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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say cultural traditions are destroyed when they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others say this is the only way to save such traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Issues and related to cultural traditions are frequently discussed these days. Some people believe that traditional events are destroyed if they turn to be attracting destinations, others criticize and argue that tourism plays an essential role in order to conserve some traditions. Both sides of view will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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People aim to achieve balance between thier work and lives.But few people achive it.

There is absolutely no doubt that in the 21st century , it is quite difficult to adjust their lives and occupation. However , many citizens are trying to balance between their task and resides and some of the individuals are successful in it. The prime hurdles people face is too much workload . One possible solution would be proper time management.

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1. Some people think that it is beneficial for children to do paid work, while others think that it can be harmful for children. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Activities that children involve themselves has a major impact on them. While some people are of the view that doing paid work is beneficial for kids, others are of the view that this could be harmful to youngsters. In this essay, I will be discussing the advantages of part-time jobs for teenagers. There are two primary reasons for this.

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Some people think that a huge amount of time and money is spent on the protection of wild animals and that this money could be better spent on the human population. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

While some people believe that there is a need to expend more money to save extinct animals, others argue that we are wasting money by doing this and should be used in other concerning issues. I completely agree with the former view and in this essay, I will explain my viewpoint effectively.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

It is undeniable that having a nice sleep is necessary for everyone. However, the number of people who could not sleep well is rising from time to time. This essay will discuss what problems that lack of sleep can cause and how individuals can improve their sleep quality.

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Nowadays, students sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals?

We live in an ever-changing world; society is changing in significant ways. A clear example that can be seen is that students wake up for a long time at night in the past. It is an alarming and harmful development for a pupil. There are several reasons for such a situation and also some circumstances which have been resulted due to this issue. In the following paragraph, I will discuss the causes and effects further.

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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Parents around the world have different views about how could minors spend their spare timings. While some argued that these free slots should be dedicated to academic obligations, others mentioned that such action could place extra stress on pupils. In my view, the solution to this dilemma depends on the academic level of the child.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through media. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Many people think that the newspaper is the all-time best way to gather day to day information. On the contrary, in the contemporary days, the new generation is very much fond of digital media and prefer to father knowledge even. This essay will contain both the arguments and be ended with my opinion that I do I prefer digital media for gathering news.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

It is hard to deny that an increasing number of youngsters accounts for the overall population, which tends to impose a financial burden on society. Such a phenomenon leads to an assumption that its weakness outweighs its strength. However, as far as societal progression and well-being are concerned, I firmly believe in the opposite.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better time to be alive than now.

Nowadays, the development of science or innovation in the last century have changed our behaviour and life. It is often argued that the best time to be alive is now. I totally disagree with this opinion because nobody can predict the way of future life.

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some people say that it is the responsibility of individual to save money for their own care after they retire.to what extent do you agree or disagree? some people feel that it is better to save for the future, while others feel that one should spend money to enjoy the present .which view do you support and why?

In this fast-paced world, in order to secure the future fewer populace claim that monthly expenditure should be limited. Whereas, others believe that an individual should expend money to enjoy the current phase of their life. I personally can only partly agree with the aforementioned statement which causes will be discussed in the essay.

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People use computers more extensively these days than ever before, and it is so extensive in our modern world that even children have access to these devices to play games or watch videos. This essay discusses the disadvantages of playing digital games on computer devices by youngsters and suggests some measures to reduce such negative effects.

In the world nowadays , using technological devices such as computers has become increasingly common among people. Moreover, children tend to be addicted to games and videos on computers. I believe that the excessive use of technology by youngsters can have many adverse negative influences on them and there are some special measures which can protect them .

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With the increasing use of and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In this day and age, many machines are able to accomplish the job that people used to do thanks to the increased use and development of new technologies. The following essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the occurring trend of the usage of machinery.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As it is well known, Advertisement is an essential tool in promoting products and services to customers. One may opine that advertisements assist consumers in giving their life an upgrade. I am the other side that agrees that most of the time, advertising persuades target users to buy unnecessary goods. This is due to the pervasive effects of adverts on people’s emotions and youth in the developmental stage using behavioural reinforcement techniques.

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The overuse of natural resources causes an ultimate exhaust of them. People have been using them to be in the swim of new styles such as making new furniture of recent design. This causes a huge harm to the environment. Therefore, the government should discourage people the overuse of these resources. To what extent do you support or oppose the idea?

Nowadays, the case of exhausting resources is becoming more and more serious because of the overuse of these for human purposes. Some arguments show that it has a huge negative influence on the environment and the government should take the action to discourage the overconsumption of natural resources. This essay aims to give some arguments to support the above notice.

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These days,too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine,rather than by following a healthy lifestyle. To what extend do you agree with this statement?

In this present era, community in spite of keeping healthy habits, often depend on healthcare professionals and medications as far as their fitness is concerned. However, I totally disagree with the aforesaid notion as I believe that personal efforts are mandatory to keep oneself fit. In this essay, we will discuss, in the first paragraph, how people can maintain fitness on their own and in the second paragraph, how they can eliminate the hazardous effects of medicine by keeping fitness rituals.

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These day it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, due to globalization and developments in science and technology, people can travel overseas to many countries and regions, however, along with the benefits and profits of tourism, it is also a potential threat to many cultures and the environment. This essay will discuss both views and will conclude whether the pros outweigh the cons.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

These days many people work ridiculously long hours. Consequently, they have hardly any time for fun-filled activities. In my opinion, this development has more demerits than merits.

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

In this contemporary world, people, especially children, tend to use computers a lot . For many people, exposure to computers is harmful to children while others opine the opposite. However, there are both merits and demerits to deciding to do this. In my perspective, letting children use computers for long hours brings more harm than good.

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Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in the city centers while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern society, the proliferation of private cars has put a strain on the transport system and caused traffic congestion. It is often said that introducing restrictions to prohibit car ownership in the city centre is one of the effective methods to alleviate these problems. Meanwhile some people consider this to be impossible to do. Personally, I believe that privately owned vehicles should be banned to drive an efficient transport system.

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