IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 14

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wild animals should spend their entire life in a sanctuary that is much farther away from civilization. Few citizens think that a zoo is a dangerous location for any animal so it must be closed down whereas others believe that it is useful for safeguarding wild animals. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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"These days people succeed in their chosen profession because they are good communicators and not just experts in a particular field". Discuss the reasons and why is the case. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the ability to establish an efficient intellectual connection with other individuals is a prominent criterion in approaching prosperity, particularly in the working environment. Yet, there remains a controversial debate as to whether the overall effect of this skill can be benevolent in reaching success or the expertise in a career is more influential. This essay will discuss the proposed topic from both sides of view with some detailed explanations.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Evidence suggests that languages are becoming disappear all around the world. Although some individuals advocate that ding out more tongues can lead to having a more convenient life, I completely disagree with this statement and there are two compelling reasons that will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People are always calling into question the effectiveness of various activities on the overall health level. Although some people argue that reaching this goal can be possible just by expanding sports infrastructures, others, including me believe there are more effective ways. Both these views will be elaborated on followed by my own take on the matter.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Evidence suggests that learning overseas languages in various age groups can reveal various results. However, some scientists claim that instilling foreign languages at primary school is highly likely to be more beneficial. Both the benefits and the drawbacks of the matter will be scrutinized followed by my personal take on the issue.

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In many countries, teenagers are encouraged to do part-time jobs. What's the situation like in your country? What do yout think are the advantages and disvanatges of doing part-time jobs?

The adolescent phase is the transition phase from a child to a young adult.In some parts of the world,teenagers are given permission to do part-time employment ,whereas some countries do not motivate them.This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages including why I believe that young adults should have a head start from the adolescent phase,using examples from recent studies to demonstrate points.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and giver your own opinion.

As we all know, a country’s development is very crucial and governments must have goals that are important to achieve a certain status at the global level. Many governments focus on economic progress, whereas, some people believe that there are other aspects that are equally important for a country. This essay will discuss both views and provide my opinion.

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Governments should spend more on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that politicians and state leaders should spend more money on building railways rather than roads. This essay will discuss to what extent I agree with the provided statement and my personal recommendation will be given.

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Q. Some people think planting trees in open spaces in cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed among some people that it is more important to fill the cities and towns with trees rather than buildings. This essay will show to that extent I agree with the provided statement and a recommendation will be given.

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The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

Since a few years ago, there have been more and more offences made by youngsters. Some believe that the unique strategy that could overcome this situation is lecturing parenting skills to moms and dads. However, I partially agree with the statement due to the several options that can be implemented to diminish the number of offenders.

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Some people says that adverting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

According to some, an advert can influence our minds and make us buy things regardless of whether they are needed or not. Others think that the popularity of different types of advertising is that high, that people are not interested in it anymore and do not pay any attention. I believe that a qualitative ad can persuade anyone to buy anything. Nevertheless, some people who work in the sphere of marketing or PR do not perceive ads due to their profession.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?.

Nowadays, the development of technology has resulted in a significant replacement of paper-based books with electronic books in the curriculum. Yet, there remains a controversial debate as to whether the overall efficiency of this alteration can be benevolent or it can result in excruciatingly destructive consequences. This essay will discuss this topic from both sides of view with some detailed explanations.

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Some people believe that having interviews is the best way to find new employees for a company. Others say that there are better alternative ways to appoint employees. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people think that the best way to hire new employees for a company is an interview, others believe that there are some ways that are better. I will discuss both of these views and give my thoughts.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

What people believe about others is a daily topic. A few individuals think that others' character and culture are a clothing reflection. I agree with the statement due to the remarkable differences between some cultures.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A currently larger amount of families migrate to other nations for work. Some folks think that children will get benefits with this move while another group of people say that it makes children's life much harder. this essay will discuss both sides of the view and provide my reasonable opinion in the end.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Evidence suggests that these days being self-employed is a more common practice trend that can be seen through individuals rather than working for a factory. Although there are a number of compelling reasons behind this, I think drawbacks can not be ignored. In this essay, the Cause and negative effects of this issue will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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In many countries，today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors, may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it?

In some nations, there are a lot of high guarantee graduates except they do not have a job in recent. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and put my opinion at the last.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are calling into question the effectiveness of music not only on unifying individuals ranging from children to the elderly but also on various cultures. Although some people may dismiss this, I completely agree due to some compelling reasons that will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people are calling into question the effectiveness of music not only on unifying individuals ranging from children to the elderly but also on various cultures simultaneously. Although some people may dismiss this, I completely agree due to some compelling reasons that will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people are calling into question the importance of environmental conservation. While some individuals believe that being on the verge of extinction is a significant problem related to the flora and fauna, others claim that they should place a premium on other environmental issues. This essay will be elaborated both views followed by my take on the matter.

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