IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 34

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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More and more people are using internet nowadays for their personal thing such as shopping and paying bills. Does advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days people have been using online facilities for their convenience. While an increasing number of the public have been ordering products and paying invoices online, I agree with this statement, and I will discuss how e-shops are beneficial and unsafe to the community in this essay.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some public argues that there are highly lots of options for contemporary people. This view deserves a significant topic of discussion by ordinary citizens and politicians regarding the advantages and the disadvantages of a capitalistic society. As a representative citizen of the middle-class in South Korea, I partly agree with the statement above. The reasons why are as follows.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

In this day and age, work satisfaction has become a topic of interest for the majority of working grown-ups. It is claimed that being satisfied with the career path contributes greatly to the physical and mental health of humans. In this essay, reasons for gratification at the workplace and the answer to the question of how this can be achieved by all workers will be drawn.

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Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this, Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, work progress becomes necessary to lead a good lifestyle. Many young people are constantly making changes in their positions and professions. I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of this approach, and the causes associated with this tendency has been explained in the following article.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it is anticipated that in many nations, the prospective age ratio of the older community will exceed the percentage of the young community, the benefits and harms of which will be discussed in detail in a forthcoming article before I reach a final decision.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, although science has made immense progress in the medical world which has made it possible to cure the deadly diseases that come before human beings, it becomes helpless before the will of God. It is believed that in many countries, the future age ratio of the older community will exceed the percentage of the young community, the benefits and harms of which will be discussed in detail in a forthcoming article before I reach a final decision.

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Some people believe that to become successful at a sport requires a natural ability, others think that hardwork and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Mainly, to become a successful individual in a fun field may be required various abilities including natural abilities and more practice relying on one's belief. In my opinion, it seems to me that more training is more essential rather than an innate skill. This essay will discuss both innate and hardworking abilities with my perspectives.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some people that the teaching system from schooling to college has only theoretical information, and not practical exposure. I agree with the statement. I would like to put up my points on it.

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The Government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, due to the advancement of technology, scientists have provided evidence of life on other planets. The government had been very supportive of this research financially; however, there have been recent arguments where some people believe it can be used better in addressing problems of the public. In this essay, I will discuss my notes on this concern and provide my extent of agreement.

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Planting trees is very important for the environment. Some people says trees should be planted in the vacant areas of metropolitan while others says housing facilities should be build instead. Do you agree of disagree?

Oxygen is an essential element for the survival of the human race. One section of the society thinks that more plantations should be there in unoccupied places, on the contrary; some individuals believe that accommodations should be made over there. I will express my views on both opinions in this essay.

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Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while other argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For the last 100 years, animal experimentations occur for developing medicines. Although many people support the use of animal testing to save humans life because Human being is a superior creature than other living organisms on earth. Therefore, I believe that ethically it is wrong but nowadays, we can use computerized software Robots, or other biotechnologies to save animals.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem

Currently, most students have been having difficulties paying attention during classes. Although they make an effort to focus on the class it is a hard task. This essay will discuss what are probably reasons for this problem and what can be done to address it.

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Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the works of their own countries instead of the works of art from other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ancient times and cultures have been kept well for centuries by museums. However, it triggers a heated debate whether a state should focus on their own historical events rather than diversifying on other histories around the globe. I believe that the first statement has strong ground although it is true that one should be aware of other arts and past events.

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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

Contemporarily, in several countries, bicycle and car users have a tendency to travel on the same avenue. There are galore problems caused by this propensity as well as some achievable contrivances for authorities and roadsters to diminish those route issues.

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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in international travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing?

Travelling has been an essential part of the lives of people. Over the past ten years, international travel has greatly increased in popularity. In this essay, I will be discussing the major reasons why this has been the case. Additionally, I will be giving out my opinion on the statement.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In modern-day society, the criteria according to which people are judged are changing. Some believe that currently, the worth of an individual is directly corresponding to their income, whereas traditional values are being forgotten. Even though there are certain individuals that concentrate their attention on wealth, I disagree with that statement, due to the reason that people are appraised by the public according to their deeds, and not their earnings.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities. Therefore, some certain jobs are suitable for men and some jobs are suitable for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that men and women are born with different characteristics, so job opportunities are open to different people. While I agree that two genders have distinct qualities, I would argue that they can undertake any kind of job if they wish.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays, digital transformation is crucial in everything that we do including banking. The introduction of e-wallet in many countries provides great experience in commerce transactions compared to the drawbacks.

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Marriages are bigger and more expansive nowadays than in the past. Do the advantages of this overweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, marriage is considered an event to showcase one's financial ability to society. People literally compete when it comes to organizing the event. There is no argument that today's marriages are way more lavish compared to the one's from the past. Although most people think it is a waste of money for the host, I see it as a job providing opportunity. In this essay, I will discuss my notes on this topic and provide a few positive and negative aspects of it.

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern world, life expectancy has been increasing gradually due to better health care and innovation in technology. It is believed by some people that as many people are living much longer, the retirement age should be increased significantly. However, in my opinion, I totally disagree with this. The increasing retirement age of the previous employer might be the reason for creating a higher unemployment rate and demean the younger capabilities.

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