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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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The benefits of computers in modern society far outweigh the disadvantages. What do you think? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

There has been a controversy about whether the benefits of computers outweigh the disadvantages. I agree with this argument, and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The progress of a country in different ways is debatable. Most governments believe that improvement in the economy is their most important achievement. While Some argue that other improvements are equally important for a country's progress. In this essay, I will discuss both arguments in detail and also I will give my opinion that why other types of progress are equally important for a country's overall improvement.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most people do their shopping online. There is an argument that this leads to the closure of stores in cities and towns in future. In this essay, I will share some perspectives on this issue and my point of view.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people？

A number of museums and historical buildings are an important part of cultural heritage, but they are mainly visited by tourists rather than residents, for which there are several reasons and some measures can be taken to address this issue.

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Nowadays scientists and tourists can go to remote natural environments such as the South Pole. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Advances in technology and transportation have made it possible for researchers and travellers to have access to remote natural environments, where they can learn more about the world, which there are both advantages and disadvantages.

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The position of women has changed a great deal in many societies over the past 50 years. But these societies cannot claim to have achieved gender equality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, there has been debate over the position of females. Some people deem that woman has changed their status in society in the previous five decades, communities have not accomplished the fact of gender equality yet. I completely agree with this statement and this essay will discuss my opinion in detail.

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There are many reasons that can mortivate a person to stay for the same company. Some believe that money is the main factor. Do you agree or disagree ?

Employers are always seeking ways to motivate their employees to attract to the company for long. Many believe that money is the most significant cause of that. Despite different views on this, I disagree with this argument because I believe that ability to keep a work-life balance and the career progression of a job play more crucial roles in the decision to work for a particular company.

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According to one survey, the life expectancy of people is increasing in developed countries. What problem will this cause for individuals and society?

According to one study , it is shown that in developed countries people are assumed to live more than before .in my opinion, this situation has both disadvantages and advantages that depend on how they use their lifetimes and it has some drawbacks. Namely, people have to deal with more difficulties and sadness in living , and society forces them with more problems in taking care of elderly individuals . However, this has some advantages that will be discussed in the following essay.

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Some people spend most of their lives and living close to where they were born. what might be the reasons for this? what are the advantages and disadvantages?

Many individuals have their own personal choice for living and staying throughout their life. There might be many reasons such as bonding they have and awareness of the area. This Essay will discuss some of the positives and negatives of being in the same place.

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Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly by a high percentage of young people going to universities. Others argue that it only leads to a higher unemployment rate. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

It is debatable whether it is truly beneficial for a country when a huge proportion of students attend universities. Some people claim that it is, without a doubt, a positive phenomenon whereas others hold the opposite opinion. This essay will discuss perspectives on both sides, and why I believe it is more crucial to maintain the quality of university education instead of granting certificates to all young citizens.

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Many people believe that cloths or costumes are more responsible for the occurrence of rape. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, rape cases are increasing throughout the world, Some believe that the primary reason for this is due to the colorful dress which is worn by the victim. I disagree with this statement because rape can happen due to personal revenge and a lack of awareness in society.

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Some think individuals should support themselves after retirment, while others believe the government should be responsible for providing them providing them with financial assistance. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Being supported is crucial for people after pension. As we know, after long years of working, a steady income is very important to provide basic needs such as shelter, nourishment, and medical assistance.Some believe supporting elders is not necessary, but others consider financial aid a requirement for a sustainable community. I believe that helping individuals is a necessity because we need their experiences to create strong communities.

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In developing countries, rural children have less access to education.some people say that this problem is solved bquestoiy providing teachers and schools. Other think that computer and internet should be provided. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern governments, rural students have less permission for education than urban children.Society believes that this question is solved by providing new schools and teachers. However, others say that the internet and computer should be secured. From my point of view, providing new equipment is better than the first opinion.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays , a few numbers of people think that global warming is a big issue and we can solve it but others believe that it is not important to life so this essay illustrates this statement and give my opinion.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

"Health is Wealth"; it is important to be healthy for everybody. A healthy person is rich compared to a wealthy person. To be healthy is very important to follow an admirable diet plan. Accompanied by a good diet, exercise also plays a crucial role in everybody's healthy lifestyle. In this essay, we will discuss the persons who follow a healthy lifestyle in my country and then see some reasons for this matter.

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Some people think that younger people are not suitable for important positions in government. Others think that it will be a good idea for younger people to take on these positions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it seems that there is a commonsense that leaders in government departments are younger than ever before. However, whether the young should take charge of a vital position has caused a lot of disputes. In my opinion, although older people may be more experienced and have better leadership, I still tend to support younger people to bear such responsibility.

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large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is opinion on this? do you think this is good or bad change?

Nowadays, large shopping centres pop up every now and then, inside these are mostly big retail chains shops, instead of traditional family shops which are less likely to afford high rents and open seven days a week. It has been contentious whether the relentless sweep by these huge shopping centres and chain stores is beneficial, in this essay I am going to shed some light on it.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. what are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

In recent decades, working started to occupy long hours daily, making it hard to find a balance between life and work. Even though achieving this is the main aim of many people but only a few succeed. So what are the possible reasons behind this problem ? And what are the solutions to overcome it ?

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Bringing the community together with the help of music is debatable. Some people state that music can bring people of different life phases and cultures closer to each other. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons why I partially agree with this notion.

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ordinary people try to copy famous people either magazine or watching tv.why do they do this?do you think its a good idea to copy famous people?

Mass media, such as T.V and magazines, show the lifestyle and behaviour of celebrities making people more familiar with them. Hence, this essay is going to shed light on its merits and demerits.

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