IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 179

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people think that success is mainly measured by how much money a person has. To what extent do you agree?

Everyone yearns to be successful but success is not gotten on a silver platter. Well, there are some exceptions, like people who were born with silver spoons in their mouths. In fact, I agree that the measurement of success is determined by how much money a person has. Have you ever seen a poor successful man?

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Some people say that mobile phones are unnecessary for young group while others find that its useful for younger ones discuss both views and give your opinion

It is been argued that cell phones shouldn't be allowed to young people, on the other hand, it's being extremely necessary for them. In my opinion, mobile phones are pretty useful for people.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays protection of the world environment is becoming a priority for several concerned people. The extent of consuming products is increasing day by day which poses a great threat to this modern world, in terms of land and air pollution. This essay will discuss two main reasons including an increased quantity of wastage and scarcity of organic resources and some solutions to address this overarching issue.

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Now people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose with improved communication technology and transport. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Advanced technology makes it possible for people to have improved communication technology and transportation, allowing them to live and work anywhere they want. I believe that the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages.

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Is punishment right way to give moral to children. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary epoch , punishments have become a heated debate among parents. whilst some proponents believe that the best way to learn is punishment , opponents and I have a diverse view.Thus , in this essay , both points of view will be demonstrated along with my opinion.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of a particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The environment is faced with a lot of challenges. One of which is the extinction of a type of plant or animal. Some individuals believe that this is the main environmental issue we are facing today and others think there are more pressing environmental challenges. I side with those who argue that the environment faces other vital issues and one of which is air pollution.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

It is believed that the pictorial presentation of news along with words via printed sources as well as on reporting channels plays a relevant and crucial role. I unequivocally agree with this opinion because graphics attract the attention of viewers and at the same time, are capacitated to provide more information.

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Farmers within a country are often protected by tariffs - that is, special taxes on imported food. Such policies are necessary, and should be implemented wherever possible. To what extent do you agree with this?

Farm workers are many times aided by estate policies applied to imported goods. These are necessary measures that must be imposed at all times. In this essay, I will argue why it is fundamental to help our local producers by making imports pay special taxes.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recent years have witnessed that the crime rate among adolescents is rising. Some argue whether family members should take the responsibility to teach their children about having appropriate members or not is a widely debated topic. However, some ascertain that teachers should be the main role in educating good behaviour. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and provide my perspective on this issue.

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Good planning is the key sector to success. To what extent do you agree?

There is currently a contentious argument about whether good planning is the primary reason for success in life. This essay will elaborate on the merits of both views and put them into perspective. Thereafter, I will present my standpoint to support the former idea, which results from one’s targets and how one manages to achieve them.

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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the years smoking has become the biggest concern around the world, consequently, now governments are taking measures to impose bands on people to prevent smoking in public areas. Though there are protesters against this rule, I firmly stand with the government rule, and the following paragraphs of this essay will analyze two factors which contribute towards the affirmation, as well as my opinion.

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this. What are the advantages and disadvantages

Nowadays, it is commonly seen among some individuals to reside in their home countries throughout their lifetime. This essay will look into the causes, and further discuss the benefits and pitfalls of this.

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Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively or negatively affected the cultural development of your society?

A majority of people are of the belief that cultural aspects of nations around the globe have been affected by Television on a large scale. Whereas there are specific pros one can benefit from watching, there are a number of downsides concerning this, which I am shedding light on throughout this essay.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertising tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which view point do you agree with ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, advertisements became more popular than how they used to be a few decades ago. From publicity on TV to posters on the street walls, it can have both a positive and negative impact. Some individuals think that advertising encourages us to buy products we may need to improve our daily lives, others,on the other hand, say that it motivates us to buy useless things. Personally, I partially agree with both ideas and this essay will discuss my point of view in the following paragraphs, including some examples from my own experience.

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In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? How to change their views？

Advanced technology makes it possible for people to travel to different parts of the world, leading to the flourishing of tourism. However, some people believe that international tourism has a negative impact on their countries, for which there are several reasons and some measures can be taken to change citizens’ attitudes.

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Advantages and disadvantages of having pets at home

In today's world, pets are an inseparable part of many societies. A lot of people have their own pets. It's because of their countless benefits. Of course, they also have some problems. I will explain them.

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People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their family and the society so working long hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary era ,there is a war of words regarding the belief that individuals tend to work for a longer time .An equal number of crowd opinion in favour of the very notion,on the paradoxical side others are hesitant about it.The following paragraphs would cast light on my personal perspective along with an apt example.I partially agree with the statement.

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successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many sports professionals earn a great deal of money, even more than those specializing in other fields. Some people consider that it is reasonable, but in my opinion, I will argue with its unfairness.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Currently, public concern has arisen about whether human beings should deal with climate change or try to live with it. From my perspective, I am in favour of the former opinion.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school sujects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more imporantn than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Whether or not History is an essential topic, is continuing to be a debatable subject, especially during the last years of outstanding improvements in science and technology. There are valid opinions on both sides which I will discuss now.

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