IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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In this contemporary era, when everything is advanced and provides a comfortable life to humankind yet, a number of masses are facing challenges to take a sound sleep. This essay will address the reasons behind the situation and provide the solution to conquer.
It is widely accepted that teachers are given salaries depending on seniority and experience in many schools. While some believe that educator salary should vary by the student's performance, others argue that it should not. I strongly agree that they should be paid based on classroom learning.
Some people believe that the optimal way to learn English is to study it in an English-speaking country, but even if you can not afford it, many other opportunities exist. I completely agree with this position. When a student is living in such countries as Australia or the UK, he is put in a situation where the language is everywhere, and it is easier to learn English. At the same time, modern technologies can help to get the same experience from any place in the world.
Nowadays, some people agree that the breakthroughs in digital technologies cause paper based content to be fully replaced, while the opposite side do not believe in a total transformation reading process. Although I prefer the classical type of reading, in my opinion, the innovations and changes in human's mind will leave magazines and newspapers in the past.
These days, the extinction of some species is becoming significant. While many creatures seem to be approaching similar risks. There are numerous reasons behind this situation. In the essay, I will analyse these problems and include some solutions.
TECHNOLOGICAL DEVICES HAVE BEEN INTEGRATED INTO ALL PARTS OF OUR LIVES. WORKING THROUGH PHONES HAS BEEN A POPULAR TREND AMONG THE PRESENT GENERATION IN RECENT YEARS. ALTHOUGH THIS TREND HAS SOME DRAWBACKS, I BELIEVE THAT ITS ADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES.
These days, there are numerous people who live in large cities. In addition, The growth of dwelling is increasing rapidly, which is affecting people in many ways. There are some drawbacks to concern and need to tackle. In the essay, I will analyse these problems, some possible solutions and conclude my personal opinion.
Solar enery is replacing elecrical enery at very high rate among the different countries. It is believed that it is attracting more and more people day by day. I think, solar energy has many different qualities which makes it demanding. Although, it also has some negativities which leads it to be divisive. This esaay will analize all the points through both the lenses.
In this modern world, there are ample people who face challenges while getting enough sleep. Insufficient sleep can cause mental disorientation and physical fatigue. There are various solutions to overcome sleeplessness at midnight. This essay will discuss the problems as well as solutions to the issue of lack of sleep.
Health problem prevention is more important than cure due to the high cost of medical experiments and treatment, so preventive intervention could be the one option. Overall, I totally agree with the statement due to the cost-effectiveness and improving the healthy lifestyle to increase the quality of life.
It is a common belief that rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are able to compete and local business will bring about the develop of local communities. However, I firmly believe that this expansion brings threats for local business in stead of chances.
People have different opinions about where will they live in the future. While many people find out that, old generations, especially those above 60 years old people tend to live in another part of the world.In my opinion, travelling gives a lot of benefits for people.However, this action may be risky for retirement.
Many countries have a set of traditions from the past that creates who they are and how they approach actions which often conflicts with newer innovative ways of approaching problems. This essay will look into the balance of how much traditions should determine life and how much society should be open to innovation.
It is often argued that higher authorities should control the selection of academic majors in the tertiary education, whilst others disagree and think that students should be given complete freedom to select the area of study they are passionate of. In my opinion, I believe that although subjects selection by the government negates the disparity among society, overall when students will undertake their own choice majors it will enhance their academic performance.
We live in an age where everything we use and consume is digital and somehow dependent on technology. This has caused a lot of speculation in literary circles that print media namely newspapers and books is a dying industry. As a result, everything will be digitalized and available at no cost in near future. Herein, I present my case on disagreeing with this thought.
Generally speaking, retrirement age is 65 years old in this day and age. Regarding this, some people assert that it is not fair to set the same age for retirement as some jobs are more dangerous than others. I strongly believe that some specific employees who work in certain dangerous industries should retire earlier and be recieved pension earlier than other occupation.
Nowadays, transports are an indispensable part of human life. As a ,result, many society lose their life while on the road. This essay's causes of this appears to be focused on some areas, and a number of solutions also appear to be possible.
In the modertn era, fast-food restaurants are ubiquitous as they are indispensable for busy people. Regarding this, there are pros and cons to eat fast food. However, I strongly believe that the drawback of eating fast food overwhelm the benefit.
The education of young people is highly prioritized in many countries. However, educating adults who cannot write or read is even more important and governments should spend more money on this.
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