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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Many people nowadays travel abroad for their university education. Why do people do this? Would you consider yourself doing this and why?

In the present day, the university is one of the factors that every company needs to concern about when there are candidates for the open position. The ranking of the university has played an essential role in terms of quality for the graduate. So, that makes many people concern about the ranking. Some decide to go abroad to other countries because they want to graduate from a high-ranking university.

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In the 21st century, many women have come out of their home to become what we call working women. What are the advantages and disadvantages of women joining the workforce?

Even in the 21st century, the subject of work force's gender is still debating. Nowadays, while women are progressing in many careers, they are still deprived of many jobs for sexual considerations. Gone are the days that the main responsibility of a woman was nothing but doing household chores and handling childcare. The issue of working women has its own merits and drawbacks.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the work. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that languages have been died out every year and some people accept that it is not vital as life will be more convenient in communications if there are a few languages in the world. I strongly agree with this statement as all people can communicate easily and I will provide a logical conclusion in this essay.

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Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some argue that having long-term goals is pointless and that living in the now is more important. Both viewpoints are equally important to one’s well-being, in my opinion.

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some say that because many people are living much longer , the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably . to what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, some people argue , life expectancy of many individuals are higher . So there retirement age from their job should also be increased . According to my opinion , i think that the people's age at which they retire from work should not be raised , i totally disagree with their argument

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Some parents believe that reading books for entertainment is a waste of time for children and they think that their children should only read serious educational books. What is your opinion?

Many parents in the society often encourage their students to focus on developing their knowledge by reading educational books and refrain them from reading general books & novels for relaxation & entertainment. Personally, I disagree with this. In my opinion, reading is a very good habit and children must be encouraged to read books of different genres and they shouldn't be pressed to just stick with educational books as reading helps to improve the creativity and linguistic abilities.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many historical areas and landmark venues around the world, there is often a large difference between the entry fee that foreigners pay in comparison with locals. In some places, foreigners may pay up to fifteen times more than local tourists to visit the same place. In my opinion, I agree that locals should pay less than foreign visitors, but the difference should not be so high that it feels like extortion for non-locals.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some humankind facing unlucky situations but still they continue living with it especially in unworthy work and lack of funds. While others argued at least to attempt and improve circumstances. This essay will tackle both views as well as my opinion.

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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects such as reading, writing, and math in elementary schools. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today many believe that computer skills need to be learned from the initial stage to the primary level. However, I agree with this opinion because today technological advancement emphasis a key role in different learning proficiency and adding a curriculum helps children provides learning knowledge. In this essay, i will discuss various outcomes of adding computers as an additional subject.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What are the problems associated with this? What solutions can you suggest ?

Various numbers of human beings assure that boredom is associated with our modern heart have been enclosed with negative consequences on the generation . This essay will discuss difficulties and will draw the tackling methods.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think is a positive or negative situation.

Owning a home rather than living in a rented house is becoming increasingly important in many nations. There are many reasons for believing this is because living in a self-owned home gives a feeling of stability, comfort and security. In my ,opinion there are positive and negative results of this issue which depends on many factors.

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Write about the following topic. Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

A various number of human beings think altering their lives gives significant benefits, while others believe replace their environment lead to negative consequences.

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nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather tahn to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of bring self employed?

In this contemporary era, a group of individuals prefers to be self-employed instead of being engaged in any of the organizations for their bread and butter. However, it is difficult to take a stand for one of the above-mentioned ideas. The merits and demerits of the aforesaid statement will be elaborated in the paragraphs further.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disaster. Do you agree or disgaree?

Its argued that humanitarian aid to help developing country in time of natural disaster by the developed country. I agree, that wealthy nations have financial capabilities and can have a good relationship with poorer countries.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

According to some people, in order to become good members of society, parents should be responsible. However, others argue that school is the right place to teach children. In this essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed in detail before a conclusion is reached.

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nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather tahn to work for a company or organization. why might this be the case? what could be the disadvantage of bring self employed?

In these modern days, there is no doubt that if even you have sufficient funding to have your own business is an immensely good idea. However, we must consider constantly drawbacks because it has various negatives. In this essay, I will discuss various types of negative consequences.

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Some people focus on news in their country while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are some controversial ideas heating a debate over the content of newspapers. While some people think that it is necessary to pay attention to local news, others hold the opposing view that global information would stand people a good stead. From my point of view, I believe that individuals should divide equally their time for both news.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Physical newspapers or books will not be paid for because people reading online freely. Although less and fewer people would buy newspapers and books which would potentially disappear. I strongly disagree with this statement that no one would read everything without paying because I believe that high quality of knowledge is worth paying for it.

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Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government, while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is argued that an individual's well-being is the government's responsibility while others think that it should be one's own responsibility. In my opinion, people should take charge of their own well-being. In this essay, I will discuss the issues and ideas of both arguments and conclude my opinion.

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In countries some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some developed countries, we usually see a set of populations earning really high incomes. While some people think that this trend is beneficial for a nation, while others opine that the officials should take necessary actions and keep an upper limit of how much someone can earn. In my opinion, earning is very personal and it depends on the individual's skills & abilities and the law doesn't have any right to curb the income of any person for their hard work.

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