IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 34

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that young people should participate in voluntary work in their leisure time because this may provide a positive impact on the youth and society . In my opinion , I completely agree with this view and think that there are many useful aspects to this approach .

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Caring for children is very important for our society. Therefore all mothers and fathers should take a child care training course. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the crucial aspects of a community is safeguarding the kids.Hence, comes an opinion that parents must indulge themselves in going to the sessions related to baby care.I totally agree with the given notion,also, feel that they can learn the baby nurturing skills from elderly people.The aim of the essay is to elaborate on my viewpoint.

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Large businesses having big budgets for marketing and promotion as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?

In this contemporary era, the operation of trade organizations pushing the world today, with many companies being substantial and spread across the globe and many doing business on a small scale. It can be seen that big business companies spend massive money on advertisement and publicity, due to which the public find these products more attractive to purchase. This tendency can lead to major issues, and the following article discusses ways to resolve it.

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Some people think that because children find subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult, they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

Although some people claim subjects like mathematics and philosophy should be optional to children due to their difficulty, they are essential and necessary to build a well-development adult full of knowledge and with perspectives to follow a career. With these thoughts, I completely disagree with the idea in which they ought to be optional. This essay will discuss why these themes should be practised by children and I will explain in detail my conception about this idea.

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There are severe social consequences to housing shortages in cities and only the government can solve these problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At present, several countries have a serious social problem about a lack of residence in towns, and they believe only the administration can improve it. As for this statement, I totally agree with it because the government can operate the policy to expand jobs to rural areas, and They can develop countrysides to be more convenient to live in.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it is anticipated that in many countries, the future age ratio of the older community will exceed the percentage of the young community, the benefits and harms of which will be discussed in detail in a forthcoming article before I reach a final decision.

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There were advantages and disadvantages of living in small towns.

As current and former small-metropolis residents can attest , living in less-populated regions has its own unique sets of positives and negatives. This essay will discuss what I consider the benefits and drawbacks of residing in a small city.

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The internet has brought about many changes into our day to day life. Nowadays we are doing things such as mailing, communication much faster. Do these developments have more advantages than disadvantages?

Nowadays, technology plays a vital role in our day to day life. The development of the internet has made communication much easier in comparison with earlier days. Although it has various advantages, there are few notable disadvantages tailored to it. In this essay, I will discuss both of these aspects with an explanation for each of them based on my personal experience.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, one fundamental problem is the one in regard to the environment. There is a debate, one group believes that the extinction of especial living organs is the most important matter, while others think there are other issues which are more significant. I agree with the second view.

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Today’s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, many people live throughout the stress and such tendency can not be joyful. Adolescents, in fact, are affected by adults who pressurize them so life becomes complicated. From my point of view, it is true, but some do not want to believe in it.

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Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians not individuals as individuals can do too little. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The given statement conveys that the duty of safeguarding the Earth's climate is to be performed only by the political leaders and is common man has no part in this as contributions by individuals are not that countable.I truly believe that Government leaders are more responsible for looking after the environment. However, every citizen is equally responsible when it comes to taking the steps to save the planet.

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More and more people are using internet nowadays for their personal thing such as shopping and paying bills. Does advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days people have been using online facilities for their convenience. While an increasing number of the public have been ordering products and paying invoices online, I agree with this statement, and I will discuss how e-shops are beneficial and unsafe to the community in this essay.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some public argues that there are highly lots of options for contemporary people. This view deserves a significant topic of discussion by ordinary citizens and politicians regarding the advantages and the disadvantages of a capitalistic society. As a representative citizen of the middle-class in South Korea, I partly agree with the statement above. The reasons why are as follows.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What are the factors that contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

In this day and age, work satisfaction has become a topic of interest for the majority of working grown-ups. It is claimed that being satisfied with the career path contributes greatly to the physical and mental health of humans. In this essay, reasons for gratification at the workplace and the answer to the question of how this can be achieved by all workers will be drawn.

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Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this, Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, work progress becomes necessary to lead a good lifestyle. Many young people are constantly making changes in their positions and professions. I think the benefits outweigh the drawbacks of this approach, and the causes associated with this tendency has been explained in the following article.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it is anticipated that in many nations, the prospective age ratio of the older community will exceed the percentage of the young community, the benefits and harms of which will be discussed in detail in a forthcoming article before I reach a final decision.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, although science has made immense progress in the medical world which has made it possible to cure the deadly diseases that come before human beings, it becomes helpless before the will of God. It is believed that in many countries, the future age ratio of the older community will exceed the percentage of the young community, the benefits and harms of which will be discussed in detail in a forthcoming article before I reach a final decision.

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Some people believe that to become successful at a sport requires a natural ability, others think that hardwork and practice are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Mainly, to become a successful individual in a fun field may be required various abilities including natural abilities and more practice relying on one's belief. In my opinion, it seems to me that more training is more essential rather than an innate skill. This essay will discuss both innate and hardworking abilities with my perspectives.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by some people that the teaching system from schooling to college has only theoretical information, and not practical exposure. I agree with the statement. I would like to put up my points on it.

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The Government is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money addressing the problems of public. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, due to the advancement of technology, scientists have provided evidence of life on other planets. The government had been very supportive of this research financially; however, there have been recent arguments where some people believe it can be used better in addressing problems of the public. In this essay, I will discuss my notes on this concern and provide my extent of agreement.

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