IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 24

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to improve a higher tax on this kind of food.

A surge in diseases caused by consumption of street eatables in citizens of few nations is noticed. As a consequence, it was suggested that taxation should be increased on this type of harmful essential commodities. This solution contributes to influencing the food choice of the middle-class citizens which causes a lot of ruckus in society. To recommend a proper solution to this problem, both views will be considered in the essay.

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Having a good university degree guarantees people a good job. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, to survives in a competitive working environment, some people are believed that those students who have a higher education or excellent academy certificate will have a good task. In my opinion, I can not entirely agree with this statement, I think that there are some necessary things such as communication, problem-solving skills is more consideration by recruiters.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, the preferences of many people are increasing constantly regarding the historical background of their residence. This essay will explain the causes and the method that they use searching in the following paragraphs.

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Some peopel think that one world government is better than national governments. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In contemporary life, several shortcomings in the difference of codes from neighbourhood countries are able to prove the development of illegal activities. Therefore, some people suppose the idea to establish only a one-world government will be more effective than national authorities. In my perspective, I partly disagree with the benefits of the statement and this essay will explain a crucial factor that shows the impossibles of the world government.

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Some people think the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles in order to solve environmental problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is true that traffic emissions are a major cause of air pollution problems . Some people believe that in order to fight this issue, the authority should raise the prices of fuel . In my opinion , I totally agree with this view and believe that this approach can be an effective solution to reduce air pollution problems.

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Universities should accept equal members of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, much concern has been directed to equality between men and women. Many books, TV shows, and radio programs are discussing the case. It has been stated that universities should set each intake to contain equal numbers of each gender. In my opinion, I totally disagree that each intake has to consist of the same numbers of male and female students.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

A certain group of individuals believe that modern gadgets such as mobile phones,laptops and computers have drastically improved the lives of humans whereas others opine that social interactions have decreased dramatically.I personally agree with the former opinion as the latest innovations in technology and internet connectivity has created a life without borders.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Nowadays, private cars are an extremely popular method of transportation since it is really convenient and cheaper than public transportation. This essay will discuss the main problems of using a private van and possible solutions to this problem.

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Healthcare should not be provided for free regardless of a person's income. The health of an individual is in their own hands. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The notion of providing healthcare based on a person’s income is one I do not agree with. Although a person’s health is their own responsibility, basic healthcare needs to be made available to the public. I do not believe in a free healthcare system, but instead, one which is subsidized by the government, thereby protecting the middle and impoverished sections of humanity, whilst at the same time providing equal and fair treatment to the wealthy.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

Many individuals perceive that money is a fundamental trajectory that makes them happy. this essay will address how having money can help to feel happier and what are the other ways to feel more contentment.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

These days, having an academic scope from the institution is significant for nations in future. Although a number of voters become successful in their lives, without owing professional degree. In my view, educational qualification has been an essential factor for increasing a higher degree. In contrast, pursuing goals can be important rather than learning.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

These days, having an academic scope from the institution is significant for nations in future. Although a number of citizens become successful in their lives, without owing professional degree. In my view, educational qualification has been an essential factor for increasing a higher degree. In contrast, pursuing goals can be important rather than learning.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A certain proportion of citizens presume that punishments must be decided priorly for all types of crimes. On contrary, other parts suggest that the conditions leading to do a violation such as circumstances and motivation should also be given consideration while making a judgement. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement.

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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, department stores and supermarkets have quickly expanded in many nations, local stores cannot find ways to defeat them. Some people believe that closing down the local store will make communities unable to survive. I totally agree with this opinion because modern markets are more attractive than old ones.

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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

For the past ten years, an evolution in technology has brought everything at a single click. People, therefore, argue that the use of traditional reading ways will become obsolete as a variety of content is available online and even free of cost. will it come to an end? I believe it will and for two key reasons that online reading will occupy less space and will have easy access.

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Developed countries have created many environmental problems in the World, particularly in their contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

In various countries around the world, climate change had some serious impacts on different life aspects of people, natural habitats, and the environment. However, there are also few solutions suggested minimising the ramifications of global heating on the universe.

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many small shops are closing as they are unable to compete with supermarkets in the area. How does this effect the local communities? how could the situation be improved?

Because of the competition given by supermarkets, numerous local shops have been shutting down in the locality. Consequently, buying options for the local people have been reduced. Nevertheless, the government can curb the issue by supporting these shopkeepers. The coming paragraphs will shed a light on this context further.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When we encounter barriers in our lives, we will either accept fate or try our best to better the situation. While numerous people claim that acceptance is a better reaction to difficulties, I lean toward the latter and believe that it is the optimal approach for people to solve their problems.

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Many people make friends through social sites and chat rooms. Others believe that it is not a good idea to make friends without meeting them face to face. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Communication through the internet has become an essential part of our lives. It is common to have a pen-friend living in another country without even meeting them. A segment of society is convinced that these kinds of friendships can lead to adverse consequences. Others, however, believe the opposite. The following paragraphs will analyze both views and explain my support of the latter view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and in the economic world. Others believe that sharing information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People have different views about how can be valuable to make information publicly available for the development of many sectors in the world . While others claim that data needs to be secured and not shared without effort . In my opinion , I completely believe that info should be available without any difficulties.

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