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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people believe that children learn better when they are placed in classes with children of similar academic abilities. Others believe that children learn better when they are in classes with children representing a diverse range of academic abilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Nowadays, educational standards are playing various significant importance in promoting the learning efficiency of a pupil. Yet ,there remains a controversial debate as to whether classifying admission with an equal level of potential in a class is more effective in the learning processes or making a challenging condition considering youngsters with different capabilities. This essay will discuss the proposed topic from both sides of view with some detailed explanations.

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Some people say that universities should be concerned with educating people so that they will have wide general knowledge and be able to consider important matters from an informed viewpoint. Other people say that universities should simply train students to do the jobs required by society, and not concern themselves with broader issues.

Certain individuals argue that institutions of higher education must educate learners broadly to understand wider issues in societies whereas the other view is that these institutions must specialise in matters related to specific work requirements. I agree partly with both views although I am persuaded to conform more to the first. This position is justified in the essay below.

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Some people think that hardworking and determination are the key factors for being successful in life. Other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Few folks think that, hardship and devotions are the major influence on being successful in life. On the other hand, another community feel about other factor circumstance are crucial instead of this factor. In this ,essay we are going to look at both points including my opinion.

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modern scientist need specialist in certain fields not in others. some people think that government should pay university fees for students who study subjects that are needed by society. those who choose to study less relevant subjects should not receive government funding. would the advantages of such an educational policy outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no doubt that universities play a crucial role in educating societies. However, while some believe that this education should be geared towards subjects that may be of practical use in our future and government only suppose those, I agree with those who argue that one's choice of subject in school only should lie with student and government support no matter whatever their choices are.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects.Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and Techology are more important than History.

It is argued by some thatو nowadays, with exciting subjects like Science and Technology there is no space for other subjects such as History; Whilst,many believe that it is still one of the most important parts of being educated. I am in favour of still regarding History as one of the serious topics because it has an efficient role in different sectors such as trade.

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Most modern families have both parents working, and as a result, children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can this cause?

In recent years, due to coming from families, which both parents are employed, children are left alone more than in the past. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons cause this issue and then explain the problems associated with this.

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Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In the modern world, a wide range of individuals prefer driving to the destination rather than all other ways ranging from walking and cycling to using public transport. I strongly believe the demerits of driving outweigh the merits. This essay will discuss both positive and negative aspects of using private cars.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people believe that the most vital environmental issue is the extinction of natural creatures, others suggest that there are many other serious issues that need immediate attention such as air pollution. From my point of view, I agree with the latter view and think that air pollution is the problem that needs to be fixed before any others.

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Nowadays it is common for people to get married in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

There has been a rise in the number of people who get married in their thirties and beyond. In my opinion, this is a beneficial practice because at this age most people are financially stable and emotionally mature to raise a family properly and ensure a better future for them.

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Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

As technology had progressed enough,it became an inevitable part of our daily routine. A plethora of people , as well as I,tend to believe that such an invention as social media affects both members of society and the whole population in an unbeneficial way. Below I will explore this highly interesting and thought-provoking topic, underlying such factors as deception and bullying.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message ?

Evidence suggests that based on some cultures it is said to children by attempting hard anything can be achieved. While there are many benefits to this matter, there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, both pons and cons will be discussed.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their home rather than buying what are the advantages of renting a home?

It is not a secret that commonly every person,albeit not always, somehow should manage to either purchase or rent accommodations. A plethora of people would rather opt for the second way of living, commenting that there is a wider array of advantages. Below I will explore this highly interesting and thought-provoking dilemma.

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Some people consider sports to be their career in the society. For others it is mostly a work out to stay fit. Discuss both views snd give your opinion

Different strokes for different folks. A good sport should be a source of entertainment both for the participants as well as for the spectators. Certain people see sports as a means of earning a living. However, for some other individuals playing games are the best way of physical exercise. This essay shall intend to delve into both views and will elaborate on my perspective in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. What's the reasons? How to solve this issue?

It is true that diverse species of biology are disappearing in this world. While there are several reasons for this alarming trend, steps can be taken to mitigate this problem.

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The internet has transferred the way information is shared and consumed. But it has also created problem that did not exist before. what are the most serious problems associated with th internet and what solutions can you suggest.

Advanced technology has changed the way news is received and reciprocated by the audience,sometimes creating issues in the society not noticed before.The main problems faced due to the internet is online gaming platforms without age restriction and unlimited access to the sites are not advisable to young people.The solution for this is to make the user share his details including age and ban the sites deemed not fit for them.In my view,such restrictions will monitor mental health as well reduce the frequency of time spent watching it.

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"Prevention is better then cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

It is often argued that is better to prevent than cure. In my opinion, this statement is true. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss why I believe that prevention is a better investment after all.

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Many people believe that playing games and watching tv programs is beneficial but for others it does not improve mental ability of children. to what extent do you agree or disagree

The majority of individuals perceive that indoor and outdoor activities such as sports, television etc. are of utility, however, the rest of the population think that it hampers the cognitive development of the kids. As far as my opinion is concerned, I decisively agree with the former because it leads to intellectual stimulation among the youngsters. I will be elucidating my point of view in subsequent crumbs of writing.

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Today’s food travels thousands of miles before it reaches customers. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Owing to modern technological advancement, people nowadays are able to consume food which either imported from foreign nations or other cities. Even though this circumstance has some benefits , I still conceive that its shortcomings are far more immense.

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Some people say that the best way to imporve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, sports facilities are essential for people to enhance people’s health. Some people argue that more investment in these facilities more benefits can bring for citizens’ health. This may be true to some extent, however, I contend that it would be better if the government offers other proactive measures to tackle this problem.

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universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Gender equality in education and career is a commonly discussed topic amongst many. However, in this essay, I will be talking about the education sector and how I agree with the fact that an equal number of boys and girls are to be admitted for every subject taught at universities.

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