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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion .

Nowadays, due to the anthropogenic, the number of wildlife has been substantially decreased over the periods. Therefore, the policy and measures to preserve them from danger need to be implemented. However, it is debatable whether all wild animals should be protected, or we should protect just some of them. In this essay, both views will be elaborated on in detail before my perspective will be reached.

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Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives.what are the reasons of this trend? How can this problem be overcome?

In this contemporary span, working hours are increasing and becoming a hurdle for individuals. Strata of population opine that maintaining equality between professional and personal life is really difficult. There are multifarious reasons for this trend such as increasingly working hours and competitive jobs however there are a plethora of solutions to curb issues like fixed working hours and increasing minimum wages.

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Some people think that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government instead of private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

Scientific research has a significant impact on humanity’s development. Some individuals believe that governments, not private companies, should conduct and control research activities. From my perspective, I think scientific studies should be involved by both the authorities and private businesses.

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Employers should focus on personal qualities over qualifications and experience when choosing someone for a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

A certain number of the public believe that the recruiters should evaluate the candidate characteristics instead of looking at his abilities and experiments to recruit.I partially agree on some points but strongly disagreed because of several reasons and will discuss them as detailed in the following paragraphs.

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People aim to keep a balance between their work and other parts of their lives, but few people achieve it. What are the problems of trying to achieve this goal and how can these problems be overcome?

Only a few people have been able to maintain a good work-life balance. This essay will be discussing some of the problems such as increased long hours at work and also the pressure from work. This essay will also be suggesting some solutions to these issues, like defining accurate work hours and also hiring more hands to reduce the pressure of the tasks.

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Some people spend large amount of money to buy tickets for sports or cultural events. Is this a positive or negative development

With the busy lifestyle, nowadays time is extremely rare for everyone going to a movie, cultural or a sports event. As soon as most of us have leisure time, we tend to go out of our homes and try to enjoy the day to the fullest, even though these are highly expensive. From this essay I am going to discuss, what are the significant facts for the development.

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Because of the global economy. Many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era, various kinds of products, used in everyday life, are coming from abroad and be transferred for a long route. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this issue and explain why the advantages do in fact outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people believe that technology has made the lives of workers easier whilst other people disagree. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although some people hold the view that machinery has made it easier for employees to do their work others still disagree with them. In recent times with the advent of the internet, workers tend to work from home and do a lot of research at a greater speed. However, I vehemently agree that technology has made it easy for those who are gainfully employed to complete their tasks on time.

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is perceived that the effective way to remedy issues relating to the environment is to increase the pump price of gas for vehicles generally. Although some people believe that this move would resolve the environmental crisis, however, I vehemently disagree with that statement. This essay will elaborate that petroleum products such as fuel is not the major cause of climate disasters and increasing the cost price will not yield their intended purpose.

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Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

A good community spirit can be generated in real life by immense efficient methods including investing in local facilities, like parks. From my perspective, I completely agree with this statement since it will bring about a pleasing society in the country as well as I will offer other sensible measures of this in the essay below.

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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person.

It is human nature that people pursue their goals. Some people claim that the only factor to define whether a person is successful is his wealth. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea as I believe that one's success depends on if one can achieve his goal or not.

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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion.

Should physical education be included in school's compulsory curriculum or be an optional subject has been argued by society and parents. Some of them believe in the health and well-being that sport could bring, while others want to well spend those classes for the preparation of exams. I am more inclined to the benefits that it and will elaborate my view in this essay.

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Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In this day and age, with the advent of modern society, there has been debatable between living in rural areas and in urban areas. While some people think that it will be easier for us to lead a healthy way of life in the countryside in comparison with living in municipality. According to my knowledge, I firmly believe that people would enjoy health advantages in metropolises.

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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in schools in order tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, obesity has become a concerning issue to tackle not only among children but in adults as well. In addition, obesity brings a lot of health issues that should be diagnosed and treated early else the results would be fatal. The time given on fitness should be utilized well enough for children to live a healthier lifestyle. Although this might be the best way to handle the overweight issue, there seem to be other possible ways to handle.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Living areas seem to be the majority of our adult lives. Some people think that when they grow up, they have to find other places. This essay will explore the positive and negative variables and express my view at the end.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Other believe that some infornation is too important or to valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

A certain number of the public think that it is effective to pass the informative details as can in art research,business and the education system.Others state that limited notes are really knowledgeable and which should exchange as free of cost.In my opinion,points should not keep as a secret while,not detrimental for the public and will discuss more the topic in the following paragraphs.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. discuss both these view and givve your own opinion.

The current social structure is based on their jobs unlike in the past, where many people lived far and isolated without money. Having jobs and money become more common due to urbanization and rapid telecommunication development. Hence, while some people want to keep their jobs even if those jobs give low salaries or a bad working environment due to their fear of losing money and status in society, others prefer to take the risk and look for a better workplace within their favourable condition. However, both views have different reasons and responsibilities to consider, which will be discussed below.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

It is perceived that, in the future, artificially intelligent robots will be doing jobs and replacing the humans in the workforce. While most menial types of occupation will be done by machines, whereas the works which required human touch are unlikely to be taken over. This essay will discuss why few jobs need to be carried out by people.

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Some people belive that children should brought up in cities.Others believes that countryside offers a better environment for children.discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In this modern world bringing up a child in an appropriate way is a sophisticated task,in order to achieve.Some schools of thought say that kids should be grown up in an urban area rather than a rural area.While some folks believe that the opposite of this is the best for the children.I support the latter view and I will discuss both opinions in the following article.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Parents adopt different approaches to discipline the naughty children and smacking is one of the ways. These types of parents think that giving physical punishments to a child can help them to develop good behaviour. This essay will argue that why smacking is necessary for children and should be used moderately.

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