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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences. Only government action can solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the lack of accommodations in metropolitans can result in serious impacts and in order to tackle those problems, government action is the only choice. In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement for the following reasons.

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It is often said that government spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important . Do you agree or disagree?

There has been controversy about whether the government should spend too much money to intervene in the wildlife project. Personally, I disagree with this statement based on several reasons. First, there have been significant provide that the extinction rate is decreased among the endangered species, second, in some countries, wildlife is a part of their identity, and this attracts many tourists and represents a great source of income.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Over the years, the disposal of refuse has impacted the health state of many environments. Some individuals are of the opinion that increased recycling of waste can only be achieved if the lawmakers make it statutory which will enable enough refuse to be recycled at home. This essay will take an exhaustive look at this statement while concluding with my opinion.

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Some people believe that smartphones are destroying social interaction today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.?

Many assume that smartphones have undermined social interaction among people these days, but others think this device has a positive side. In my opinion, I don't think smartphones are destroying our communication because of the diversity of their existential advantages.

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he best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that drivers need to be tested every year in order for road transport to be safer for the public, however, there are other factors which need to be considered before implementing the new law. This essay will explain my view on this given topic.

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The best way to make the road transport of goods safer is to ask drivers to take a driving test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that road transportation would be safer if the chauffeur frequently give a driving test. I totally agree with this statement because it helps to improve driving skills and prohibits unsafe operators.

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The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this fast-paced modern world, a lot of authorities are thinking to give preference to their desired subject. Although traditional sects are preferring science approaches, the dominance of arts and technical spheres can not be overlooked. In this frame of reference, I am strongly disagree with the statement and considering it less practical and irrational.

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In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. What are the causes and explain the possible solutions?

Every human being must be healthy to do any task in life. Children are gaining weight and losing healthy bodies in many countries. This issue needs to be addressed. The upcoming article discusses the causes and the viable solutions to such an impediment using relevant examples.

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Some people think that the role of parent is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nature their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In modern society,it is widely believed that families ought to consult their offspring about what is right or wrong.Despite this,numerous others claim that it is more fundamental to provide them with a proper environment to grow up in.I strongly support that the safety of the scions significantly constitutes their natural growth.

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Many people argue that zoos where creatures are contained in artificial enclosures should be banned in this century. Do you agree or desagree

Most people should have been to a safari park at least once in their lifetime. An artificial place where humans put all kinds of animals into it. Even though some people are excited about seeing animals they can't normally see but some felt sorry for these poor things trapped inside the cages. Even if I feel bad for them, I still want the zoo to live on because having it will be more helpful to the creatures than we think.

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In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. What are the causes and explain the possible solutions?

Every human being must be healthy to do any task in life. Children are gaining weight and losing healthy bodies in many countries. This issue needs to be addressed. In the upcoming article, we will examine the causes and viable solutions to such an impediment.

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It is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university education to a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era of times, it seems impossible for a country to provide bachelor's degrees to a high percentage of youngsters as it does not yield visible benefits. I completely agree with the statement because of two reasons.

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Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices like smart phones, tablets and laptop computer. Do the advantages of such development outweigh the disadvantage? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the 21st century, technology has improved and automated the process of various means of entertainment. However, there’s an ongoing discussion that the merits of viewing films and games through smart devices outweigh the disadvantages. This essay agrees with this opinion, giving relevant examples.

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Prison is the common way most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide the public a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An immensely controversial phenomenon in the contemporary epoch today relates to whether imprisonment is a better solution to restrict crime or education. I believe that to some extent we should consider both for a peaceful future and this essay will illustrate my point in more detail.

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Some people think computers and the internet are important in children's study, but others think student s can learn more effectively in school and with teachers. Discuss both views and give your own openion,

A few people believe that studying with computers and the internet is crucial in a student's life while others think children can study better on campus and with certified tutors. This essay sheds the light on both the views and an opinion will be given in the ensuing paragraphs.

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In marriages today, some argue that it is the responsibility of both spouses to earn a living for the family. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in marriage life, some people think that it is important to be responsible to become the shareholder of finance in a family. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this statement due to following reasons.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is best route to a successful career,while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views.

After completion of education, an increased number of students are in a dilemma whether to choose a job or to continue their courses. It is believed by some people that pursuing higher studies is best while others claim that working after schooling is a better choice.

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

The knowledge of various sections is significant for everyone, especially younger children should get a good education.However, while some schools input the international news to a subject that students must learn at least one class in each term, others argue students spend time on main courses that result in their future careers. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints in detail along with my personal perspective as I think that inculcation of news-related subjects should be subjected in school.

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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves ?

It has long been my belief that strong countries should be able to help developed countries in order to create a peaceful world based on the United Nations agreement. Due to the primary economy being low in some poor regions, I strongly agree that they need to be helped by a powerful country. Like primary needs such as food, construction and also education.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subject. Other people thik that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It has long been my belief that history is one of the greatest subjects in college, students study the past because many citizens can understand how past societies were, the systems, ideologies, governments, cultures and technologies were built, how they operated, and how they have changed. While others believed that the expectation of future work mainly is occupied by technology and education major.

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