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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Some parents buy their children a large of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

A part of parents purchases their children a lot of toys to play with them. Some people including me, believe that buying numerous toys is not a suitable method for children, although others think this will be a good approach.
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One of consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages?

Nowadays people in many countries get quick, professional and productive help if something happens with their health because of the rapidly growing level of technologies in that field. This affects on average years men and women live which brings a number of questionable consequences. In my opinion, there are more drawbacks to the increasing level of medical technologies than benefits.
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Parents, usually mothers, stay at home to look after their families. People believe that for this they should receive a salary from the government. Do you agree or disagree and why?

In this day and age, the number of full-time housekeeping mothers is constantly growing. Some believe governments should pay them salaries. In my opinion, however, I disagree with this idea due to the potential social implications and the increase in financial burden on authorities. This essay will analyze these factors, using examples from the UK government and Stanford University to prove my arguments.
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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case?

It is believed that in a number of countries it is better to own a home, rather than lease one, as it might be beneficial for the resident, due to the inflation. Owning a house in certain locations can be considered a lifetime investment with a guaranteed return, rather than spending a huge sum of money on paying rent.
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Some people think that the best way to solve the problem of poverty in many countries is to set up businesses and improve trade links with rich countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Nowadays, the classic complication still has is the issue of bankruptcy almost everywhere in the world.
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In some countries, schools are teaching foreign languages for primary school children. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s world, foreign languages are taught to primary school students in several countries. I personally believe that the good points of this trend are more significant than the bad points.
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Advanced technology has brought many beneficial changes to the world. However, some old people today struggle with the use of technologies such as mobile phones and the Internet. How can the elderly benefit from using advanced technologies? How can the elderly be encouraged to use consumer electronics more often?

Despite many beneficial advancements made available to the world by new technological inventions, the elderly population find it difficult to use mobile phones and the Internet. This essay will discuss how this segment of society can be benefitted from these useful technologies and also will suggest how to encourage them to use new household electronic equipment.
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Childhood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia. as many as two thirds of children are now obese. schools have a responsibility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. to what extent do you agree with thhis statement?

Over the period, there has been a drastic shift in the lifestyle of Australian people which has given rise to one of the critical problems of obesity amongst children. In the following paragraphs, In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the things which are leading to this lifestyle and the actions which can be taken to mitigate this concern
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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create , while others struggle to survive . Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation To what extent do you agree or disagree ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge experience

The phenomenon of the government's way of spending on artists' support has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I totally agree with the idea that funding should only give the artists who have contributed to society.
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It is important to learn right or wrong at a early age .punishment is necessary in this process.do you agree or disagree

A fair amount of the public believes that it is very crucial for adults to understand what is right and wrong at an early age as well as punishment is important to learn this process.I fully disagree with this statement and the reasons for this argument are mentioned in forthcoming paragraphs.
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Some people claim that not enough of waste product from homes is recycled. They say that the only to increase recycling is for the governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Considering how the waste product from home is one of the main causes of climate change, thus, motivating people to recycle their waste. But, not many people realize how important and urgent this case are. So, several communities especially those who advocate green living, are urging the government to legalize and also facilitate recycling from home. I agree with recycling from home, considering how important for us to manage our waste and be responsible for it.
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wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the number of evacuees is increasing all over the world due to war and poverty. So, some say rich nations should allow them to come to their land and provide meals and shelter to expatriates. I completely disagree with that statement and this essay I am going to give examples of my statement.
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Human activities have led negative effects on plant and animals all over the world. Some people think it is too late to do something about it. Others think there is still some time to take actions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent decades, due to industrialization and colonization at their peak, it had destroyed the inhabitant of nature and wildlife. Many believe, we already had destroyed nature and nothing can be fixed now. While others believe that, all individual's small efforts can make a huge difference,however both views have pros and cons. From a personal perspective, I believe we still have time left and we can still heal mother earth and the animals.
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Recent research has confirmed that human activity has become the greatest threat to plant and animal life. Why do you think this has happened? How can we reduce our impact on the natural world?

The population of human beings is growing rapidly due to the increasing quality of living, which is a result of the new technologies that help us every day, advanced medicine that longer our life and many other factors. In my opinion, although this growth affects flora and fauna by harming it every day, there are solutions that may help to reduce the damage caused to our nature, that will be described further.
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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or buiding they live in. what are the reasons for this? how can people research this ?

Nowadays, people become highly interested in the history of their houses or the building they live in. This will discuss the reason for this trend and how people search for that information.
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Nowadays eating habits of people around she world are changing causing them many health problem including obesity. Why do people tend to eat so badly? What ean be done to improve their eating habit?

These days, the majority of people around the world are suffering from several health conditions such as obesity, due to their habits. There are a lot of reasons  for this phenomenon and various ways are available to maintain healthy eating habits. This essay will explain the reasons for unhealthy eating habits.
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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree thet it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Some individuals believe that the world's human population is constantly growing, and this problem has become the most serious, which humanity has to conquer. In my opinion, the reason for that is the improvement in healthcare. I strongly agree that this is problematic because of the limitation of natural resources for an enlarged population.
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Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measure. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a fact that prevention is more beneficial than cure. The government budget should be allocated a high proportion to health education and prevention measures rather than treatment. I agree with this view.
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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

In this present-day world, it has to be said that advertisements feed people on social media to make a desire to buy their products,however, others assume that advertisements are common in every arena and people never mind commercial ads. Advertisements help us to choose the right product and from the right brand, whereas this may attract us to purchase unnessecery things.
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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skill and imagination than reading. To what extent do you agree?

At present days, doing entertaining activities with children is far preferable to spending time reading books. Personally, I find this statement very correct and suitable for modern education and provide both my opinions and arguments in this essay.
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