IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 106

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own

There is no denying the fact that competition is a significant thing to grow in any place. While it is a commonly held belief that competing with each other at work or school is a good and crucial thing , there is also an argument that others believe we should try to collaborate instead of competing against each other. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent In the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today’s world, technology is becoming increasingly central to various aspects of life, including education. However, I strongly disagree with the notion that technology will completely replace teachers in the classroom. While technology offers numerous tools and resources to support learning, it cannot replicate the multifaceted role of a teacher.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an aging population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an aging population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Thanks to the measures which have been done by the government, there is an improvement in the healthcare systems which leads to an ageing population. Although some feel that this trend has more benefits, I, however, believe that it has more drawbacks than positives.

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Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples.

Some people think many consumers count prices as important and the price is their precedence when they purchase products. As far as I am concerned, I disagree with this opinion.

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Young people who commit crimes should be treated the same way as adults. To what extent do agree or disagree?

Even if criminals are younger and not mature enough should be treated the same way as seniors.Although young people tend to think carefully before committing an offence,the rates of crime could sharply decrease if they were punished under the same rules as matures,I believe immatures are not both mentally and physically ready to be treated like adults.

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The increase in mobile phone use in recent years has led to many social problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued that social problems have increased by using mobile phones over the past several years.I strongly agree with the said notion,that mobile phones have caused social isolation and a sedentary lifestyle.This essay will explore these problems in detail.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, many foods and beverages are produced with high levels of sugar, contributing significantly to various health issues. It has been suggested that increasing the cost of these sugary products could deter consumers from purchasing them, thereby encouraging healthier dietary habits. I fully agree with this approach, and I will elaborate on the reasons why in the following essay.

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Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel that this will lead to the loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the frequency and depth of business and cultural contact between countries due to the advancements in internet connection and transportation. However, people hold different views about this phenomenon.

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Some countries encourage foreign companies to open in their country. Many people think that the government should focus on encouraging local business rather than foreign businesses. to what extent do you agree?

In today's world, many governments are inviting international industries to invest in their countries. However, there is an ongoing debate about whether countries should prioritise domestic companies over foreign businesses. I firmly support the latter view, as it significantly enhances the economy, encourages innovation and the establishment of new businesses, and ensures long-term economic sustainability.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.

Children also have various preferences about what they are interested in or not. However, people perceive it differently, it could be seen as a good thing as they can learn how to be wise or even in an opposite way. From my perspective, I believe giving freedom for them to choose is necessary, which will build a decisive situation for children to decide what would affect them.

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Some people think that success of life is based on hard work and determination.Others, however, believe that there are more important factors such as having money or good appearance.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Currently, netizens are discussing which is more important for individuals' success, determination and effort, or external advantages such as a handsome appearance. In my view, external advantages do play a role in one's achievement, nevertheless, what is decisive is people's efforts and persistence.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The topic of increasing sports facilities in order to improve health is controversial. Some people argue it is effective while others disagree and believe it's useless. In my view, there are better methods to enhance public health.

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Some people say that it is better to work for a large company than a small one. Do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals think it is better to be employed by a big corporation than a smaller firm. I agree completely because large companies provide more career stability and access to professional development, even though small companies offer access to work in a more closely knitted environment.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they shoud be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school . To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief among people about the importance of advertisements in making people buy goods. While some tend to spend a large amount of money on unnecessary things, some ads can have a significant impact on making others buy recent products that improve their lives. This essay will argue that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

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Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Having graduated high school, college or university, many teenagers and young adults face an extremely difficult decision of choosing their potential career. Some say it is better to be realistic and pragmatic about your choice, while others believe that it is worth pursuing the desired path, regardless of outside circumstances and potential difficulties.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Thanks to university advancements, many students are able to learn various subjects. While some believe that students should focus on their own studies to get high grades, I agree with those who feel that having both other subjects and their main courses can boost their creativity.

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“Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?”

Intro: Question, benefit, detriment, opinion

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Sports play a significant role in promoting physical and mental well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Sports undeniably play a crucial role in supporting both physical and mental health. In my opinion, I completely agree with the idea that engaging in sports contributes significantly to an individual’s well-being, as it enhances both body and mind through various beneficial impacts.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is presented that doing a career that people are interested in is more crucial than doing a job with no feeling of satisfaction, I do not agree with this view and strongly believe that employers incredibly need to do their jobs in an accurate way to meet their needs.

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Some businesses find that new employees finishing their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as working with others as a part of a team. What do you think are the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem?

Some employers find newly graduated employees do not have good social capability, such as teamwork. This essay believes the main drivers of this are the high amount of remote learning and technology dependency and suggests more group assignments in education and more teamwork training in a professional environment.

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