IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that schools have to be more entertaining, while others think that their sole purpose is to educate. Which do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

It is supposed by many that schools should only focus on education, whereas, others think that it should be a fun place to be. Although learning should be one of the agenda, I strongly believe that schools should focus on overall development ; hence, it should be a place for entertainment.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Technology is transforming every aspect of our lives including education. This trend benefits both students and teachers because it facilitates easier learning and teaching processes. A segment of society is convinced that with such rapid development of technology, very soon, computers will replace teachers in the classroom. Others, however, believe that the role of a teacher can never be replaced by artificial intelligence. I personally support the latter view. The following paragraphs will discuss both opinions and highlight my view.

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Quite a few youngsters nowadays take cohabitation for granted, while others find it unacceptable. In about 350 words, state your choice and explain why.

These days, a number of young adults advocate cohabitation and consider this as common; others, however, raise objections to it. From my perspective, I am supportive of the latter, in that I believe this phenomenon has several drawbacks far outweighing its seeming advantages.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The issue of climate change was always debatable and has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. Many people claim that people have more responsibility to fight climate change, while others reject this notion. In my opinion, we should work more to fight against climate change to be more rational.

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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The issue of climate change was always debatable and has become more controversial. Many people claim that people have more responsibility to fight climate change, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, we should work more to fight against climate change to be more rational. This essay will elaborate on both points of view of this issue and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Some people believe that iPad is good for user and have a lot of benefits. Do you agree?

There are many different perspectives about iPads. On the one hand, the iPad is a technology that helps people achieve uncomplicated and more expedient life. It has many programs and applications to facilitate us. On the other hand, the iPad causes bad health. However, From my point of view, iPads have more advantages. This essay will clarify possible factors that can identify why iPads have advantages.

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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new houses. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The focal point of urban planners is either plantation more trees or housing in urban areas, which was always debatable and has become more controversial. Many people are claiming that plant more trees is beneficial, while others reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, creating more green space in the city area to be more rational. This essay will elaborate on both points of view of this issue and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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Everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet because eating meat can cause serious health problems. Do you agree or disagree?

Healthy nourishment has always been an area of contention between people. A segment of society is convinced that everyone should adopt a vegetarian diet. I personally believe that vegetarians can have a deficiency of vitamins and minerals that can be extracted from meat products.

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International tourism is now more common than ever before, some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not?

Worldwide travelling has been persisting in increasing rapidly for 30 years. A certain number of individuals claim that it is fine, whereas others do not. Although it has brought some moral issues, I would believe that its overall impact has in fact been positive. Both advantages and drawbacks will be represented in this essay.

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In many schools and universities today, women have a tendency to study the humanities (such as the arts and languages) while men more often major in science related subjects. Some believe this tendency should be changed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether the gender distribution in school subjects should be modified as today female students tend to pick up art subjects while their male counterparts are more likely to take up science subjects. In my opinion, whilst this notion seems legitimate, there is little value in executing this change.

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1. Some people say now there is less communication between the family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, the contact between family members appears lesser compared to yesteryears. As far as the penetration of innovative technology, in addition to the parents’ workloads, I firmly agree with this notion.

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Research shows that global warming is caused by human activity. What are the possible effects of climate change and what can governments and individuals do to reduce these?

The detrimental side of the advancement in the field of technology is the increase in pollution levels and the change of climate. Consequently, it has an adverse impact on human health as well as on the crops of the farmers. The possible way out from these challenges are mainly the introduction of laws to reduce carbon emission by the authorities. In addition to that, it is essential that humans become sensitive about the same and start behaving appropriately.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some commentators state that it is more beneficial to surround ourselves with like-minded people. Those who think otherwise argue that it is important for people to have some friends who disagree with them at times. This debate is more complex than it seems, and the arguments of opposing parties and my own assumption will be elucidated further.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There is no doubt that being Overweight is a grave concern that exists in almost every nook and corner of the world, especially in developed nations. In this essay, I will mention some specific causes of obesity and discuss the remedial actions to curb this problem.

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In recent years some countries have experienced very rapid economic development. This has resulted in much higher standards of living in urban areas but not in the countryside. This situation may bring some problems for the country as whole. What are these problems? How might they be reduced?

In many countries, development in cities has been occurring at a much faster pace than in rural areas. Thereupon, life in urban areas has improved significantly, whereas citizens in the countryside are still deprived of many new facilities. Undoubtedly, there will be issues arising from this gap. This essay elaborates on these problems and suggests remedies to tackle them.

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Some people say that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others think that those who contribute to society like scientists and teachers are more successful. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

There has been a significant divergence of opinion revolving around whether affluent people or society contributors like scientists and teachers represent success. Admittedly, although the latter trend triggers the influence on the community, it cannot justify the positivity, which gives cause for the luxury possessions. Therefore, I firmly support the previous notion.

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Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome stress in everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that people have faced stress problems from their affairs. Psychologists recommend that doing nothing is the best solution to eliminate this concern. Personally, I argue this statement with many reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

Most people believe that physical education is great for the youth, to the point that some actually think that all schools should make it obligatory. I am of the opinion that sport should indeed be compulsory since it helps kids being healthy and socializing.

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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present era, the taste of people regarding artworks has immensely changed resulting in many ordinary art pieces being entitled as masterpieces while true pieces go unnoticed for the lack of evaluation amid thousands of them. The essay below tends to explain why I agree with the aforementioned context.

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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinges upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Social networking is really a marvel of modern technology and its use has become ubiquitous nowadays. The discussion regarding the benefits and shortcomings, especially on confidentiality has sparked a heated debate. Some people opine that it is the best mode of communication, while there are others who stress about the intrusion of seclusion. In this essay, firstly, I will elaborate on why this has been triumphant in connecting people and secondly, regarding the jeopardisation of privacy.

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