IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 765

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Study shows that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison, so that they can get a job when they leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

The phenomenon of the way of preventing criminals commit a crime again after being released from prison has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent people's views on this issue in question may be, I totally agree that an opportunity should be provided for the prisoner to study during the sentence.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt about the fact that opera is a crucial part of an individual's life. However, there are some who opine that rock is the best way to bring masses of different customs and ages together. In a subsequent, paragraph I intended to shed light on the given topic with proper illustrations and an appropriate conclusion.

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Some people say it’s a waste of time to plan for future. It’s more important to focus on present. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a common belief that making plans for the future is just a waste of time and it is better to concentrate on the present. From my standpoint, I partially agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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"The best things in life are free" To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some claim that the pleasant stuff in people’s lives do not need to pay, while others might think that many activities which make people happy actually cost a lot. My opinion, I totally agree with the former idea. In the following essay, I will explain my own view.

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In some countries, people are purchasing fewer new items and more second-hand goods. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative trend?

It is believed that people are buying more used goods compared to newer ones in certain nations around the world. The impending essay will discuss the remedies of this statement and will elaborate on its beneficial effect of it.

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In some countries, people are purchasing fewer new items and more second hand goods.What are reasons for this?Is this a positive or negative trend?

It is believed that individuals are buying more used products compared to new ones in certain nations around the world, The impending essay will discuss the remedies to this statement and will elaborate on the benefits effect of it.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadventages?

Many governments prefer to charge locals when visiting museums. While many people view this act as great for many reasons, The argument for making museums and exhibitions cost money is one I am in favour of, but only in some cases.

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THese days many people have their own computeres and telephones, so it is quite easyfo them to work at home. DOes working at home have more advantages or more disadvantages

Over recent years, computers and telephones have become an integral part of human life. While a common opinion is that it is easier for people to work at home, others think that it is not. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of the issues and provide my opinion.

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Some people think that governments should do more to help citizens to adopt healthy diets. Others, however, believe that individuals should be responsible for their own diets. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether maintaining healthy diets is responsible for the authority or per capita remains a controversial topic. From my perspective, both arguments are reasonable to a certain extent, but I am in favour of the latter viewpoint. I will explain my preference in the following paragraphs.

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How will new innovations change the way people live, work, and interact in the future? Do you agree or disagree?

In the last few decades, new innovations had increasingly affected humanity, adding changes to the daily routine. In my opinion, new discoveries will make a person's life too lazy and isolated.

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Some people feel that young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others, however, believe that young people should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether the current generation should pursue a traditional lifestyle or a modern one remains a controversial topic. From my perspective, both arguments are reasonable to a certain extent, but I am still in favour of the latter viewpoint. I will explain my preference in the following paragraphs.

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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?

In the last few decades, vegetarianism has entered the mainstream of many societies, most notably in western countries. It is suggested by those who side with vegetarians that meat is not a necessary element in a healthy diet and that going vegan is the way to go in modern times. Personally, I reckon that this view has flaws.

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people living in the 21st century generally have a better quality of life than the previous centuries. Do you agree or disagree.

Quality of life is improving every day, and each century has many events that significantly change our well-being. These events are not always positive, but there is a direct relation to occurrences and technical progress, which is causing the development of ideas to satisfy our needs.

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Advances in science and technology have made great changes to the lives of ordinary people, but artists such as musicians, painters and writers are still highly valued. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

Science and technology have found their way into modern society over the past few decades and have greatly influenced the human community. Art, on the other hand, has always been another inseparable part of our lives and has uniquely demonstrated its own values. In this essay, I will delve into this topic from two aspects.

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Parents should take course in Parenting, in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extent do you agree?

Parenting is the most important role in humanity . Nowadays hospitals conduct parenting courses for new parents. This course would help to take care of their babies but it does not help those people, who have already one or two children because they know how to raise their children. I am against this notion because it is a responsibility to be the primary caregiver and how to improve a child's growth. My explanation is in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive development or a negative development?

In recent years, many young generations have had little knowledge about their traditional and cultural things compared with those in the previous era. This is because youth people have no classes for learning these kinds of things, and their parents barely hold cultural and traditional events. In my opinion, it should be viewed as a negative development because people may lose their identity.

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Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem

In the modern world, motor vehicles are becoming an integral part of everyone’s lives. Even with the advancement in technology, the usage of mobile phones during driving and heavy traffic congestion during peak working hours can lead to accidents and this can be reduced by increasing fines and improving public transport.

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Many people today are worried about cyber crime such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does cyber crime cause and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

An increasing concern for many people over the world is cybercrime. There is a wide variety of reasons why this occurs and it has resulted in serious problems that have led to a wide range of effects on human life. This essay will outline the difficulty that cybercrime has produced as well as the measure has to be taken by the public and businessmen.

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Some scientists recommend that formal education should start at the age of 4 or 5. In other countries it is recommended that formal education should start at 6 or 7. Discuss and give your opinion.

It is believed by some scientists that children should start education at age of 4 or 5,however other people guess that formal education for kids should begin at the age of 6 or 7. I think that it depends on the kids and the counties where they live, to be exact both statements have some advantages and drawbacks.

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People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. Agree or disagree ?

In today's materialistic world, people are being shopaholics, who buy tons of things frequently. A section of society asserts that the age group is solely a factor on which individuals depend more than others. I partially agree with the given statement. This essay will discuss firstly the reasons behind the dependency of shopaholics persons on other factors and shopping based on age in the second paragraph.

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