IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 93

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some peopel believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes ( for example working for a charity, umproving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger childern. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by a selection of individuals that high school's curriculum should include unpaid community service like charity work, improving surrounding areas and teaching sports to the younger generation into their main subjects. From my perspective, I disagree with this notion and my supporting reasons will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In many nations, people prefer to purchase abodes instead of paying lease fees to the landlord. This way of preference has numerous potential reasons. Personally, I am convinced that this can bring about so many merits.

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In some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

The legality of rejecting job applicants based on their age varies from country to country. In some places, laws prohibit discrimination in employment practices to create fairness and equality in the work environment.

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Social media have a negative effect do you agree or not?

Most nations think that social media has a malignant effect on youth.other people think social media is crucial for our lives today. In my opinion, I think social apps have brought the worst to humanity today.

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Difference between countries is becoming less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share some fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and tv channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

The distinction betwee nations are becoming less noticeable.There is a popular claim that citizens are watching the same movies,fashion ,brand and others. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages to this matter which will be discussed further in the following paragraphs and as far as I am concerned the benefits outweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand, the fact that nations can be open to implementing different cultures from every corner of the globe to their own is very welcoming to tourists who visit these locations and also the immigrants. As long as this amplifies consumed goods it can improve the standards of produced items because in this case the companies should be prepared if they want to meet the high expectations globally. Furthermore, the diversity of eating habits in a specific city can be helpful to those who choose these locations for migrating as well. For example, in the city of Dubai, which hosts lots of visitors from every nationality, a great variety of cu...

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It is important to take risk, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is thought by a selection of individuals that risks are paramount and people should take them in their lives, both professional and personal aspects. In this essay, my supportive reasons will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching my conclusion which is demerits of this notion totally overwhelm its merits.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays, the progress of science is undeniable, so the community expect these developments to make life easy and convenient for them. Overall, I completely agree with this view for many reasons the most important is people could have a relaxed and calm activity and be healthier.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and are unable to afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour?

Many people are trapped into debt by being consumptive for buying things that are not really important and which they cannot afford. In my view, this behaviour occurs because often people want to impress their peers. Moreover, impulsive buying can happen because people do not have enough knowledge about finance. This can be changed by being mindful of themselves, and not actually paying attention to what other people are thinking.

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Most people believe that social media such as facebook and instagram negatively impact on society and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is thought by a selection of individuals that social media applications such as Facebook and Instagram only offer drawbacks to people in our communities. From my perspective, I strongly agree with this notion and my supporting reasons will be outlined in the following paragraphs before reaching a conclusion.

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1.Some people think that good health is very important to every person, so medical services should not be run by profit-making companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?

Several individuals believe that good health is crucial to everyone, so medical services should not be managed by profit-making companies. In my opinion, I think that whether the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages depends on the financial capability of each person.

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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that instead of traveling to different parts of the world to learn about culture, people can gain this knowledge from books, movies, and the Internet. Personally, I disagree with this statement. While I admit that these channels are informative, they cannot provide individuals with the latest information and practical experiences. In this essay, I will explain my reasons in detail.

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Some people believe we should visit place to know the culture whereas others think internet and books are good source of information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of learning culture by using the internet and books which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, visiting a place to understand culture appears to be more rational but practically not possible. This essay will further elaborate my views and thus lead to a logical conclusion. Both positive and negative effects and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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LARGE COMPANIES SHOULD PAY HIGHER SALARIES TO CEOs AND EXECUTIVES COMPARED TO OTHER WORKERS TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

Large companies often argue for higher salaries for CEOs and executives compared to other workers. I completely agree with this notion, as it acknowledges that company executives need to take risks, have more expertise and skills, and there needs to be clear hierarchy to separate their roles.

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

In the past few years, the use of banned drugs in competitive games has surged drastically in order to boost athletes' performance, resulting in a number of alarming consequences that should be highlighted and addressed at the earliest by finding some appropriate solutions for the same. Both the outcomes and solutions will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Watching TV shows and movies about crime is becoming more and more popular. Why is this? What effects does that have on society?

The conspicuous rise of crime documents and their propagation has become more prevailing nowadays. This happened due to the augmentation of crime percentages. Consequently, those TV shows have affected the reputation and reliability of one’s areas but have considerably one’s awareness of such incidents. I will depict why such shows become so popular and its effects.

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in some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

This statement that individuals can gain everything if they make an effort into them is from some cultures. this sentence has more cons than pores, in this essay I will explain merits and demerits, therefore I have elaborated my opinion.

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There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because computer technology is more accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Several individuals adapt to work from home and the same goes for students. This is happening because of modern technology that is easily accessible and cost-effective. In my opinion, this is a positive development as it save a lot of time and also reduces other expenses. I will discuss this in detail in my essay below.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single –sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people in several countries think that parents have an option to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. However, some people do not want to register their children to single-sex schools to prevent the drawbacks later in life. Personally, I agree that children should know well the opposite sex. It is because naturally there is a different character between a girl and a boy, and for that, we need to explore each other. In addition, it is to prevent sexual harassment.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

There are two opinions about being in maintenance conditions or trying new experiences. Some people, including me, are keen on trying things, for instance, places to visit and foods that are new, but others would rather keep doing things in a familiar manner.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

Modern technology plays a crucial role in creating a borderless society, regardless of language. Some commentators argue that technology also has separated us from the real world. In this essay, I will examine both perspectives and provide my opinion on this matter.

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