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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, there are more and more concerns about how the computer is impacting children. It is debated that the computer has more drawbacks than benefits for children. As far as I’m concerned, I partly agree with the statement that the adverse effects of the computer on children outweigh/ eclipse the positive ones.

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WEALTHY NATIONS SHOULD ASSIST POORER COUNTRIES WITH HUMANITARIAN RELIEF DURING NATURAL DISASTERS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In recent decades, the number of natural disasters has increased in some places over the world and caused many detrimental effects on people and properties. It is argued that undeveloped countries should be assisted by rich countries on humanitarian grounds to deal with natural disasters. In this essay, I will present my two arguments for why I agree with this statement.

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Employers nowadays put more emphasis on social skills. Some people believe that social skills are important in addition to good qualifications for job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, workers have the tendency to focus more on soft skills than on degrees. While there is no denying the benefits of social skills in the workplace, I believe that employers should have excellent academic knowledge and qualifications.

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Physical appearance may play an important role in many spheres of life: in the person’s success in school, in relationships with people, in the choice of a career path. Say whether you agree or disagree with it, and if you see it as a positive or negative factor.

Some said appearance plays a significant role in many aspects of life, for instead, social, mental or even academic sides, to name just a few. I accord with this statement as people tend to judge a book by its cover and whether it is a positive factor or not, depends on how beautiful you are.

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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A school of thought holds that prestigious entrepreneurs and management should be established in regional territory rather than the urban fields. This essay would completely opine that this development would exert a positive impact on the population distribution and the habitat, irrespective of one minor drawback in terms of the deficiency in necessary materials for production.

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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have the opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Every individual has a right to choose their own life. In recent times, most of the students are showing interest to study in abroad rather than in their home country. This is because many universities have a better curriculum and plenty of resources available. Moreover, many countries welcome International students for pursuing higher education and also create a good path in their careers. However, this essay will discuss both pros and cons in the following paragraphs.

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Inspite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? what can be done about this problem

In the past few decades, there have been many new breakthroughs in the field of agriculture allowing people to grow more crops efficiently. Nonetheless, many people around the world are unable to nourish themselves properly. This essay will delve into the reasons why many remain hungry, despite the agricultural advancements made as well as the possible solutions to remedy the situation.

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Many cities have become less pleasant places to live in recent years. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is said that the city life quality has been decreasing over recent years. Although the shortage of housing and traffic congestion are serious issues, I believe there are solutions that can address these problems.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Globally, medical science is developing rapidly and testing of the newly discovered medicines on animals has been a practice for a long time. Although there are debated views regarding the same, some still believe it is for the betterment of humankind and therefore should be continued. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I support such a practice.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that men and women have distinctive characteristics. While I agree that there are different capabilities between two genders, I totally disagree that this affects career prospects in both genders.

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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg.dinosour,dodo,..). There are no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The natural world has been witnessing the disappearance of some creatures that are regarded as a natural election. Some scientists argue that whether to inhibit the extinction of wild animals or not. In my opinion, I do agree that communities should have protective actions for creatures and their places for wildlife in an ecosystem because of the following reasons.

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Some people think that too much attention and too many resources have been given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many human being’s activities, including drilling oil, lumbering and so forth, have been exerting a subtle impact on natural balance, endangering many species on the earth except humans. But some people recently think that they have paid attention enough to prevent other species from potential crises. I think that overall, I do not agree with the view.

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Some people believe that the museums and historic sites should be open for free for children under 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is important for everyone to learn the history and include those lessons in their life. Some people argue that places like museums and historic sites should be open for children to visit free of charge while others think they should not. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain why I strongly agree to allow children to enter free of charge.

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People these days watch TV, films and other programmes alone rather than with other people. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages

For ages, cinema and TV have been a prodigious source of entertainment. Many experts debate that whether watching these alone at home is advantageous or not. Personally, I am not in favour of the aforementioned trend prevailing in society these days and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my point of view with lucid examples.

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Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and production and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people buy local products?

Nowadays, people prefer buying the products of large companies which spends a big sum of money on marketing and production. In this essay, I will discuss the problems caused by this behaviour as well ways to encourage society to buy locally produced goods.

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Given high unemployment rate, it is recommended that the government only provide primary education and no secondary education. What do you think?

It is believed that countries which have high unemployment rates should only offer primary education; and extending secondary education to students who are not likely to find work in the future is a hopeless attempt. I personally consider this to be a flawed argument, and I will explain my reasoning in the essay below.

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Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (eg cost, environment). Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether money should be spent on public transport or on other more important issues. While faster means of public transport would be a positive measure, I would argue that further investment in other priorities should be made first.

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It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is undeniable that technology threatens the existence of traditional society. Scientific know-how and conventional cultures are opposed in their roots. I strongly disagree with this point of view, even though the base of cultures and science different each other people have need of both to sustain their lives.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media platforms. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a debate whether newspaper or internet is an excellent method for readers to achive information. From my perspective, I would argue that it is better for people to obtain news from the internet, although it is thought by some that the internet is where several merits come from.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is widely accepted that nowadays there are being too many alternatives for people lives. Personally, I mainly agree with this notion and also believe that this circumstance is directly influenced by the improvement of technology. Thus, relevant evidence supporting my view will be examined clearly in this essay.

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