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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures.This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Governments struggle with the allocation of resources in order to provide goods and services to communities. Especially, Wealthy Countries allocate an important part of their budgets to health. The emergence of different diseases because of contamination of the environment and improvement of the average age of individuals bring extra charges to the country's budget. The main purpose of every community is to reduce payment for health. Therefore, they support activities to produce new technologies and methods. Although some believe education can help governments to improve wellness, I consider there are more spaces to fill.

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Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The disparity in salary is present in every profession. It is believed that professionals like doctors and teachers should get higher pay in comparison to sportsmen and actors. This essay will explain in detail why they should be paid more than others.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Hunger is still a solid concern especially in poor countries ,notwithstanding, all the actions made by different groups. There are some potential reasons and certain proposed ways out regarding this phenomenon which I will discuss now.

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Nowadays, we can see definite sign of surplus production in almost every industry sector and thus is leading to environmental damage. What is some possible solution to this situation?

In recent years, the products which are not used anymore exist almost all industry fields and are on the way to destroying the environment. There are some beneficial solutions to the mentioned issue.

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Some employers of er their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs, believing that this will make their staf healthier and thus more ef ective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so. Consider the arguments from both aspects of this possible debate, and reach a conclusion.

It is frequently argued by a number of owners that if they will give subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs to their workers, this will help them to be healthier and more active in employment. While others think the reverse. However, this essay will try to repute the debates from both views of this possible argument, and give a finality.

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The ease of international travel and the spread of various kinds of mass media all over the world have made it more possible than ever for people to know how other people live in other countries. Do the advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, there is a great surge in the present technology. People are using this development to travel around the world and use social media for communication purposes around the world. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages and then we will see whether the advantages overweigh the disadvantages or not.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school, while others think it is a waste of time. Dicuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some argue that an art class is crucial for youngsters at school, while others neglect its impact. It is a common belief that art is not necessary for primary school as fundamental knowledge is more important. However, I firmly believe that learning about art is more advantageous due to having creativity and mental development.

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Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live, while others believe they should choose the way themselves. Discuss these both points of view and give your opinion?

Nowadays the power of authority to change the way individuals live has been controversial. Some groups manifest that governments with politics are the ones who should change the quality of life of their people while there is another group who believe they should choose the way themselves. In this essay, I will dive into those 2 statements giving some approaches to the responsibility of both groups.

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Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

Some people may argue that zoos are not the best place for wild animals, while others may claim that they are great shelters. Both sides bear merits and demerits. In this essay, both opinions will be discussed in addition to my personal view.

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Some people think that it is an individual responsibility to take care of an environment but others think it is government's job to do so. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

God has created the natural home in abundance consequently-called environment for both animals and humans to live without any objections. All the living beings have been enjoying the nature home freely on the contrary rare rarest ones have thought of taking care of it. Moreover, a number of human beings are in the view that it is every single person's job to look after the conservation and preservation of forests whereas other people are in the opinion that it is the regime's job to take the initiative of the responsibilities. However, I feel that it is every individual's duty and act as a catalyst to help politics in preserving and protecting the working environment.

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A growing number of people feel that animal should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Animals have been dominated by human beings from prehistory to the present day. Many people believe that this would be against their rights, while there is a group of people who contend that human is prioritized over other species. Thereby, to benefit from them in many industries such as medicine and food would be sensible. Personally, I feel that all the creatures in the world have equal rights and we should respect them.

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The trend of increasing tourism causes environmental problems in many parts of the world. What are the main causes of pollution it creates? What can be done to reduce it?

In this day and age, an increasing number of people are concerned about the hazards of environmental pollution that international nations are dealing with, due to tourism becomes more popular. There are some main motives to justify this issue and a number of measures should be taken to deal with environmental problems.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a public debate today over an advertisement. Some argue that advertising is extremely successful at influencing us to buy things, but others set forth a totally different argument about the issue of advertising can not encourage them to pay notice to it. I agree with those who believe that advertising nowadays is even more command than in the past.

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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As traffic accidents on road transport of goods have dramatically increased, many suggest that testing drivers yearly is the best solution to ameliorate the safety aspects. While I agree this is a reasonable attempt, it is not the best, and other approaches should be considered.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that learning a foreign language can be useful just for travelling or working. Others, however, say that numerous reasons can exist for an individual to learn a new language. I agree with the second point of view, and I believe there are several crucial reasons that can make people interested in being bilingual.

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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative social development?

Due to globalization, many languages are currently disappearing at a considerable rapid speed. Some scientists have predicted that there will only be a language spoken by all human races in the future. Even though people might benefit from only needing to learn and speak a language, in my opinion, this is a negative social development.

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Some Young People are leaving the countryside to live in towns and cities, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

Nowadays, youth want to live in developed zones for the reason that there are no available jobs and perspectives in the countryside, as a result, youth are leaving all old people alone. That can be a cause of several problems,

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many places in the world, children are involved in various types of employment. Some would argue that this is utterly wrong, while others hold the view that this is a good thing because it prepares them for their future. While others claim that this badly affects children's education, I would argue that working at a younger age will build their personality.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a widely held belief that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society however, there is a strong counterargument that school is the right place to teach children. I believe that both the home and learning environment will teach youngsters how to become good citizens and that there is a shared responsibility towards the child to make this happen.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of education. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion.

At the present time, computers have been becoming a meaningful part of the educational field. The central theme of the essay is to find out some advantages and disadvantages. However, I am inclined to believe that people should try to keep a balance not to get several adverse consequences.

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