IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 32

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for ex.., through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In may cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that technological devices which keep the citizens under constant surveillance grow in importance. To some extent, the monitored subjects may not know the existence of this observation. I am inclined to the view that its drawbacks outweigh the merits.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, human beings have been witnessed to spend most of their time at work. Whereas some individuals prefer working in an interesting position rather than earning a high salary, others claim that a well-paid career is a key to happiness. I believe, however, that working in a healthy atmosphere is much more important than receiving a good income. In this essay, I will discuss both views and declare why I agree with the first party.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

Our habits influence our fitness and our planet more than we could ever imagine. Why should food choices make an exception? Nowadays, more and more people are changing their routines to follow a diet without fish and meat, claiming that this will help improve their well-being as well as the whole planet. In this essay, I will acknowledge this view and explain why I think this is an excellent decision.

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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the state has a responsibility to provides educational and health facilities free of costs for all citizens. Personally, I totally agree with that statement and I feel this way because of two reasons that I will explain in the following essay.

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Many people are doing their shopping on the Internet nowadays. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online.

Due to the increasing accessibility of the Internet online shopping has skyrocketed in recent years. In this essay, I intend to delve into the pros and cons of purchasing products over the internet.

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"In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion."

People have different views about the priority of developing local transport in most countries of the world. While improving the existing public transport is necessary for the traffic convenience to residents . However, I firmly believe that the investment in high-speed trains construction between cities has economic significance to a country.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In modern society, there is a tendency among some people to work for themselves instead of working for an authority. While there are logical reasons for this prefered way, there are some drawbacks to this too.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

There is an opinion that sports hold equal importance in the lives of grown-up individuals and kids.I support the given view furthermore, I even believe that games are more needed for the minors than elders.The aim of this essay is to articulate my perception.

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Some people think that it is better to build more public parks and sports facilities in new towns rather than shopping malls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether shopping centres are more important for new towns or public services. Some people argue that there are more advantages to build public and more useful areas in new cities while others reject that argument. Personally, I strongly agree with the first statement and I feel this way because of two reasons that will be explained in the following essay.

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When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programmes) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion?

Some people believed that the expansion of international media brings negative effects on cultural diversity. Although there are some drawbacks of conveying the same messages to global audiences, I consider it will not harm cultural diversity.

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Some people think that parents should set strict rules for their children if they want them to succeed in life. Others think that strict rules are not necessary for children to obtain success. Which do you think is better?

Whether strict rules for children lead to obtaining success in their future is arguable. Some people believe in benefits from the authorities, while others do not. From my personal experience and others’ cases of higher performance in their lives, I’ve thought that they are unnecessary and even disturb to grow children’s talents. More specific reasons and examples are as follows.

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Many business in the world today are run by family members. Do the advantages of family-run business outweigh the disadvantages?

Operating a family business has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present world. While proponents of the argument are in favour, the opponents are completely against the relevance of the statement. In my opinion, family-run businesses have more positive impacts than negatives around the globe. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of the statement.

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"Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?"

It is argued by some people that music could cross genders, generations and nations beyond individuals or an area. I firmly agree that it is not only one of the effective communications among all the people but also a way to bridge the gap between different cultures all over the world.

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It is argued that university student should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects? To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that studying a variety of courses at the university is more beneficial than taking uniquely a few subjects . In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view and think that is specialized in some branch of knowledge can be the best way of education.

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Some employers want to be able to contacts their staff at a all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

A few managers require their juniors to be available for contact throughout the week even on a holiday. In my opinion,the given type of attitude of the employers would definitely annoy the employees and have more drawbacks.The aim of the essay is to outline both benefits and drawbacks of the given type of scenario and elaborate on my opinion.

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To be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In today's stressful behaviour, sports have an outstanding contribution to preserving a healthy and agile body. Many people say that being physically strong is essential, while numerous tend to increase mental energy. I have considered two aspects according to perception, and this upcoming essay will describe the importance of both strengths previously giving any final advice in this article.

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Governments should spend money on railways than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Infrastructure development plays a vital role in the quality of life of citizens. It is thought by some that the government ought to invest more in rail networks than in road infrastructure. I entirely agree with this view from environmental and social perspectives.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.

In the present age, there has been much discussion revolving around the issue of whether the amount of income for some persons is extremely high in some countries. Many people believe that it is good for a nation, while others think that the government has a responsibility to control the earning outcomes of each individual. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view.

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Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?

Children obesity has become a worrying topic in recent years. There are several reasons leading to this.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that the governments of wealthy countries should help the lesser developed nations in the advancement of sectors like health, education and commerce. Personally, I agree with this viewpoint and the following paragraphs shall outline my reasons for this belief.

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