IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5. Page 108

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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The most important consideration when choosing any career orjob is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree

When deciding on a career path, many people prioritize earning a high income. I strongly agree that a high wage is one of the most crucial factors to consider, as it not only provides financial stability but also enhances the quality of life. However, other aspects like career satisfaction and personal development should not be overlooked.

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Some people believe that living and working in the city offers more opportunities for a better quality of life, while others argue that working and living in the countryside brings greater benefits. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals believe that the benefits of living in the city are very diverse and can make people's life more convenient while others argue that working and living in the countryside offers greater opportunities for a better life. This essay will discuss both views to find out the best place to live in and give my own reasons for the former.

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Wild animals do not have enough space.Some people think that protection of wild animals from extinction is a waste of money because it is natural.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many species of wild animals are on the verge of extinction due to deforestation.There is an inconclusive debate as to whether we should protect those animals.From my perspective,saving those provides humans with many benefits.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that the advancement of new technologies allows us to consume a variety of digital content such as readings and videos. Moreover, there is an argument about the future of printed media such as newspapers and books that will get disrupted by online content, and consequently reduce the sales figures of journalists and publication companies. I personally have a balanced view of this idea.

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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas？

The increasing demand for energy sources has led to the consideration of extracting oil and gas from remote and untouched natural areas. While there are some drawbacks associated with this practice, I believe the main benefits are more substantial.

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Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's way of life. Other believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

These days, people's lifestyles are so varied from the past, but people have various opinions about the element that has the most effect, so a group of people think that climate is the main factor while others believe that the economy is the most important item. I subscribe to the second idea owing to the fact that weather just influences the type of homes and clothes ,but the economy has an effect on the quality and way of life.

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Some people say that the main aim of advertising is to improve sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The primary focus of publicity is to enhance sales of goods which was believed by some individuals, although people do not really need these campaigns. It is necessary to improve the sales of a company so that it can sustain itself; however, the creation of public awareness is badly needed by exposing real facts through advertising to the people, so, I partially disagree with the statement.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Perspectives on education look different to a lot of people. People put more stock on it while others don't view it as a necessity. I believe that education is a necessity and that the youth should be required to go to school until they are adults.

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Some people think that the best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2017.1.21 2014.1.9

Nowadays, some people suggest that the government offering free transport every minute of every week would effectively solve traffic jams. Personally, I totally disagree with this suggestion.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

There are calls for governments and individuals to address environmental problems that have been caused by human activities.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, some people argue that parents should be the ones who teach children to be excellent citizens, while others believe that teachers should teach students these things at school. This topic has always been debatable, and I will discuss both sides of view in the following essay.

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#38 Task2: People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this?

With the rapid development of modern society, individuals face increasing pressures related to work and study. Consequently, a notable decline in fitness levels and physical activity has emerged, as many people find themselves with insufficient time for exercise. This shift not only poses significant challenges to personal health but also has broader social implications. To address this issue, both employers and individuals must take proactive measures.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Competition is quite universal in our society. However, people have various opinions on this phenomenon. Some believe that competition is beneficial to social development, but the opposing side points out competition offers many detrimental effects on human beings. From my perspective, competition could create obstacles in various areas if not handled properly.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measure should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

Obesity can be the root of other diseases such as diabetes and heart attack. It is vital to maintain children’s fitness to prevent them from becoming obese. In this essay, firstly, I will elaborate on the major causes of children’s obesity, and then delve through the potential solutions.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that employees should work less and relax more. This essay disagrees that it would have positive labour market consequences and would lead to new breakthroughs. Firstly, it will take more time to complete the required amount of work; secondly, factories would produce fewer products than usual, so, people might not be able to find essential things in shops.

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Some people say that children should be involved in making schools' rules. Some argue that adults should be in charge of making rules. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

A group of individuals presents the view that children should be involved in making school rules, whereas others believe that adults should be in charge of making rules. I strongly agree with the former opinion.

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In many developingcountries there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

There is no doubt that the great expansion in industry and construction has led to a decrease in the overall quality of air and water, especially in developing countries. This essay will explore some of the problems associated with that drop and propose some of the probable solutions that could minimize their effect.

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Many people say that everyone should be entitlled to free healthcare and that it is the responsibility of the government to provide this for their people. to what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, the concept of universal healthcare has gained significant attention, with many individuals advocating that everyone should have access to free medical services. I strongly believe that healthcare should be a universal right and that it is indeed the duty of governments to provide this essential service.

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Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for the progress of the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For the betterment of the country, many people believe that the authorities should spend more capital on providing science education among the people rather than any other sector. In this contemporary world, it is really difficult to do better things without science-invented cutting-edge technologies, so, I completely agree with the statement.

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Some people believe that children can learn effectively by watching TV and should be encouraged to watch TV both at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Watching television is regarded as an effective study method by the majority because audio-visual information can draw attention and engage interest easily. I disagree with encouraging children to watch TV, although some TV programmes have educational value.

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