IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 30

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Other, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Others argue that imposing stricter punishments is vital in order to lessen traffic accidents. Meanwhile, some believe that there are other methods for road safety improvement. In this essay, I will be discussing both views and arrive at a conclusion before expressing my opinion.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Coupled with the swift advance of technology, the automatic fields are flourishing. Several people argue that automatic vehicles will be their main means of transport. Although there are both merits and demerits of this trend, I believe that it has lots of benefits compared to minor drawbacks that it might bring.

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Living in a country where you have to speak foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Staying in a nation where you have to speak a foreign dialect can cause serious social and practical difficulties. I completely agree that a foreign language in another country can cause social and practical problems.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Wildlife protection has become one of the major concerns of many nations. Governments spend financial resources to conserve endangered animals. However, a segment of society is concerned that wildlife preservation in the modern world is a waste of money. I totally disagree with this notion. The following paragraphs will highlight my opinion along with relevant examples.

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People tend to work longer hours nowadays. People say that working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and the society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays people seem to be working for longer hours. As a result, they feel it is having negative impacts on themselves, their families and society. That's why it has been proposed that working hours should be restricted. In my opinion, I agree with the proposition since I believe folks need to be in a healthy physical and mental state to accomplish goals. The essay below highlights the adverse effects caused due to the issue and the importance of restricting toiling time.

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Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have the right to advertise. What is your opinion?

It is an irrefutable fact that overconsumption of fast food may lead to health-related issues. Therefore, a segment of society is convinced that fast food advertising is irresponsible and should be banned. Others, however, believe the opposite. I personally feel that fast food companies should not be restricted from advertising. The following paragraphs will highlight my opinion along with relevant examples.

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In some countries, more and more people becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are reasons for this? How can people research this?

In today's world, the trend of researching the history of houses is increasing day by day. Nowadays, people from different countries are getting interested to know about the past of the home they stay in. The primary reason is to compare the present architectural construction with the previous design. Besides, people can do more research on this by using the internet.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that the innovations mainly the Internet, have caused a significant change in the methods of buying and selling goods. Therefore, these changes have transformed the lives of consumers. In my opinion, I would argue that it is in fact dominant for two main reasons.

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The growth of Online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that online shopping is increasing significantly each day and has become the best way of purchases. While some people claim that this trend can pose a great threat to retail companies . I completely disagree with this view and think that it has some negative consequences for the retail sector.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that the typical standard of the health of people would probably decrease in the future as compared to the current situation. In this essay, I will be discussing the primary reasons why I strongly oppose this view.

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In many countries students take a year off after finishing school and work or travel during this period. Should students take a gap year before attending universities? What are the advantages and disadvantages of it?

In this ambitious world, migration for education is becoming a trend among younglings. Many nations government inspires youngsters to do job or tour annually after completion of schooling and before admitting in an academy. In the forthcoming paragraph, this essay would elaborate on both pros and cons and exemplify with lucid examples.

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In the past, when students did a , they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, the majority of students tends to attend their higher educations in a foreign nation instead of their homeland. In my opinion , I take the view that this tendency provides plenty of valuable strengths and its advantages outweigh the disadvantages .

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world, air travel plays a very important role in our society and as well as in boosting the economy. The opportunities provided by it are countless. It has immensely helped to modernise the globe and also enables us to reach new extremities in life. Regardless of a few adverse effects on the environment due to aviation, I completely disagree with limiting air travel because of that reason.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it very difficult to define? What factors are important to achieve happiness?

Happiness is a subjective phenomenon as the factors that determine it is varying according to each personality; but, the presence of peace of mind enhances life's beauty. This essay will make an attempt to shed some light on the determinants associate with its existence.

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New technologies and ways of buying and selling are transforming the lives of consumers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no doubt that the innovations mainly the Internet, are having significant changes in the methods of buying and selling goods. Therefore, these changes are transforming the lives of consumers. While some people argue that the Internet shopping effects are irrelevant, I would argue that it is in fact dominant for two main reasons.

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Some people think that only staff who worked in a company for a long time should be promoted to a higher position. What is your view on this? Give reasons and relevant examples for your answer.

Many people believe that senior employees should obtain higher salaries and encourage their career pathway. In the following paragraphs, the many reasons to support my opinion will be discussed in this essay, and the clearly exemplified will be given.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, encouraging an adolescent to try hard for achieving something is the key to success in many nations. It is profitable as children are influencing to accomplish much stuff which was difficult to achieve. However, exaggerating this type of motivation might be harmful to kid in the future. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of that message.

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In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in there families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents absence. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own.

In today's world, it is a very popular trend to go to a job for both husband and wife. Almost all couples are working nowadays. some people believe that it is ok to work with both parents so families financial condition will be improved while others are opposite because they claim it might cause a problem in children's upbringing. This essay will analyse its effects for and against both parents working.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling Is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Environmental issues have become a grave concern nowadays across the globe. Every day the government is implementing new policies to protect nature. Few people argue that garbage from dwellings is not optimally recycled and the authorities must make it mandatory. In my perspective, it can be a beneficial approach in targetting this problem to a great extent.

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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning while others believe that the traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Recently, there has been an emerging of many other teaching methods far from the conventional ones. As a result, debates have been raised over the eminence and appropriateness of each approach. From my perspective, each method has its merit to students and the combination of both should be considered to maximize the outcome in teaching.

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