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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

Nowadays it is common for riders and drivers to travel on the same road and cyclists have to obey all the same rules, which has led to the high cyclist fatalities rate every year. Fortunately, there are some effective measures that can be carried out to mitigate the unpleasant situation.

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Some people say the most important thing about being rich is that it gives back or helps the poor. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are without doubt plenty of ways for the rich to use their money. One of the most popular ways among the public is to give back to society. As far as I am concerned, I agree with all my heart that wealthy people should use their money to help out the needed community.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this rapid changing ,world women have played an important role in shaping our lives. For 50 years women have completely changed compared to the past in each and every matter from a grassroots level. But today's society is not ready to accept women progressing. Discussing this will throw light on a such crucial topic.

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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. As many as two thirds of children are now obese. schools have a responsibility to minitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. to what extent do you agree with this statement?

Child obesity is an evil problem in the young generation. In Australia, child obesity is becoming increasingly problematic. Almost 33% youngers are suffering from overweight. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of schools to keep eye on what their students eat and what is the range of their exercise. This essay will discuss why I completely disagree with this statement because schools have nothing to do with someone's diet and exercise schedule.

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In conclusion, despite the wide range of consistent options available for consumers, the rise of corporate power is damaging generally. It is therefore important for individual nations to curb this trend when possible.

Nowadays, obesity growing percentage stressing the health care system. Some people consider that involving more activity at schools will be the best key to solving this problem. In my opinion, physical lessons are important but besides a good diet and awareness.

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Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems. Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

The controversial topic concerning overpopulation of urban areas has led to many problems and never fails to attract public attention. There has been a heated debate on whether it can provide complications to our society or not. In this essay, I shall elaborate on the issues and solutions of this trend before deducing a proper conclusion.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Going abroad and migrating to a country with a different language to our mother tongue can create severe social and practical problems.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, mankind does not get exercise regularly, not only during working hours but also in their spare time. Which can lead to health-related issues. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons for this issue and recommend a few solutions to that.

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These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom teaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

The recent quarantine has moved many parts of our lives into the internet space, with no exception in education. It is argued by some that online learning lets students learn more flexibly and saves time. Nevertheless, others think that a shortage of socialization and the possibility of distractions are harmful. In my opinion, while online classes are great from a short-time perspective, conventional learning is essential for students.

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Art is considered an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture .Do you think it is important for children to be taught art?Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on arts rather than other subject .

Art is considered a symbolic representation of a country and its diversity .I see an eye-to-eye notion that learning art plays a crucial aspect in one's life.Although focusing on a single subject ,art might adhere to the overall development of the child.Both the answers are elaborated further.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

A few authorities demand their employees to be in touch at any time, regardless their day of rest. Although company will pay you more for the extra time and effort, I believe, disadvantages outweigh advantages that, the leisure time with family gets reduced and employees will be more frustrated.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage marriage partner.Discuss both system.

It is no surprise that in several nations; weddings are being fixed by the caretakers while another group of schools acclaimed that individuals should select their own spouse. Hence, apart from my ,,opinion both viewpoints are elaborated further.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

After the manufacturing boom utilizing of different natural materials soared. As a result, the number of woods subsided dramatically due to deforestation which led to the extinction of various species and loss of biodiversity. This essay will point out primary causes as well as come up with some solutions to the problem.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some believe that commercials motivate people to gain items, as well as others, argue advertising is so normal and people do not put many alerts on them. In my opinion, advertising is a very good way to encourage someone to buy an item. Firstly, I will show how blurbing is helpful for good marketing and ,secondly I will demonstrate how advertising becomes common and reduce people's attention on that item.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

In recent times, multiple species lose their natural habitats and are becoming more endangered due to multiple factors such as urban development, deforestation and illegal hunting. These phenomenons impact negatively nature's balance in the long term. In my opinion, I believe that it is crucial to protect these creatures in all coats. Why is it important to do so and what solutions can be done to stop this problem or minimize its damages ?

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International tourism is the world’s biggest industry. Unfortunately, this trend often causes tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Agree or disagree

While the tourism industry is known as one of the important elements in the global economy, unfortunately, cultures have not been introduced to other societies and it causes people to face hardships. I agree with this opinion due to the fact that not only some individuals do not appreciate other traditions but also they do not understand each other.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

It has been argued that These days a larger number of people prefer to have their own businesses instead of working for another corporate or organization. In this essay, I will describe my opinion about why such a new trend has started and also some of its possible drawbacks.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Making decisions is an important feature of human behaviour. Some individuals think that if children decide about their routine tasks by themselves, they probably become like people who are just concerned about their own needs. However, others think that children should make decisions about matters. In my opinion, making decisions by children makes them independent individuals in society, but families have an essential role in developing the power of choice of their children by teaching them to make decisions in other types of matters in addition to daily routines.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether parents should permit the youngsters to decide their daily matters around them has caused a heated debate. Some people think that children will be selfish in the future if they have decisions on everything on their own. In my opinion, I think the advantages of making own decisions overweigh the disadvantages, we should encourage and teach children to be independent.

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Recent developments in technology have made the T.V screen so live that people not need to go for any live performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Due to the recent improvements in technology, programs on televisions have been shown with high resolution and so close to reality. Furthermore, this change makes individuals become reluctant to watch live performances in person. I agree with this opinion due to the fact that it is much cheaper and more convenient .

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