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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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some think the subject of music is not neccesary in primary school, and other practical subjects like science should replace it. what is your opinion?

So many types of lessons are taught in primary school such as art and design, science, music and more. But some people think music is not important as science and other practical subjects. This essay will discuss the necessity of music subject.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

With the improvement in law, there is a sophisticated judicial system to punish those despicable people. However, even if they are penalized heavily by judges, they still tend to perform more crimes after the punishments. In this essay, I will explain why this happens and how to deal with it.

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Tests and examinations are a central feature of school systems in many countries. Do you think the educational benefits of testing outweigh any disadvantages?

In most schools around the world, tests and examinations are required as a procedure to check students' understanding. A question that is often brought up is, 'is it necessary to have a test or exam to test a student's understanding?'. There are several benefits as well as drawbacks that can be discussed.

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Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed ona weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are many jobless individuals around the world, and authorities from various countries are raising this issue on national platforms. While some people consider that on a weekly period, jurisdictions should supply funding to the non-working citizens . I firmly disagree with the statement because this method could pose a serious menace to the economical situation of the country.

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Many manufractured Food and drink products contain high levels of sugar,which causes many health problems.Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to comsume less sugar Do you agree or disagree ?

Sweet taste is involved in the development of several diseases.This may cause by the added sugar in foods or drinks,thus people may be a sweet tooth and are unaware of the serious consequences.

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Mobile phones have changed the way people communicate. Nowadays people cannot live without them if they want to be a part of society. To what extent do you think this is true? Why do you think some people have not adapted to this type of communication?

Nowadays, people rely too much on technology when they communicate with other people. I strongly agree that this situation is happening to our society. In spite of this, there are others who choose not to be dependent on this method of communicating. This essay will discuss both kinds of people.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

In recent years, the rising population is a cause of concern for many countries around the world. Although the government is undertaking several steps to keep the numbers in control, lately things have gone not according to the expectations. This essay will highlight some of the troubles caused by overpopulation and nominates some viable remedies to curb the grave concerns.

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Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been commonly accepted that personal satisfaction is a direct outcome of financial prosperity. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement for the following reasons.

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International sporting events are costly and bring problems to the hosting country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that global-level game events such as the FIFA world cup, Olympics, Cricket, or any other sporting event could create massive expenses along with vivid difficulties for its’ organizing countries. However, on the other hand, those organizers receive significant benefits such as global awareness, recognition, and ticket sale income. Despite a few drawbacks , organisers could gain a significant amount of benefits from those global tournaments , Hence I disagree with the given statement.

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New technology has changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

With the advancement of novel technology, more and more pupils take their pastime on playing video games and computers rather than other activities. Personally, I disagree with this phenomenon. This essay will discuss both sides and provide compelling reasons to sustain my opinion.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or they find the most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Students should focus on each and every subject according to a large number of individuals, while the others are thinking, they can target their favourite and the best-liked topics. Studying a full course gives basic foundation command to grow and build a carrier path. However,liming the syllabus to only a preferred material will make the learning interesting in the early learning period but it will severely restrict the scope of future growth. The forthcoming paragraphs will shed light on both sides of the issue, though I prefer primary education should include as much as possible vital cognition.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people believe that music can space out people of generations and different cultures. From my perspective, I agree with this opinion.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

Even richish land has poor people. Each country has their own ways to manage them but where are they coming from? They definitely do not appear anywhere and the main reasons are capitalism and political policy. Hence, in my opinion, in order to help the poor, we must keep both the reasons in check.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Various controversy has emerged as to whether enjoyment from work or substantial emolument contributes more to a better life. An enjoyable job could bring a sense of happiness into one’s life, while a considerable and stable income has been a fundamental component of high-quality life. This essay will give an insight into both concerns and elaborate on my personal opinion.

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Shopping is now one of the most popular types of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

People always will search for new entertainment in their free time. Nowadays, shopping is the most important choice for young parents and young couples. This phenomenon occurs for some reasons. In this essay, I will mention some of them, and since that, I prefer other activities instead of shopping to spend my free time I will explain my point of view and then conclude.

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It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is controversial whether governments should only help their countries’ citizens or they should also pay attention to people from other countries. While some people support this point of view, I partly disagree with it. In this essay, I will delve deep into both sides of the argument and give out my logical conclusion.

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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology as we know it is one of the leading tools to solve most of the complications in the world and the environment is no exception in that. I can totally agree with the fact that technology does bring subtle disadvantages to nature but mostly it helps in sorting issues in the environment.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

Life has gone through dramatic changes, and the excessive dependency on technology-based devices such as computers, and smartphones becomes a trend among people. I truly believe that technology will play a crucial role in our future daily basis. Technology advances have their own drawbacks that should be addressed.

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There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.

There is increasing development of married couples deciding to be childless. This essay will discuss how this decision will save them money and give them more freedom and how they might also suffer from boredom and might end up living with little to no support system in their old age.

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The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last few years many of the problems young people now experience such as juvenile delinquency arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to take care of their children what extent do you agree or disagree

In this contemporary era, the attitude of females has changed a lot in society as compared to the past. However, many women work professionally and do not prefer to stay at home to take care of their children. Due to this youngsters are indulging in crimes. On the whole, I disagree with this notion but there are few reservations.

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