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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Art is considered an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture .Do you think it is important for children to be taught art?Do you think children should be encouraged to focus on arts rather than other subject .

Art is considered a symbolic representation of a country and its diversity .I see an eye-to-eye notion that learning art plays a crucial aspect in one's life.Although focusing on a single subject ,art might adhere to the overall development of the child.Both the answers are elaborated further.

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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

A few authorities demand their employees to be in touch at any time, regardless their day of rest. Although company will pay you more for the extra time and effort, I believe, disadvantages outweigh advantages that, the leisure time with family gets reduced and employees will be more frustrated.

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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage marriage partner.Discuss both system.

It is no surprise that in several nations; weddings are being fixed by the caretakers while another group of schools acclaimed that individuals should select their own spouse. Hence, apart from my ,,opinion both viewpoints are elaborated further.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

After the manufacturing boom utilizing of different natural materials soared. As a result, the number of woods subsided dramatically due to deforestation which led to the extinction of various species and loss of biodiversity. This essay will point out primary causes as well as come up with some solutions to the problem.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some believe that commercials motivate people to gain items, as well as others, argue advertising is so normal and people do not put many alerts on them. In my opinion, advertising is a very good way to encourage someone to buy an item. Firstly, I will show how blurbing is helpful for good marketing and ,secondly I will demonstrate how advertising becomes common and reduce people's attention on that item.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

In recent times, multiple species lose their natural habitats and are becoming more endangered due to multiple factors such as urban development, deforestation and illegal hunting. These phenomenons impact negatively nature's balance in the long term. In my opinion, I believe that it is crucial to protect these creatures in all coats. Why is it important to do so and what solutions can be done to stop this problem or minimize its damages ?

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International tourism is the world’s biggest industry. Unfortunately, this trend often causes tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Agree or disagree

While the tourism industry is known as one of the important elements in the global economy, unfortunately, cultures have not been introduced to other societies and it causes people to face hardships. I agree with this opinion due to the fact that not only some individuals do not appreciate other traditions but also they do not understand each other.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

It has been argued that These days a larger number of people prefer to have their own businesses instead of working for another corporate or organization. In this essay, I will describe my opinion about why such a new trend has started and also some of its possible drawbacks.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Making decisions is an important feature of human behaviour. Some individuals think that if children decide about their routine tasks by themselves, they probably become like people who are just concerned about their own needs. However, others think that children should make decisions about matters. In my opinion, making decisions by children makes them independent individuals in society, but families have an essential role in developing the power of choice of their children by teaching them to make decisions in other types of matters in addition to daily routines.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether parents should permit the youngsters to decide their daily matters around them has caused a heated debate. Some people think that children will be selfish in the future if they have decisions on everything on their own. In my opinion, I think the advantages of making own decisions overweigh the disadvantages, we should encourage and teach children to be independent.

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Recent developments in technology have made the T.V screen so live that people not need to go for any live performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Due to the recent improvements in technology, programs on televisions have been shown with high resolution and so close to reality. Furthermore, this change makes individuals become reluctant to watch live performances in person. I agree with this opinion due to the fact that it is much cheaper and more convenient .

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some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world, subject like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both this views and give your own opinion.

There is a controversial discussion about which subject should be of the greatest importance in school curriculum. Some people believe that learning History is a significant course in school, while others argue that, nowadays, some subjects such as science and technology are more valuable than learning about nations who lived in the past. In my opinion, science-based subjects are essential and should be a top priority for pupils.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being sellf-employed?

In the modern world, being self-employed is a tempting opportunity because of creativity and more profit. Most people especially youngsters prefer to start their own business rather than work in any institution from nine to five. This essay will explain the reason behind this and the drawbacks related to this issue.

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some people think reading stories in books is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children are becoming addicted to technology. From playing video games on computers to watching tv shows, they are gradually giving up on books. In my opinion, I am completely convinced that nothing replaces reading novels and stories on real paper.

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Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.

It is often argued by some people that animal experiments should not be done while from others' perspectives, they should be done. This essay will discuss both issues and will try to give an excellent end.

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In cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours. There is no longer sense of community. What do you think are the causes of this problem and suggest methods to solve it?

There has been a phenomenon that an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours. I think there are some reasons and methods that can solve it.

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young people who commit crimes should be treated the same as adults by the authorities. to what extend do you agree or dis agree?

Nowadays, the young commit serious crimes as adults. In the following, some people think that the court should apply the same verdict as mature people to young people. I disagree with this opinion and I believe the youth need to be treated differently.

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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of difficulties of living in city. How can government make urban life better for everyone?

Nowadays the number of rural-to-urban migrations seems to culminate considerably to attain a distinguished occupation as well as improve their activity qualification. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss several organisations' drawbacks and depict some effective strategies which can be adopted by politicians to advance metropolis facilities.

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Some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, Others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not well at schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It is often argued that universities should provide places for people with high marks, whilst others disagree with the statement and say that all universities must accept all ages student whether they do not do well at school. This essay agrees with the second statement and this essay will discuss both points of view based on my personal opinions that can be given below.

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some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to secure a good job. Others believe that employers value work experience more than a university degree. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

At some point in their lives, all people face the challenge of how to enter the labour market. They need to decide whether to study at a university or to gain hands-on experience. In my opinion, the decision genuinely depends on the type of job one desires.

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