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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In the past few years, medical care is constantly on the rise, people are gathering experience by taking medical services and long life. This situation has some drawbacks; also has some positive aspects. All these will explore in the ensuring essay.

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Iphone the best phone in the world because it is the most expensive- to what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Undeniably, possessing an iPhone requires a high-end price and other fixing expenses in the future. Thus, some people claim that its function is advantageous than any other kind of a cell phone. However, iPhones are deemed extraordinary in comparison with some famous brands with a large number of users. Personally, I advocate the former opinion and give my explanation as below.

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Nowadays anyone can post news on the internet. As a result, we cannot trust information we read there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to rapid technological development, it became possible for anyone to share any piece of information online with a larger audience. However, it also gave an opportunity for certain people to post fake news in order to cause disinformation among the population. For that reason, I firmly believe that readers cannot trust everything they read online.

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Every civilian should be Mahatma Gandhi to his society. There is no doubt that online education has become a new learning trend. However, while I agree that they also have negative aspects, still I believe that this advanced technology is mainly beneficial to individuals. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.

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With growing populations in cities, more and more people live in homes with little or no outdoor space. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent times, overpopulation in cities causes a variety of problems related to the properties where people live, and one of the trends to make outdoor space or remove it at all is getting higher nowadays. As far as I am concerned, this tendency has a detrimental impact on humanity for reasons that I provide below.

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Task 2 Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Certain concerned citizens believe that prices should be raised to counter the high sugar content in various food and drink products. In my opinion, this solution may have a marginal impact but other reforms would engender greater progress.

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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computer-based technology. How do you think it will change in the future? Is it good for us to rely so much on computers?

It is an irrefutable fact that computer-based technology is altering our lifestyles. Although technological advances are improving lives, human beings are becoming dependent on them. I do believe that technological advances are beneficial on many levels. The following paragraphs will analyze my perspective and discuss the upcoming technological changes.

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Q. Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s ,world many people have different opinions among them in regard to studying in university. Some people think that tertiary education is the best route to get a nice employment, others think developing soft skills are more vital than the former statement. I will completely agree with the first argument and I will discuss both the arguments.

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In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying that sport is popular among all age groups. People are divided in their opinion regarding the importance of psychological and physiological strength in the games. From my point of view, both mental and physical strength plays a major role in an athletes life.

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scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. do you agree or disagree?

According to the argument, that is scientific research should be arranged by a public authority or by the private has provoked a vigorous discussion. Although, with obvious benefits to be guaranteed by the government, I still think that either of them has a partially advantage. So, the issue of the infeasibility of one of them is not existing.

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Some people say that travelling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals think exploring a country is the best way to gain knowledge regarding its culture, whilst some have an opinion that it is not the only way, knowledge can be gained by the inter-web and television. This essay will discuss both the points and give reasons why in my opinion travelling is the most enriching way to know about different cultures and countries.

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Many school children today take part in work experience sessions for short periods of time instead of attending school. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Providing hands-on experience to school children for a short span has become immensely popular these days. Some people criticize these trends while others support them. However, from my perspective, the merits of these activities outweigh the demerits significantly.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

Businesses nowadays frequently emphasize in the advertisement that their items are innovative in some way. Although it seems that the statement is the same as what I believe is a positive development, the following paragraph will elaborate on the reason behind this approach and why that phenomenon happens before framing a logical conclusion.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negative development?

The most popular way to sell a product is through advertisements and in recent days, many companies use advertising to show people that their new production of things is new. In my opinion, this marketing strategy could help businesses to gain many benefits from increasing consumer desirability to product assurance.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

An argumentation said that, currently, people have countless choices about anything than in the past. I strongly agree with this notion in terms of choice of product, because nowadays the technology has been improved vastly and the production of something becomes easier and faster compared to the condition in the previous decade. Moreover, people tend to have a consumerism behaviour that encourages factories to produce more assorted goods.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local product?

Promoting the products and alluring consumer is a skill in this contemporary market. The major conglomerates are using their promotion strategies with huge funding to pull the customer to stores. This trend has led to two important problems such as price hikes and killing the regional vendor market. There is a possible solution to solve this with proper policies. In this essay, I will elaborate on problems and solutions in detail with necessary examples.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

A progressing number of the general populace is opting to start their own companies instead of working for a company mainly because of increased support for young entrepreneurs. In my opinion, the primary drawbacks of not having an employer are lack of expertise and its overall effect on businesses.

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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is no doubt that online education has become a new learning trend. However, while I agree that they also have negative aspects, still I believe that this advanced technology is mainly beneficial to individuals. In this essay, I will support my view with examples.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays children are exposed to a lot of pressure from parents as they wish their child succeeds. Particularly, children are convinced that by trying hard, they will achieve any goal that they have. In this essay, I will examine what are the main benefits and potential risks of this approach of motivation.

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some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs.Others believe there are much better benefits of university education for both individuals and society.Discuss both views and give your opinion

Undoubtedly, a university education helps a graduate get a better job. The type of job an individual opt's not only benefits them personally but will also indirectly benefit society. In this essay, I will be discussing my notes on both views and will give my opinion.

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