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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Nowadays, technological improvements have changed our lives. These improvements have happened in different aspects, from the virtual world to medical discoveries. What stands out is the ways we communicate today have dramatically changed, and these changes would be both harmful and useful. In this essay, these issues will be discussed, and relative examples will be given.

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Write about the following topic. It has been argued that gift giving should not be encouraged, because money is often wasted on things that people do not like or want. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

People always argued about whether give gifts to others, because other people do not like it, and it is a waste of money. I partly agree with it, and this essay will explain why.

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works?

Currently, new inventions made women's life easier by doing household work. They can spend more time with their offspring or family and productively do their work because machinery saves a lot of time, but a bunch of personages have a different opinion about it. It is debatable and I will discuss both viewpoints in the upcoming paragraphs and then give my opinion.

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More and more young people are using drugs and alcohol and as a result, breaking the law. What are the causes of this problem? What are some possible solutions?

Using drugs has become a major concern among youth since they develop the habit of using them and consequently, do not obey the law. This essay intends to explain the two main reasons : unemployment and peer pressure and suggests some remedies to overcome this issue.

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Atomic energy ( Nuclear power )is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger Discuss both view and give your opinion?

In the Salad days of the millennium, contemporary methods of producing power have been adopted on a large scale and nuclear energy is one of those ways. However, society is polarized into two groups almost equally regarding the notion of whether it is the widely used resource of making electricity or it does have negative repercussions on the globe. Nonetheless, in the following paragraphs, I would shed light on numerous reasons to discuss both views before presenting my stance.

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Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

Today, every country is struggling with severe problems on how to control traffic congestion and how to build a robust transportation system. Therefore, a group of people suggested that to mitigate this hassle people should migrate from rural areas and get settled in the urban areas, but however, I differ from them and opine that this should not be the only way to solve this obstacle, there are other workable solutions too. I elucidate my stand in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries, people follow the latest fashion and hair styles. In your opinion what is influencing this? Is this a good or bad thing.

For a variety of reasons, many people across the globe always change their fashion and hair models according to the newest trends. In my opinion, someone's passion for fashion along with adequate financial support are the two main drivers of this phenomenon. In addition, I think this behaviour can be both positive and negative depending on each individual intention on following the latest fashion trends.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of healt and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In certain countries, especially the developed ones, the majority of their population is overweight because these individuals are not taking care of their health properly. In the following lines, I will give some reasons for why this occurs and what measures can be used to fix this issue.

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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree or disagree?

Medical professionals are capable of awareness among the masses about effective fitness measures. In my opinion, this statement is completely valid as doctors are experienced as well as they are cognizant of the psychology of patients.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Fast and semi-prepared foods have definitely made consumers’ lives easier in the busy contemporary world. Undoubtedly, such a kind of product has quite a few pros. However, constant consumption of unhealthy food takes its toll on individuals’ state of health and hence the expectancy of their lives. In my opinion, it is not the case that the benefits of processed products exceed the drawbacks.

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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In this technological development ,era all people are connected via social networks. In order to mingle and be successful financial ,settlements modern people are depended on internet services. Although there are optimal benefits of adding personal details to social media platforms, some hidden negative sides are also present in this network-connected world. I am partially supporting this notion and explain it in the following paragraphs.

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More developing countries are given aid from international organziations to help them in their development plans. Some people argue that financial aid is important but others suggest that practical aid and advice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today’s world, we occasionally see communities try to help each other, especially the developing ones. Developing nations might prefer to take some financial help from international organizations. Some people believe that practical help and suggestions are essential for growth. Both aspects have some negative and positive sides and these will be discussed below and I will give my opinion since it is more important to take financial support.

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Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

A large section of the younger generation spends most of their time on mobile phones.This is because of social media and assignments.However, this is a negative trend because of the illness.This essay will explain the details of my stance with examples in subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say that companies who sponsor big games can gain a lot; other people believe that it has disadvantages for them. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, various companies realize the benefits of being a promoter in play matches, which gain a lot of attention from individuals across the world, while some people argue that supporting games can have negative effects on them. In this essay, the advantages and disadvantages of posting advertisements in big tournaments will be presented before my perspective on both views is reached.

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Some people believe that international sporting events are the ideal opportunity to show the world the qualities of the hosting nation. Others believe that these events are mainly a large unjustifiable expense. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sports have always been one of the best sources of entertainment for people around the earth.Whereas most people assume that international sports events are a perfect occasion to display to the world the calibre of the organizing nation, some believe that these are a waste of national wealth. I strongly agree with the former. This essay will discuss the detail of my stance with examples in subsequent paragraphs.

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Many believe that being good at a sport is a result of talent while others think that it comes from hard work. Discuss both use and give your reason.

Natural abilities play a crucial role in someone's life.In this contemporary Era, there is an irrefutable quarrel among folk about nature and nurture .myriads petitions that winners are birth made for them ,while others believe in working hard to get the position.In this discourse ,I'm going to expound on both edges in the forthcoming paragraphs and also illustrate why I agree with the latter theory.

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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarket while some others prefer to shop online. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Technology has made shopping possible everywhere. Nowadays, people would prefer to buy almost everything from online markets than from supermarkets because of numerous reasons such as economic and time advantages. Although buying needs online has benefits for many, some believe that it may lead to social problems like broken relations. I consider, that buying foods can strengthen the community.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new home there. What is your opinion about this?

In recent years, increasing population and urbanization leads to more demand for residential areas which are available only on the rural side. However, it is believed by some that there is a requirement to protect this area to turn into colonies. I unequivocally disagree with this opinion because the available space in the villages is cheaper and results in sustainable development.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays with progress in technology, a big part of people have a strong tendency toward using smartphones or computers to read books or newspapers. I agree with this opinion because printed publications are more expensive than online ones. Also, preparing papers to print books requires cutting trees. This essay will be explained some of the advantages of online reading.

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At a present time , the population of some countries includes a relatively large amount of young adults ,compare with the number of older people .do The advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The growth of the population has become a matter of great concern. Some countries include a relatively large number of young adults as compared to other nations where the count of older citizens is high. While older people do add a lot of value, in my opinion, the advantages are quite a few as compared to that of younger citizens.

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