IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 19

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, an abundance of competent graduates found themselves in a logjam: they are not capable of finding a suitable job. One of the factors could be a lack of congruence between theoretical and practical skills of the former students or their reluctance to work by acquired profession. In this essay, I will examine why unemployment is a controversial issue among alumni and suggest a couple of possible remedies for tackling this problem.

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For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary. To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

Many families these days are visiting shopping places not only to buy things but also to be joyful with their families or friends comparing to the past where people could not decide to go to shopping centres unless they need to buy or sell necessities. In my view, I think this trend is negative for two reasons, in this essay I will outline this topic and the reason why I consider it as a negative trend.

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The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens' health rather than on protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that government should invest the country's budget on the healthcare system rather than the environmental issues. Undoubtedly, the health of the people should be the first priority of the authorities but I disagree with spending less money on the conversion of the environment.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. State your own opinion in about 300 words. Give illustrations and examples

A number of people advocate the widespread dissemination of information in scientific studies, enterprises and academia. Others, however, claim the contrary, stating that data is so invaluable and worthwhile that it cannot be shared publicly. From my perspective, I voice approval of the former, in that I believe the act of making knowledge known to humanity would do wonders for global development in the long term.

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In certain countries, Voting is compulsory. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

It is fact that many nations have applied rules on compulsory voting essential to support the bureaucrats. I strongly agree with this statement that voting should be mandatory to win the leaders, who could serve their people by providing better educational service and fulfilling the needless requirements. This essay will stick with the point that why voting is compulsory and what benefits bring to the home country, which will explain in the below paragraphs with strong viewpoints and relative examples.

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Some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, Others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not well at schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a continuous discussion, debating whether educational institutions should offer their positions to remarkable individuals or to give it equally to everyone, including those with lower grades from school. In my opinion, neither of them, alone, is enough and we should keep a balance between the two ideas.

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''Prevention is better than cure''. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invets in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree

Since, childhood we have been hearing this famous line which is a belief since ancient times and, still it is accurate and intake. I opine that prevention is the best practice however research and treatment are equally important and essential for quality of life and for generations to come even though if it is expensive.

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Most societies have homeless people. Some people think that the best way to help them is to give them money. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, it is quite common in countries throughout the world to notice a lot of homeless people and a few citizens believe to help them by providing monetary help. However, I opine that we should help by providing moral support, education, skill development and utmost in providing employment.

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Is has been suggested that all young adults should be required to undertake a period of unpaid work helping people in the community. Would the drawbacks be greater than benefits to the community and the young adult themselves?

It is argued that the young society members are to participate in a variety of volunteer careers in order to give a hand to other people. Also, there are a number of positive sides to this cooperation, I believe that the drawbacks are taking precedence over the benefits.

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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Other feel that these forms of media will never disappear . What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the pace of the 21st-century technology is leapt to the level which was unimaginable a few decades ago . Due to this, everything is based on it like communication , transportation , education and so on . Despite some people argue that the printed sources to study will be totally changed in the upcoming time , others argue that the style to read the material in the printed method will never be demolished . According to my opinion , I think that the printed way of course will never be disappeared .

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is widely believed that comprehensive the right and wrong at an early age is important for adolescents and punishment is extremely crucial to help them know what discipline is. I strongly agree with this point of view, as I believe that parents and teachers can collectively contribute to positive behaviour to juveniles by punishing them with self-restraint measures.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. which opinion do you agree with? discuss both options and give examples.

It is true that a host of people nowadays especially kids tend to own a companion as a friend or because of their love for them. While some individuals believe that this trend has a positive effect on a child’s behaviour, others argue that playing with a pet is not safe and may bring some unexpected threat for the owners. I am personally of the opinion of the former. This essay will prove some logical reasons as to why the benefits of owning an animal can outweigh its drawbacks.

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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Females should be given the same representation as males in the cops and military tasks. I partially agree with this statement. In this essay, I will highlight how women can demonstrate significant performance in the army and also discuss the contrary side to it.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern word. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?

A visitor is the majority driving force for economic growth in many countries around the world. Some people argue that it leads to many effects if it does not organize well. This essay will discuss both views and in my opinion, I believe that travel brings a number of advantages that outweigh its disadvantages.

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Smoking is a major cause of serious illness and death throughout the world today. In the interest of the public health, governments should ban cigarettes and other tobacco products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that smoking is the most dangerous issue in the modern world. In that case, authorities from countries around the world should prohibit all tobacco goods. I totally agree with this statement because cigarettes cause serious illnesses and people who smoke are not a good example for children.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. But others think taking part in individual sports is better, like swimming. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Some people believed that participating in individuals sport like swimming is always good, however, other believed that taking part in group sport games is more advantageous. Thence, its personal preference whether to play game individually or in team. I think playing in team is always better.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?”

Children's brains can easily learn various languages at an early age. It is supposed by professionals that kids should begin to acquire new speech in basic institutions than in high schools. This essay will attempt to illustrate the benefits over the drawbacks.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In today’s modern world, private automobiles become more prominent with any dwellers following the augmentation of technology. However, it is inevitable that this trend causes many negative consequences due to the overreliance on those vehicles for a short distance journey. Therefore, it is crucial for us to evaluate the side effects as well as set out some possible solutions to get through this issue.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that enhancing sports equipment is very useful, but some people think it should evaluate other factors as well. However, there are rational arguments on both sides that remain a debatable issue, and this essay serves to give an insight into the situation, followed by my opinion.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals believe that we spend a lot of lifetimes on the whole education process, which is started from schools to colleges and universities, as well as this learning approach doesn't have sufficient practical things to use in real life. Now I will explain my opinion on why much time is spent on studying facts rather than real competencies.

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