IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 182

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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In many countries people like to eat a wider variety of food then can be grown in their local area as a result much of the food people eat today has to come from another region do you think the advantages of this development overweight the disadvantages.

Nowadays, in many parts of the world, individuals love to eat foreign food items instead of locally produced articles, as a result of which import of food items has increased at an exponential rate. I am convinced that this phenomenon has certain drawbacks but the advantages are more significant. This essay will discuss it in detail.

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Some people believe that younger family members should be legally responsible for supporting older family members when they become physically, mentally and financially unable to look after themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the number of elders has progressively increased in many countries across the world. It becomes debatable whether sons and daughters should take responsibility for looking after their parents when they get older and cannot take care of themselves, or not. In this essay, the reasons to support my agreement with the statement will be elaborated on before my conclusion is reached.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad a situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that accepting conditions,like unwanted work , and poverty is the best,while some believe trying to improve the condition is better. Overall,although,some say half loaf is better than none,I am of the notion that the most important thing to do is to always seek and search for a good condition,also,not relent until an individual acquires wealth.

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Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Newton's Third Law of Motion: for every action, there is an equal and opposite reaction. in the case of criminal justice, when someone commits a crime he or she must be sentenced with a fair punishment. whether or not those who served jail time and became good residents are conducive to guiding the younger generation, has been a matter of controversy. personally, I agree they can be helpful but only to an extent.

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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint?

In today’s society, people have different views on work. One of the most disagreements is that someone concentrates on applying for a permanent job for the same company, whereas others favour switching work frequently. In this essay, I am going to show the merits and drawbacks of each opinion

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Having many short vocations during the year or fewer but longer vocations,both of them,in the end,are vacations that all of us have necessary to take during a year,furthermore,when you have been working nonstop.In my opinion, I will prefer to have many short holidays for two reasons which I will explain in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree?

Who is at fault for the rise of obesity in our youth? Many believe the responsibility for this lies in the hands of the Government. This essay will discuss why, due to the inflated prices of health goods and the stark absence of government-paid sports programmes, I agree with this statement.

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Many wild birds and animals live in towns and cities. Some people think that the wildlife should be protected. Some think that they should be removed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While many types of wild species inhabit urban societies, some individuals believe that it is necessary to preserve them. However, others believe that they can be harmful to both residents and livestock. In my opinion, generally wild faunae in different locations of nature should be protected, whereas it should be pointed out that urban life is not suitable for them.

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Some working parents believe childcare centers can provide the best care for their children. Others believe that family members like grandparents can do a better job. Discuss both view and give your opinion

In recent years, it can be seen that most parents are included employees with nine-to-five jobs, Hence they have no time to protect and bring up their children as well as they should . There are two main solutions for them. Firstly, send children to kindergarten. Secondly, enquire from their family members. There are two valid opinions on both sides, which I will consider in this essay.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, many people pay attention to their places which have memorial contexts. This perspective has two main reasons why they feel more connected with significant places. This essay will examine two main reasons.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

There is a considerable number of students who work while studying which led to having difficulties with their education. This can cause many problems and I will be presenting its underlying causes and highlighting its effects.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions?

It is considered Global warming to be the most terrible environmental hazard that humanity has ever confronted in recent years. As well as, due to ice melting sea levels maintain their increase rate in an emergency way. After all, this essay will discuss the main causes of Global Warming including rising carbon dioxide emissions and deforestation. This essay will be suggested essential remedies to these difficulties such as mitigating the effects of fossil fumes and using environmentally friendly energy sources.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teacher be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

People have several options for punishment. It is argued that the youngster must learn about various rights and incorrect at an early age. I strongly believe that consequences are significant to attain this activity. Thus, it is required for the teenager to think before acting. Accordingly, it will assist them in improving their existence in a successful manner.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in someway. Why is that? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that the main purpose of the advertisements is debatable. It is argued that recently some companies claim that their products are new in their adverts. In this essay, I will explain the reasons behind this, and why it is a negative development.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Are the teen years truly the most joyful time of our lives? Many believe this statement to be accurate. Whereas others concur with this opinion and insist adulthood is when true happiness is experienced. This essay will discuss both views and conclude why I feel adulthood , with its unwavering freedom, is a far happier phase of life.

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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new homes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals insist that more green areas should be designed by urban planners, whereas others believe that they should concentrate on creating new accommodations due to the population growth rate. In my opinion, it is a pleasant idea to have more natural spaces with different types of plants in a city, while it might not necessary to build more complexes if the immigration rate declines though .

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has become a subject of debate whether studying at school or studying online at home brings more benefits. In my opinion, both of them bring different advantages but the advantages of learning at school are far more than in online classes.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It has been discussed whether the primary purpose of museums is to enjoy or to educate. In this essay, I will discuss both notions and explain why I believe the latter is more right.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this day and age, more people are working and studying from home. Because technology is more developed and inexpensive than before. It has both negative and positive effects on our life and I will outline my opinion in these paragraphs below.

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food can be produced much more cheaply today because of improved fertilizers and better machinery. however ,some of the method used to do this may be dangerous to human health and may have negative effects on local communities to what extent do you you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the food industry has improved significantly based on various novel methods in agriculture as well as more productive chemical materials. Yet , there remains a contentious debate as to whether can these techniques be detrimental factors to people's well-being or not. I partially agree with this topic and will support my perspective with more details and practical examples.

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