government should take proper measures to restrict the amount of violence and hate in movies so that it would help in lowering the crime rates in society.I completely agree that movies which contain brutal and cruel scenes it prints a negative impact on society.This essay will argue why the amount of violence should be decreased in movies.

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In many countries school have severe problems with students behavior. What do you think are the causes of this, what solution can you suggest.

In today's, world many institutions are facing this issue with the behaviour of students and this is because of several reasons in this passage I'll be talking first about some reasons and then the solution to reduce the problem.

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