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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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pollution is becoming a serious issue in today's world. What are the primary causes of pollution? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, pollution has increased considerably, and the globe is struggling seriously with it. This issue comes with several reasons. However, with a number of solutions, it can be tackled.

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Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today. Why might this be the case? What problems can it cause?

Some juveniles would like to duplicate the manners and dresses of influencers in recent days because they also would like to obtain attention from the public as well. However , this habit has brought some issues like spending more money and competing with each other among young people .

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

It is true that nowadays many people have lost their sense of communication with others in real life, so many experts blame technology. In this essay, I am going to discuss how our relationships have been affected, and if that positive or negative thing.

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the best way to travel ina group led by a tour guide. to waht extent do you agree or disagree

Travelling is the best way to break the monotony of a hectic lifestyle. It is believed by a few denizens that group excursion which is led by the tour operator is more enjoyable owing to proper guidance during the journey. Moreover, it is a great opportunity to visit and gain knowledge about off-beat places. I agree with the given notion and will discuss my viewpoint in forthcoming paragraphs with suitable illustrations.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that whether accepting an unsatisfactory situation or trying to make a change is always a burning topic. However, Is really doing nothing to improve one's life condition the best choice? Although some people believe it is, I strongly argue that point of view.

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Some people think that shops should not be allowed to sell food or drinks that are scientifically proven to be bad for people's health. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that unhealthy foods or drinks should be banned by stores because of valid scientific evidence. I totally agree with this idea, as I believe that the drawbacks of these meals are more notable.

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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Today, all around the world we can see there are numerous singers, film stars, and sports stars with talents. However, these occupations are paid according to their talents, but the majority of people hold the view that these entertainers are paid highly. I completely disagree with the aforementioned statement and also there are other jobs that should be paid highly.

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Now a day people using social media to keep in touch with other and we aware of the news do the advantage of this outcome the disadvantage

Nowadays, People are using social media to keep in touch with others, not in traditional ways. It is very efficient and simple for most people. But when we get the advantages of that, consequently, we also lose the benefits of the conventional interaction of human beings.

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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which one do you prefer?

Learning is a never-ending process .Everyone is eager to learn new things nowadays.Some believe it is better to learn by themselves while others are of the view that a coach is needed for learning .This essay analyses this discussion and sees both views.

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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Good health is the primary need of every individual. A heavy portion of a nation's health reserves should be spent on educating the public on well-being concerns and on how to prevent diseases instead of the infrastructure of the health system. I strongly agree with the statement. this essay will argue about the topic and will give a valid conclusion.

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ii. #Health - "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (IELTS 2, AC)

Pandemics and outbreaks are far more dangerous than the most savage wars ever fought.Due to awareness and modern research,the countries have recognized this reality and are investing more in preventive measures and health education.I completely agree with this strategy as if a disease is prevented the people may not have to undergo the suffering,financial,and emotional trauma.

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In the modern world, the image is becoming a more powerful way of communication than the written word To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,photographing and filming are being favoured over written forms of communication.Although such methods are extremely beneficiary.I disagree that they are a predomination overwriting.As,writing in itself is one of the most powerful forms of communication.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years , sugar consumption is increasing rapidly and it is due to many illnesses such as high cholesterol and diabetes. There is a statement that if sugary products can be more expensive , the population may reduce to use of sugar. In my opinion , this is not causing too a big difference. In this essay , I will discuss why I do not agree with this idea.

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Nowadays, many familiar have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while other think child care centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years working parents have had to devote the most time to working. In this regard, some debates are held about whether relatives like grandparents should look after children or child care centres. I side with those parents who think childcare institutions are a better place for children to spend time in which I will discuss both views in detail as follows:

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ii. #Health - "Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? (IELTS 2, AC)

A huge percentage of the nation's funds must be redirected from treatment to health education expenditure and preventative measures. I totally agree with this statement as the old maxim says prevention is better than cure.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more importnant environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly, in today's fast-paced world, the environmental problem is one of the major problems. People hold varying opinions regarding the environment. Some folks believe that deforestation is the biggest issue of the climate while others think that there are many other important problems which are affecting natural habitats badly. In my opinion, besides desertification, there are many other environmental issues also.

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2.It was suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV and a fridge. Do you think the disadvantages of such a development outweigh advantages?

It is true that almost everyone wants a car, a TV and a fridge as some of the basic essentials of a good lifestyle. Despite the benefits, I believe that in the long-term view, these are outweighed by the disadvantages.

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Some people believe that old buildings in cities should be restored while other say that they should be demolished and new buildings should be built instead. discuss both sides and your opinion

Some individuals think that old structures in Cities ought to be preserved however others believe that new property should construct and old buildings should be torn down . Although those old goods should preserve which are still in good condition

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We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we cannot trust journalist. What do you think? What qualities do you think a successful journalist should have?

In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about how citizens can absorb insights through the internet. However, whether we should or should not trust the reporter and their news stories is a controversial issue. From my perspective, I partly agree with the statement and I am content that we could have faith in the latest news, this essay will discuss what inner traits are possessed by a successful reporter.

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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in, To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned that the foundation of society has been personal greed and selfishness. Some people state that we should restore the morals and values of tradition in the past including the behavior of the young generation with their parents as well as ancestors, and the attitudes of individuals toward the public. This change can lead to a better community. I am inclined to agree with this assertion.

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