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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that it is better to separate genders in schools. Others believe mixed classes benefit the boys and girls more. Both systems have some advantages and disadvantages, but anyway it will affect your education and your social life after school.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skill. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is a mandatory thing that people must have to train a framework of thinking. There is an opinion that every education level from primary schools until universities is busier giving facts to students rather than practising practical skills. To my view, regarding the curriculum in my country, the opinion is very relevant. I will explain two points of view which are the tight curriculum and companies’ preferences to attest to my argument.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before what are the primary causes and what are effects of this epidemic?

In today's world, in spite of the fact that we have a more advanced medical care system, obesity is still a major concern among people than before. This is due to the fact that they maintain unhealthy lifestyles, which could have a major negative impact on their health. This essay will further explain how and will give a logical conclusion.

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In many countries, plastic containers have become more common than ever and are used by many food and drink companies. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Using plastic containers for various cooking products has become ubiquitous in recent decades. Though this has potential drawbacks for the environment, I believe it does not outweigh the benefits to businesses and individuals.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The recent developments in the standards of life make many people have many choices to make. This improvement occurs as a result of new technological inventions, which make people's lives much easier. Thus, many options are available, that facilitate our activities. I wholeheartedly agree that we have more alternatives than before.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

With the rise of music in today’s world, some people opine that it is a representation of bringing people from various cultures and ages together. From my perspective, I completely agree with this opinion and believe that it gains huge benefits to everyone. In the following paragraphs, the reason to support my agreement will be outlined.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it?

A highly controversial issue today relates to the increased unemployment of highly skilled graduates and its causes. In this essay, I am going to discuss the different points of view and then explain what could be done about the aforementioned dilemma.

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If parents want their children to succeed in the future, which of the following things should they teach them? How to be patient

to raise children inappreciably is an, extremely important, task for the parents to be done in the right way. Personally, I feel, to become calm is a, most useful, the thing we can teach our offspring. I feel this way for two reasons, for calmness, and for better understanding, which I will explore in the following essay.

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Some parents think it is good to give their children mobile phones ,while others disagree.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to a few parents providing children with a mobile phone is a good idea, however other guardians do not agree with this scenario. In this essay, I will be discussing both of these aspects thoroughly.

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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly, mobile phones have become a necessity rather than a luxury. Certain sections of society believe that modern technologies like cell phones are having a detrimental impact on their users by dramatically affecting their social life. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this notion because of the following reasons mentioned in the forthcoming paragraphs supported with examples.

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some people believe that technology in education can be a bone for students. Other people believe that it just create distraction. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary world, life has become sophisticated and easier with the advancements in technology. Education, one among many aspects, has significantly changed the way students are taught by schools. While some people opine that the change can sway the students from concentrating on their studies, I firmly believe that it can be used to enhance their knowledge by imposing the controls on the usage of the Internet which is a double edge sword. The following paragraphs will elaborate on both views with lucid examples.

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Theme 1: Environment. In modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food or use animal products, for instance, clothing and medicines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

From the primitive time, animals have played a significant role in people's life: their meats are supplies of food, and their fur and bones for blothing and medicines. However, with the dramatic development of technology, we are gradually independent of animals for life's activities. Some people belive that, in the future, it is no longer necessary to exploit animals for human's purpose. I totally agree with this viewpoint since we can eliminate our reliance by using alternative products, which are not animal - related.

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children

Currently, kids spend so much time on television than they usually do, due to this, decreasing the time they spend on other things. In my view, I suggest activities like spending quality time with friends, participating in sports, and learning a new skill should be incorporated into their homes.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The young generation should be prepared to solve obstacles when they turn into adults. Certain people argue that children who come from poor families would be better at solving issues compared to those who grow up in richer families. In my opinion, however, I strongly agree with the statement given.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of people everywhere in the world struggle with their health because they consume too many unhealthy meals. The government believes that maybe it is good to increase the taxes on those unhealthy meals to protect its citizens from their impact. I totally agree with this statement and I will try to explain in my essay why I think so.

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A balanced diet is the most effective way to stay healthy To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A balanced diet is a meal that contains all the six recommended classes of foods in the right proportion which includes, protein, carbohydrates, mineral salts, vitamins, fat and oil with water. It is regarded as the best way of maintaining a good and adequate healthy lifestyle.I strongly agree because it improves individual well-being and it makes one live long.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at increasing sale. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

The question of whether ads influence our lives or not remains to be answered. It is believed by some that marketing is immensely effective at enhancing the sales rate, while others think advertising is widely familiar up to an extent that no longer attracts our focus. This essay will reflect upon both ideas and give my opinion.

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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether going abroad as part of the curriculum will have merits and drawbacks. In this essay, I am going to examine the aforementioned topic from both points of view and then explain why I believe sending students to other countries for further education is more beneficial than its downside.

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In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved

In today´s world, where cities are becoming highly populated, it is quite frequent not to know who lives next door leading to a less cooperative city environment . This essay will explore the reasons for such an issue, and suggest ways to tackle them.

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Some people think children should do extra-classes after school. Others disagree and say they should play sports outside their school hours. What is your opinion on this? Suggest healthy ways for children to develop.

It is a contentious debate. Children are the future of the nation. certain individuals think that youngsters should do extra classes after school. while, others disagree say,youth should do some physical activities after the academy. I agree with the latter statement and I will elucidate both standpoints and draw to reasonable opinion.

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