IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 17

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

band

Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration. To what consequences can it lead.

Moving to another country leaving their native place has become extremely popular these days. Immigration has shown a major effect on society. This essay will provide details about the causes of this situation and the consequences that are likely to be seen in future.

band

The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Issues related to the crime rate are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that because of the development of technology, criminal situations have been fallen over recent years. I totally agree with this assertion and the explanation will be shown in the following paragraphs.

band

some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed among some people that children should be taught to behave themselves well mostly by parents while others think that school is the best place to do that. This essay will discuss both views. In my personal opinion, both school and family must provide a child with knowledge of how to be a good member of modern society.

band

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

For some time now, it has been an ongoing debate that the majority of people prefer to be self-employed rather than working for other companies. In this essay, I shall discuss this statement with suitable examples.

band

Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

It is undeniable that every nation around the world has various issues such as environmental problems, pollutions, or education. From my perspective in the next decade, the biggest challenge my country, Thailand, has to encounter is over elderly population. This essay below will discuss this problem as well as its possible solution.

band

In the past people made better use of their time than they do today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since a few decades ago, people's lifestyles have changed. Nowadays looking tired is a common characteristic among citizens. Some may believe that individuals are managing really bad their time, in comparison to people in the past. I completely disagree with the statement due to the complexity of our current society.

band

Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Undoubtedly we are living in a world with too many options. From some individuals’ viewpoint, these days there are numerous options for choosing. I completely agree with this view. There are several reasons regarded to this matter that I am going to describe some of in this essay.

band

In about 300 words, state your agreement or disagreement on the idea that kindness is the clearest manifestation of civilization.

Benevolence is advocated to be the most evident manifestation of civilization. From my perspective, I voice approval of the aforementioned, believing that kindness lies in the core of any civilized society, in addition to having held the key to human well-being for millennials.

band

More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Nowadays many companies around the world are improving their labour politics, permitting their workers to work from their houses. In my opinion, technology made this possible and results have shown that it is something good.

band

Some people think that the effective way to reduce pollution is to tax the companies which cause it. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this. Discuss both the sides and give your own opinion.

Abuse has become a serious concern nowadays. Owing to this issue, individuals suggest taxing the associations who are responsible for causing this problem, others suggestions finding other alternatives that would reduce the deterioration significantly. Although other methods do have some weight, I strongly agree to tax the association as it is the first cause for the abuse.

band

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Over a few decades, the advertising industry has become more influenced in the ways humans buy things and most advertisements encourage us to do and use the same product they offer. From my perspective, I completely coincide with this idea because it is true that these presses try to convey us to buy similar merchandise although they are aware.

band

As a global trade increase Many goods including those we use on a daily basis are producing in another country and have to be transported long distances. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages.

Since the International market grow, most of the products mankind consume daily basis are manufactured in a different state and they have to be shipped far away. Although this provides easy access to produce goods and is cost-effective, I believe the negatives outweigh the positives because it harms the environment.

band

Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial discussion about which subjects should be given the greatest importance in the academic curriculum. On one hand, some people believe that history should be given attention at schools whilst others are of the opinion that science and technology should be considered significant. I opine with both views and this essay will address the reasons and support them with examples.

band

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, some people believe that ads are a powerful tool to convince mass. However, due to its ubiquitous appearance, it is no longer draws much attention from society. There are some valid notions that support both arguments which I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.

band

Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Should cabinets allocate their spending on trains over streets? I completely agree that governments have to allocate their spending on the train over roads this is because it will reduce the number of cars and good for the economy.

band

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of languages which has become wiped out has been increasing. Some individuals advocate that it does not have a significant effect on everyone's life and people can have more comfortable lives. In my opinion, languages and cultures are going hand in hand. Due to this fact, I totally disagree with this issue.

band

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that in the future, everyone going to be able to read everything online for free, so no one going to buy physical newspapers or books anymore. I disagree with this statement, and I will explain why.

band

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, less than 5 per cent of the population are billionaires due to their substantially high income. Some people believe that this is beneficial for the nation, while others reckon that the authority should manipulate their salary, which they are able to generate. In the following paragraph, both viewpoints will be elaborated in detail before my perspective will be reached.

band

1. Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Individuals around the world have different considerations about how they are evaluating employment opportunities. While some would argue that financial rewarding is the standard, I agree with those who believe that other factors are more crucial.

band

2. Many claim that the fast-food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Countless people think that instant-meal producers create an adverse influence on many things, such as the environment, eating attitude, and the lifestyles of families. Now I will express my opinion on why I agree with this point of view.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.