IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being. Although some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others disagree and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In my essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view....
There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being. Although some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others disagree and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In my easy, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view....
There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being. Although some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others dispute this and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In this easy, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view....
There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being. Although some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others dispute this and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In this easy, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view....
There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being. Although some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others dispute this and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In this easy, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view....
There is no doubt about the existence of a supreme being. Although some people believe that there are various paths to seeing God, others dispute this and argue that Jesus alone is the pathway to God. In this easy, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support for the former view....
Some argue that the excessive use of electronic devices has positive results. While others believe that it has some adverse effects on children's mind and body, however, these side effects can be minimized. I think computer skills are not only helpful as a subject, but also in extracurricular activities....
Some would argue that it is better to instill competiveness among children, while others say that it is more useful for children to co-operate with one another. While being competitive helps young people to improve themselves, I believe that moral traits acquired by co-operating with one another is far better....
It is no-doubt true that the inventions of electronic devices have affected our everyday lives so much throughout history. While this might harm people’s physical health to some extent, I believe that the advantages do outweigh the disadvantages....
Working in the 21st century is immensely facilitated by the emergence of the World Wide Web. This has made work from the comfort of one’s living space a possibility. I believe the pro's outweigh the con's. This essay will discuss the many benefits of working from your own house. In addition to this, touch on the easily manageable drawbacks....
It is often argued by many that employees higher up in the organizational command chain being paid more in contrast to those lower down in command is a positive trend. I fully believe that paying CEO's and FA's more money than new recruits is completely justified....