IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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These days noise and air pollution are serious environmental problems. Some people think that air travel is to be blamed. Others believe that we should reduce the number of vehicles on the roads.Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is true that one of the greatest problems that the world is facing today is the environmental problem especially noise and air pollution . Some people argue that these problems are caused by the aviation industry , while others claim that the high number of cars that running on the road is the major cause . In my opinion, I take the view that the increasing of using cars remain the main source of this problem .

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Many people spend a lot of money on clothes, haircuts and beauty products to enhance their appearance .Some people think that it is a good way to spend money, while others think there is a better way to spend it.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people exaggerate their appearance by spending a huge amount of their income to buy garb and certain products to enhance their looking. some of them believe that it is a perfect way to use cash for these products while others who are in the opposite view think that there are other different usages of money rather than clothes and beauty. In my opinion, I think there are much better ways to spend salary than focusing on outfits or haircuts.

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Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Sporting events play a crucial role in the development of a province.Some people believe that these events are necessary for the improvement of diplomatic relations and love for own's nation.I completely agree with this statement.Further details will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In spite of technological developments in transportation , many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination .What are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

Technology has been increased rapidly to make human lives more comfortable and relaxed. It is assumed by human beings that a cycle is the easiest way to achieve a suitable end though the technology has been improved in terms of the conveyance. This essay will illustrate the benefits and drawbacks of cycling, currently.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Punishment is an offensive act on children when treated imprudently, but it can create a huge impact on a child's behaviour and moral ethics if it is being given only to teach them the proper lesson for their mistakes. Furthermore, childhood is an essential period for kids to discover this distinction between right or wrong through discipline. The essay will discuss my views on, how punishing children at an early stage plays a vital role in their life.

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Some people who have been into prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Educating students about both good and bad societal activities is very much essential. Nowadays, it was observed that many people who have returned from prisons have become good in nature through rehabilitation. While I agree that it may be a good idea for them to educate children about the dangers of criminal activities, I feel there are other methods to warn adolescents about the same. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for my opinion in detail.

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Some people claim that family members are more important than friends. Do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to relationships, their quality is usually questioned whether the person is a close friend or a family member. While it is true that in some cases, friendships exceed their limits and we get very close to people, I believe family is irreplaceable and thus, more important.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

One of the highly controversial issues today relates to the high technology in education. Nowadays, the computer became the fundamental item in the world. The educational system provided it into the class to teach subjects for children. Whereas it might make a few fears for students. In this essay, I will explain both sides of the view and suggest my opinion.

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More and more people want to buy famous brands in clothes cars and other items . What are the reasons behind this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Luxury items tend to extend popularity in communities in the present world. In this essay, I will elucidate the hidden causes of this issue and give my opinion about this event, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.

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Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Advertisement is the greatest marketing strategy in world trade at present. Some people think it might be caused by some drawbacks, whereas I agree with those who think it would bring advantages to both personal and companies. In this essay, I will elucidate both views and my idea, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.

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Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people believe that the rising population has become a major concern to the ecosystems on earth. I fully agree with the statement because of the impact it has on other environmental issues such as global warming as well as, on the phenomena of sinking landscapes. Hence, in this essay, I will extensively explain the reasons to support this based on real-life examples.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

With the advent of technology, most of the old ways of life and traditional skills are being wiped out. Some people believe that there is no point in saving the old traditions, while I would argue that conventional methods of living are still viable and co-exist in our environment.

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In many countries, there is a shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the countryside. Other argue for the regeneration of the cities. What are the advantages and Disadvantages of building new towns in the countryside?

Nowadays, overpopulation has altered to be a primary issue in the cities ,which resulted in the lack of appropriate accommodation. While there remains a controversial debate whether new towns are better to be constructed in the suburb or in the cities. This essay will address both positive and negative aspects of this determination.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years, an abundance of competent graduates found themselves in a logjam: they are not capable of finding a suitable job. One of the factors could be a lack of congruence between theoretical and practical skills of the former students or their reluctance to work by acquired profession. In this essay, I will examine why unemployment is a controversial issue among alumni and suggest a couple of possible remedies for tackling this problem.

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For many, shopping malls are great places to spend their leisure time and meet others. People, however, in the past mostly visited those when necessary. To what extent do you think this is a negative trend?

Many families these days are visiting shopping places not only to buy things but also to be joyful with their families or friends comparing to the past where people could not decide to go to shopping centres unless they need to buy or sell necessities. In my view, I think this trend is negative for two reasons, in this essay I will outline this topic and the reason why I consider it as a negative trend.

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The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens' health rather than on protecting the environment. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that government should invest the country's budget on the healthcare system rather than the environmental issues. Undoubtedly, the health of the people should be the first priority of the authorities but I disagree with spending less money on the conversion of the environment.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. State your own opinion in about 300 words. Give illustrations and examples

A number of people advocate the widespread dissemination of information in scientific studies, enterprises and academia. Others, however, claim the contrary, stating that data is so invaluable and worthwhile that it cannot be shared publicly. From my perspective, I voice approval of the former, in that I believe the act of making knowledge known to humanity would do wonders for global development in the long term.

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In certain countries, Voting is compulsory. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

It is fact that many nations have applied rules on compulsory voting essential to support the bureaucrats. I strongly agree with this statement that voting should be mandatory to win the leaders, who could serve their people by providing better educational service and fulfilling the needless requirements. This essay will stick with the point that why voting is compulsory and what benefits bring to the home country, which will explain in the below paragraphs with strong viewpoints and relative examples.

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Some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, Others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not well at schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a continuous discussion, debating whether educational institutions should offer their positions to remarkable individuals or to give it equally to everyone, including those with lower grades from school. In my opinion, neither of them, alone, is enough and we should keep a balance between the two ideas.

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''Prevention is better than cure''. Researching and treating disease is too costly so it would be better to invets in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree

Since, childhood we have been hearing this famous line which is a belief since ancient times and, still it is accurate and intake. I opine that prevention is the best practice however research and treatment are equally important and essential for quality of life and for generations to come even though if it is expensive.

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