IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 31

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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The growth of Online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that online shopping is increasing significantly each day and has become the best way of purchases. While some people claim that this trend can pose a great threat to retail companies . I completely disagree with this view and think that it has some negative consequences for the retail sector.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that the typical standard of the health of people would probably decrease in the future as compared to the current situation. In this essay, I will be discussing the primary reasons why I strongly oppose this view.

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In many countries students take a year off after finishing school and work or travel during this period. Should students take a gap year before attending universities? What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

In this ambitious world, migration for education is becoming a trend among younglings. Many nations government inspires youngsters to do job or tour annually after completion of schooling and before admitting in an academy. In the forthcoming paragraph, this essay would elaborate on both pros and cons and exemplify with lucid examples.

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In the past, when students did a , they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, the majority of students tends to attend their higher educations in a foreign nation instead of their homeland. In my opinion , I take the view that this tendency provides plenty of valuable strengths and its advantages outweigh the disadvantages .

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, air travel plays a very important role in our society and as well as in boosting the economy. The opportunities provided by it are countless. It has immensely helped to modernise the globe and also enables us to reach new extremities in life. Regardless of a few adverse effects on the environment due to aviation, I completely disagree with limiting air travel because of that reason.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it very difficult to define? What factors are important to achieve happiness?

Happiness is a subjective phenomenon as the factors that determine it is varying according to each personality; but, the presence of peace of mind enhances life's beauty. This essay will make an attempt to shed some light on the determinants associate with its existence.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that the innovations mainly the Internet, are having significant changes in the methods of buying and selling goods. Therefore, these changes are transforming the lives of consumers. While some people argue that the Internet shopping effects are irrelevant, I would argue that it is in fact dominant for two main reasons.

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Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher position. What is your view on this? Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.

Many people believe that senior employees should obtain higher salaries and encourage their career pathway. In the following paragraphs, the many reasons to support my opinion will be discussed in this essay, and the clearly exemplified will be given.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, encouraging an adolescent to try hard for achieving something is the key to success in many nations. It is profitable as children are influencing to accomplish much stuff which was difficult to achieve. However, exaggerating this type of motivation might be harmful to kid in the future. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of that message.

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in there families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own.

In today's world, it is a very popular trend to go to a job for both husband and wife. Almost all couples are working nowadays. some people believe that it is ok to work with both parents so families financial condition will be improved while others are opposite because they claim it might cause a problem in children's upbringing. This essay will analyse its effects for and against both parents working.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling Is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Environmental issues have become a grave concern nowadays across the globe. Every day the government is implementing new policies to protect nature. Few people argue that garbage from dwellings is not optimally recycled and the authorities must make it mandatory. In my perspective, it can be a beneficial approach in targetting this problem to a great extent.

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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that the traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Recently, there has been an emerging of many other teaching methods far from the conventional ones. As a result, debates have been raised over the eminence and appropriateness of each approach. From my perspective, each method has its merit to students and the combination of both should be considered to maximize the outcome in teaching.

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People think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problems. Give your opinion.

Contemporarily, cars and other vehicles are the major contributors to air pollution and society prefers to use their own conveyance to transfer rather than using public transportation. Therefore, it is widely believed that one solution to environmental problems would be for governments to raise the price of petrol. In my opinion, this is the optimal way to deal with polluting issues.

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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for poverty? What can be done to help the poor?

The fact that every country has poor people is very disheartening. Regardless, every country has different ways of dealing with the impoverished. Below are some of the reasons that cause poverty and things that need to be done to help the needy.

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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through another media. Discuss bot views and give your opinion?

There is a phenomenon among citizens that some people prefer to choose newspapers as the best way to get information. Meanwhile, others argue that there is another medium where they can find out data much better. Even though the two arguments are logical and reasonable and the last argument could be more acceptable, I would like to explain through two sides points of view.

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"Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion."

People have different views about the manners of dealing with adverse situations. While learning to compromise and adapt to the surroundings is better than struggling to get even worse situations, I firmly believe that most of the time, we still have a chance to improve for the better to a large extent, which would do more good than harm.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Many argue that it is essential for kids to attend school while others argue that educating them at home is beneficial. In my opinion, the latter view outweighs the benefits of the former view. In this essay, I shall delve into both methods and provide a supporting point for my thought.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries.Some people think this is good for country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount of people can earn. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays the struggle for social justice is one of the central discussion points all over the globe. Owning to the controversies caused by the evidence that there are those who appear to be more successful in life and enjoy high revenue disturbs millions, some advocate the idea that governmental bodies should be in charge of putting limits on the maximal sum of money that can be earned whereas others, on the contrary, are ardent adherents of the matter that a country´s economic state only profits from those getting a substantial salary for their work. From my point of view, it is only a human himself who is responsible for their wealth so there can be no limits on the amount of income in the modern world.

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Traditional food is undergoing great changes and is being replaced by new diet. What do you think are the reasons and what do you think about this phenomenon?

Traditional food is undergoing great changes and is being replaced by a new diet. The major reason behind it is the modification in people's taste. I personally feel it is the main reason but there are other explanations as well. In the essay, I will explain all the causes concerning the event. In my opinion, I firmly believe that this phenomenon has more negative sides compared to positive ones.

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The increase in food production is mostly due to fertilisers and better machinery. Yet, some think that it harms human health and communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It would be argued by some that high schools should make unpaid community service a compulsory part of the curriculum. To a certain extent, I agree that society and the students seem to benefit from it. However, I also think that unpaid work should just be a voluntary programme.

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