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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many people choose to travel abroad to learn a foreign language instead of studying in home town. Do the advantages of learning a new language in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, many people prefer to learn a foreign language abroad instead of studying in their countries. While there might be possible disadvantages for this development, the advantages, in my opinion, are more significant.

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Nowadays artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it positive or negative development?

Currently, vehicles are being controlled by artificial intelligence, which makes them driverless. This is due to the advanced technological development and is beneficial, as it not only ensures safety on roads but also allows disabled individuals to travel alone.

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that females should play an equal role as males in the national police force or army while others think that women are unsuitable for these types of jobs. In this essay, I will discuss both the perspective, but I agree with the former view.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The majority types of students have been working during the study. As a consequence, it follows that lacking time for education and feeling more stressed. From my own perspective, the scholar will manage for studying even earning money,if he or she appears a capacity.

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Some people think that success is the best indicator for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

There is a stereotype among people about the key to success. Some people believe success is the only indicator for intelligence. On the other hand, others consider there are other ways to define brilliance. In my take on this, I believe that success is able to be used as a criterion to gauge an individual’s savvy.

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Some people say that private schools should not be allowed to exist. Why do people believe this? What is your opinion?

It is often argued that private institutions should not be promoted in society. Because everybody cannot afford them. According to my opinion, private schools have significant importance because they provide a wider range of choices for the people.

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Task 2: Some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Keeping track of things happening around is really important. While most people are not interested to watch international news, some individuals on the other hand believe it to be advantageous to have knowledge. In this essay, I will be discussing my notes on both views and provide an opinion.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Education, the foundation of success, has been triggered heated discussion over how to teach children. Some people argue that children should be taught at home, while others insist that kids should receive education in schools. In my opinion, I support the latter one.

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Some people say schools should be responsible to teach young adults to look after their health, others think this is not responsibility of schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, faculty is responsible for teaching their students how to take good care of their health ; others insist that this is not the responsibility of the school. In my opinion, the school is the best place for children to learn about health and fitness.

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Some people say schools should be responsible to teach young adults to look after their health, others think this is not responsibility of schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to some people, faculty is responsible for teaching their students how to take good care of their health and wellbeing; others insist that this is not the responsibility of the school. I agree with the former view. In my opinion, the school is the best place for children to learn about health and fitness.

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People think that government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

The world has been suffering from the burning issue of pollution created by different kinds of vehicles. It is believed by some that a rise in fossil fuel prices can reduce usages of cars and other conveyances which will impact the environment positively. There are both merits and demerits of this trend and this essay will explain that an increase in fuel cost is not a proper way to reduce ecological problems.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this competitive world, it is really important to showcase unique features in every product to gain customer attention. Also advertising the products showing the business understands its user needs will provide additional interest. In this essay, I will further discuss my view on this practice.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care systems in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem to introduce more physical educational lesson in school curriculum. to what extent do u agree or disagree?

The health care system in any nation, even in a developed one can collapse due to a higher number of people needing attention. Researchers indicate that the obese population would need more surgeries and preventative medicine than their healthier counterparts. It is a common opinion that by introducing more physical lessons in the school, we could have individuals who are health-conscious, thereby avoiding a collapse of the system. I strongly agree with this view, I have presented my reasons in this essay.

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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasis that their products are new in some way. why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, manufacturers tend to make advertisements by putting emphasis that their products are brand-new versions. I believe that there are several reasons behind that phenomenon and it seems to me that it is a negative development.

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In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why it is so and the outcomes of this situation. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

The population in several countries are commuting towards either the foreign lands or to a new place in their own motherland after retirement.The aim of this essay is to outline the causes for the given scenario and to detail the resulting happenings.

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In many countries people do not recycle waste materials, such as bottles and newspapers. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Recycling waste materials is one of the effective methods to control environmental pollution. Hordes of people have not included the recycling process as part of their lifestyle which would be much harmful to all living beings including mankind. If it continues significantly, It may lead to the destruction of the earth.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In this day and age, more and more people are becoming immersed in tracing the origin of their accommodation. There are several reasons for this trend and a wide range of methods to carry out it, which will be illustrated in this essay.

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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is true that many nations still use fossil fuels as a main source of energy, while other countries replace coal and oil with renewable energy. While I agree that renewable sources bring tangible benefits to society, I would argue that these types of energy have caused some consequences.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best wat to reduce the rime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To extent do you agree or disagree?

Researchers show that criminals activities are low when pupils have academic degrees. The effective way to reduce crime is to educate criminals while still in the prison house; however, in my opinion, educating people always do better in their personal and social lives.

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Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be rewarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that top-performing students should be praised. However, others argue that those, who constantly try to improve their academic performance, deserve recognition. This essay will discuss both views, although I firmly believe that both categories of pupils should be recognised for their accomplishments.

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