IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 20

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a neccessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative. Discuss your both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that adolescence can be a difficult period for youngsters and their parents. Although some people believe that conflict at this time does harm more than good, I would argue that it is an essential stage of teenagers development.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are people who believe that merchandising is an effective way to make people purchase goods, on the other hand, there are the ones who don't agree with it, due to the large number of offers that we receive daily. This essay will discuss both points of view and give my optical perspective about this matter.

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Some people think that high-end technology can prevent and cut down the rate of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Currently, there are numerous disputes about the advantages of cutting-edge technology. It is considered that this can help to reduce the percentage of robberies and crimes. In this essay, I will explain why high-end technology plays one of the most crucial roles in the investigation of crimes.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the educational quality is improving and children gain a lot of knowledge in their childhood. Should public schools give the administration’s support? In this essay, I will explain the reason and solve this problem.

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Some people argue that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Job satisfaction or having enough money to fulfil basic requirements is the primary need of every person. While some argue that accepting the conditions sooner will be good for a person , others feel that making efforts to tackle the situation is beneficial for a person's development.I undoubtedly concur with the second statement as stagnation creates a hindrance to one's growth.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Issues related to the crime rate are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that because of the development of technology, criminal situations have fallen over recent years. I totally agree with this assertion and the explanation will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative form of medicine. However, at best, these methods are ineffective, and at worst, they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In the contemporary world, the demand for substitute medicine is increasing. on the other hand, it is argued that these alternatives are not so effective or maybe hazardous sometimes. I completely disagree with this notion because they have been released to national use before being tested by experts hence considering these types of medicines as dangerous is wrong.

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An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

Nowadays, many children are dwelling on different kinds of junk foods that have less nutritional value as compared to traditional home-cooked meals, leading to many associated health risks, one of which is overweightness. This essay will firstly, examine various negative aspects of consuming an unhealthy diet trend and secondly, some of the feasible solutions will be discussed.

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Crucial environmental issues have been destroying our planet recently, with are heating waves and cutting trees. There is an ongoing debate whether global warming or deforestation has the most impact on the world. In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own point of view.

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In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today’s world?

At present, In certain parts of the world, few nations are trying to integrate lots of subjects into the curriculum for the kids in schools. However, others are teaching only the courses that are required for a certain work role. In my opinion, I consider the latter method to be best due to the fact that rather than studying many courses that are of no use, it is best to try only a few which can be monetized.

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Some people think that quality art can be made by anyone while others think that it requires talent and ability. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Some believe that art ought to be left to talented professionals while others believe anyone can make worthwhile pieces. In my opinion, the inclination is the trigger to create masterpieces as well as the available resources on the OTT platform can play a pivotal role in aiding anybody’s desire.

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Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals claim that luck is the most crucial element contributing to a person's success. While I accept that luck does have an important role in helping people reach their targets, I would argue that hard work and determination are much more crucial factors leading to the achievement of an individual.

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Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has caused more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

It is true that there are more chances given to females presently compared to the old ways. Some people feel that this scenario has given more issues than correcting it. However, I strongly disagree with this, I think that the changes that has had given equality within the community thus end up alleviating rather than hardship.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Undeniably, in the contemporary era, people have diverse opportunities concerning which they can adopt. It is compellingly argued by some that individuals are in favour of this idea that we have a sizeable number of choices. In my opinion, I totally agree with this viewpoint, and in this essay, I will support my point of view with examples.

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Many people believe that we should protect all wild animals while others believe we should just protect some of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The degradation of the biosphere, which has pushed several species to the brink of extinction, has become a major concern for the international community. Nevertheless, there remains a heated debate of whether the protective measure should be applied to all wild animals or only to some of them. This essay will discuss both views, before reaching the conclusion of my take that we should conserve all animals without discrimination.

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Education should be accessible to people of all economic backgrounds. All levels of education, from primary school to tertiary education should be free. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the issue that the educational system should freely be at disposal of whole students ranging from primary school to higher education is controversial. I completely agree with this statement and there will be two reasons behind this which will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is commonly believed that social awareness plays an important role in the success of society and no one can deny it. However, in recent years, we have witnessed that reading online due to being cheaper is replacing the hard copies. I personally believe that this trend will continue significantly and digital information will be used by far more than the paper-based types.

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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

Modern life suggests a great number of opportunities to be a tourist in foreign countries. There are several reasons for that. One of the most significant is that some cities attract with hospitality and service. Personally, I think that multicultural tourism has more advantages than disadvantages. Now, I will explain my point of view.

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Write about the following topic. In the past, most people spent their entire career working for one company, whereas people nowadays move from one job to another. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each? Which do you think is better? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Previously, the dominant culture about jobs was to choose a singular place throughout life compared to these days where people in most cases are swinging from one job to another. From my perspective, I think changing workplaces is a positive trend although it has sometimes a huge risk. So in the upcoming paragraph, I'm going to light the pros and cons of each.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is some objection against studying literature who thinks that it is such a time-consuming subject in high school. I totally disagree with this opinion, which I believe that not only reading or writing novels and poems could improve skills, it also helps the students to identify what their turn-ons are and what are not.

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