IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 18

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Undoubtedly we are living in a world with too many options. From some individuals’ viewpoint, these days there are numerous options for choosing. I completely agree with this view. There are several reasons regarded to this matter that I am going to describe some of in this essay.

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In about 300 words, state your agreement or disagreement on the idea that kindness is the clearest manifestation of civilization.

Benevolence is advocated to be the most evident manifestation of civilization. From my perspective, I voice approval of the aforementioned, believing that kindness lies in the core of any civilized society, in addition to having held the key to human well-being for millennials.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Nowadays many companies around the world are improving their labour politics, permitting their workers to work from their houses. In my opinion, technology made this possible and results have shown that it is something good.

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Some people think that the effective way to reduce pollution is to tax the companies which cause it. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this. Discuss both the sides and give your own opinion.

Abuse has become a serious concern nowadays. Owing to this issue, individuals suggest taxing the associations who are responsible for causing this problem, others suggestions finding other alternatives that would reduce the deterioration significantly. Although other methods do have some weight, I strongly agree to tax the association as it is the first cause for the abuse.

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Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Over a few decades, the advertising industry has become more influenced in the ways humans buy things and most advertisements encourage us to do and use the same product they offer. From my perspective, I completely coincide with this idea because it is true that these presses try to convey us to buy similar merchandise although they are aware.

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As a global trade increase Many goods including those we use on a daily basis are producing in another country and have to be transported long distances. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages.

Since the International market grow, most of the products mankind consume daily basis are manufactured in a different state and they have to be shipped far away. Although this provides easy access to produce goods and is cost-effective, I believe the negatives outweigh the positives because it harms the environment.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a controversial discussion about which subjects should be given the greatest importance in the academic curriculum. On one hand, some people believe that history should be given attention at schools whilst others are of the opinion that science and technology should be considered significant. I opine with both views and this essay will address the reasons and support them with examples.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era, some people believe that ads are a powerful tool to convince mass. However, due to its ubiquitous appearance, it is no longer draws much attention from society. There are some valid notions that support both arguments which I will elaborate on in the following paragraphs.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Should cabinets allocate their spending on trains over streets? I completely agree that governments have to allocate their spending on the train over roads this is because it will reduce the number of cars and good for the economy.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The number of languages which has become wiped out has been increasing. Some individuals advocate that it does not have a significant effect on everyone's life and people can have more comfortable lives. In my opinion, languages and cultures are going hand in hand. Due to this fact, I totally disagree with this issue.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that in the future, everyone going to be able to read everything online for free, so no one going to buy physical newspapers or books anymore. I disagree with this statement, and I will explain why.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, less than 5 per cent of the population are billionaires due to their substantially high income. Some people believe that this is beneficial for the nation, while others reckon that the authority should manipulate their salary, which they are able to generate. In the following paragraph, both viewpoints will be elaborated in detail before my perspective will be reached.

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1.Some people believe that the most important aspect of their job is their salary. Others think that the job itself is the most important. What do you think is the most important aspect of a job? Include specific details and examples to support your choice.

Individuals around the world have different considerations about how they are evaluating employment opportunities. While some would argue that financial rewarding is the standard, I agree with those who believe that other factors are more crucial.

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2.Many claim that the fast-food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Countless people think that instant-meal producers create an adverse influence on many things, such as the environment, eating attitude, and the lifestyles of families. Now I will express my opinion on why I agree with this point of view.

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Children can learn effectively through watching TV. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Watching the different channels are considered the key to acquiring new information yet spending time in front of the TV is suggested on a daily basis. In my opinion, I agree that the digital world has a huge impact on the youth`s understanding and development. However, reading books is also thought the best way to learn apart from TV.

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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are controversial views about whether economic developments could address indigence and famine or harm the natural world. I believe national and local authorities should limit the growth business world, due to its pollution.

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Some people are interested in international news, others prefer watching national news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the last 2 ,decades digital sciences have improved and are providing the quickest sources of the news. Many individuals are keened into global updates, whilst there are other groups of people who are more into domestic information. This essay will highlight both sides of the argument and then I will put my own perception on the matter.

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Is child rearing better when children pay more attention to parents than parents pay to children, or when the opposite is true? Write three or four paragraphs explaining your viewpoint. Give examples to support your ideas.

Experts throughout the world have a debate whether or not rearing kids should be done with more or less attention. The substantial importance of parents paying more attention to toddlers has sparked over being more attentive in recent years. In my view, an equally harmonious relation has to be built.

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Science will soon make people live up to 100 years or even 200 years. Some believe this is a good thing while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Society has different views about the development of science which is predicted to help the public live longer. While there are strong arguments for the advantages of this invention, I still believe that living up to approximately 150 years will cause a negative influence on the community.

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Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion?

Environmentalists argue that more funds should be invested in the protection of threatened plant and animal groups, while other folks think that by doing so, governments lose money that would be used for more important sectors. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the former and believe that these endangered creatures can boost the economy through tourism.

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