IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 21

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of an individual is in their own hands. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The notion of providing healthcare based on a person’s income is one I do not agree with. Although a person’s health is their own responsibility, basic healthcare needs to be made available to the public. I do not believe in a free healthcare system, but instead, one which is subsidized by the government, thereby protecting the middle and impoverished sections of humanity, whilst at the same time providing equal and fair treatment to the wealthy.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Many individuals perceive that money is a fundamental trajectory that makes them happy. this essay will address how having money can help to feel happier and what are the other ways to feel more contentment.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

These days, having an academic scope from the institution is significant for nations in future. Although a number of voters become successful in their lives, without owing professional degree. In my view, educational qualification has been an essential factor for increasing a higher degree. In contrast, pursuing goals can be important rather than learning.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

These days, having an academic scope from the institution is significant for nations in future. Although a number of citizens become successful in their lives, without owing professional degree. In my view, educational qualification has been an essential factor for increasing a higher degree. In contrast, pursuing goals can be important rather than learning.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A certain proportion of citizens presume that punishments must be decided priorly for all types of crimes. On contrary, other parts suggest that the conditions leading to do a violation such as circumstances and motivation should also be given consideration while making a judgement. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, department stores and supermarkets have quickly expanded in many nations, local stores cannot find ways to defeat them. Some people believe that closing down the local store will make communities unable to survive. I totally agree with this opinion because modern markets are more attractive than old ones.

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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write at least 250 words

For the past ten years, an evolution in technology has brought everything at a single click. People, therefore, argue that the use of traditional reading ways will become obsolete as a variety of content is available online and even free of cost. will it come to an end? I believe it will and for two key reasons that online reading will occupy less space and will have easy access.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

In various countries around the world, climate change had some serious impacts on different life aspects of people, natural habitats, and the environment. However, there are also few solutions suggested minimising the ramifications of global heating on the universe.

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many small shops are closing as they are unable to compete with supermarkets in the area. How does this effect the local communities? how could the situation be improved?

Because of the competition given by supermarkets, numerous local shops have been shutting down in the locality. Consequently, buying options for the local people have been reduced. Nevertheless, the government can curb the issue by supporting these shopkeepers. The coming paragraphs will shed a light on this context further.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When we encounter barriers in our lives, we will either accept fate or try our best to better the situation. While numerous people claim that acceptance is a better reaction to difficulties, I lean toward the latter and believe that it is the optimal approach for people to solve their problems.

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Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Communication through the internet has become an essential part of our lives. It is common to have a pen-friend living in another country without even meeting them. A segment of society is convinced that these kinds of friendships can lead to adverse consequences. Others, however, believe the opposite. The following paragraphs will analyze both views and explain my support of the latter view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and in the economic world. Others believe that sharing information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about how can be valuable to make information publicly available for the development of many sectors in the world . While others claim that data needs to be secured and not shared without effort . In my opinion , I completely believe that info should be available without any difficulties.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of whether advertisement serves no real purpose has become progressively contentious as some argue necessity is a driving force for all purchases. In my opinion, while their viewpoints seem legitimate, adverts help consumers develop needs for novelty.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, adults even teenagers get many opportunities to invest their time in any sort of productive project without any hesitation. It is also believed that getting involved in any voluntary work can be fruitful for the future progress of their life as well as for society. From my perspective, voluntary work is one of the most impactful things that can be done by every adolescent.

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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

The popularity of studying through computers is highly observed these days due to the rise of online courses and learning methods. But there are essential duties for teachers in the classroom because early-aged children may not be ready for online learning. Now I will explain my opinion that why I believe in teachers’ roles are still crucial for pupils in classrooms.

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It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same . Do you think the advantages of changes outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people believe that the changing process has more pros than cons. I personally support the opinion that there are more points in favour, such as the good impact on our neurons even though, sometimes, it requires a big effort.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that benefit of this outweighs the problem?

In this present time, a plethora of undergraduates wants to travel in a various country for their higher education. I think its a good and a bad idea for student to graduate from their dream university.

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Task 2 Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country’s police force or military force, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Equality between men and wives has always been a global argument with old and new prejudice, especially taking detail in a governmental job. However, living in this present world, I would support that she needs to be accepted and treated equally with men at all.

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The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion.

One of the conspicuous trends of today’s modern world is a colossal upsurge in the use of the internet for communication and gaining knowledge but some individuals believe that it should be used in a controlled manner whereas others believe that there shouldn’t be any interruptions.I personally agree with the latter statement as misuse of online media is done to spread terror and crime.

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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent times, many people are selecting to socialize on the internet rather than a physical meeting. I think this is a positive development.

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