IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 19

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Nowadays some countries cncourage people to buy morc and more products,which is good for economy. While others believe it is bad for the society. Discussboth views and give your opinion.

People have a mixed response about whether consumers should be encouraged to consume more as some argue that it is beneficial for the economy while others avert that it has adverse impacts on society. From my point of view., I do believe that moderate consumption is supposed to be advocated while preventing excessive consumption.

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What distinguishes young people from their parents' or grandparents' generation is a lack of physical exercise. Today's generation are spending far too long playing computer games, chatting aimlessly on social networking sites or simply watching TV, and too little time being active. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people have become lazier than their ancestors. The substantial importance of making exercises has sparked over relaxing in recent years. I think this issue is completely true, as now everything can be done without going for a walk.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, there are multiple choices of industrial meals and drink such as fast food , cola and cookies which contain a high percentage of sugar . The consumption of these products may lead to several health issues . Some people argue that government should make the prices of these products higher in order to demotivate consumers to eat carbohydrates. In my opinion , I completely disagree with this view and believe that there are other effective approaches to solve this problem .

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Universities should accept equal number of male and Female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the help of ,education citizens have a chance to improve their future and upscale the graph of their life. Colleges should ensure the identical number of boys and girls for each subject. I, strongly disagree with the statement and will discuss the argument in the below paragraphs.

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Some people say that it is more important to spend time for developing a career. Some people say that it is important to share time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Time is money, which ought to be invested wisely. Hence, many people believe in spending some extra hours on their career than socializing with family and friends. I firmly support that indulging yourself with family and friends is a priority over devoting to professional growth. The forthcoming paragraphs will discuss both views in detail.

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Which would you choose: a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

In this modern era, competition is rising rapidly and as a result, people are opting for jobs with long working hours and higher wages to survive. Although working day and night helps them earn money, it leaves them with no leisure time to spend with family and friends. Personally, I feel I will always choose my family before anything else, so, I will opt for low paying job with shorter hours to spend time with my family.

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Many people are moving from rural areas to big cities, why has this happened? To what extend do you think it is a good trend?

It is true that many countries have experienced a significant movement of population to urban areas. There are various factors behind this trend, but I believe it can lead to a challenge on the whole social development.

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In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing, does this trend have positive or negative effects on society?

It is true that life expectancy is longer than ever before in the world, because of the development of technology and the growth of human wealth. While the long-life period will benefit individuals, I believe that it will bring some negative consequences for the whole society in the long run term.

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Some people think that to learn about other countries, they need to travel. Some say that it is not necessary to travel; we can have information through TV and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, there is a debate about the best way of learning about different cultures. While some people support getting information by media technology, others believe it is fundamental to go to the place. I personally agree with the second statement.

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Many people think cheaper air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expansive in order to discourage people to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

People have different views about whether people should be encouraged to travel more frequently through cheaper airfares or be dissuaded from travelling by the higher cost. While fewer flights will mitigate environmental destruction, I believe that cheap flights will benefit the masses.

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It is argued that we are live in a throw-away society: people throw away what they use in daily life, rather than recycling or reusing them. Why has this happened how to address this issue.

It is true that modern people have been accustomed to using products for once, rather than utilising items for a long time. While a number of factors may lead to this throw-away culture, governments can take steps to reverse this trend.

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To be truly positive in the eyes of some, you have to risk appearing negative in the eyes of others. In about 350 words, state whether or not you agree with this statement.

A number of people advocate that one’s positivity in the eyes of some could risk appearing as negativity in the eyes of others. From my perspective, I voice approval of the aforementioned, believing that no individuals could please everyone, since our beings are open to subjectivity.

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Some people advocate the death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of the death penalty and give your opinion.

Some people claim that the death sentence should consider for cruel crimes. However, others express that the execution is against the values of modern society. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits and withdrawal of this punishment and give my personal opinion on this matter.

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Some people say that history is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is said that history is one of the essential subjects, but others disagree with that and think that science is more important in this modern world. Although history gives us the opportunity to learn what happened in the past, science allows us to advance forward which I believe is more crucial.

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There are different customs in different countries related to how people eat, dress, and so on. Some think that people visiting a country should behave according to customs of the country they visit. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, travelling become popular and easy compared to the past. Some people believe that visitors should follow the traditions of the host country where they visit. In my opinion, I partly agree with this and I will explain more details in the following paragraphs.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

The shopping for unnecessary and costly items have been growing in the modern era. This trend is backed by the materialistic thinking of the masses which is not a sign of developed society. The government and the public need to take some strict measures to resolve the issue.

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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women? What is your opinion on that? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Discrimination of gender equalities are an ongoing process since the beginning of life. Regarding this ,issue government can play a vital role to keep balance. In my point of view, there are should keep some high paid salaries for qualified women. Following , an essay I will describe some of my knowledge and the arguments with the above topics.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

The advancement of the medical system undoubtedly enhances human beings life expectancy. Thus, communities have to look after the old folk. In my opinion, the population will handle it properly so that the elderly crowd feel protected. This essay will shed light on both reasons for caring for the old-aged and provide solutions to overcome possible drawbacks.

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Some effective people like repetitive routine, such as eating the same food, do you like this way?

To begin with, monotonous activity has always been a heated debate among the folk of the world. In this regard, while some public prefers to repeat their daily routine as it can affect their efficiency, others are more inclined to experience the mentioned new opportunities on a regular basis. Personally, I enjoy having a change in my soul since repetition kills the joy of life.

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Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The opinion on whether the educational qualifications bring success in life is divided. Some believe that they definitely do while others think in the opposite way. In my opinion, outstanding results are not likely to be achieved without a decent level of education and this essay will discuss both views.

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