IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 36

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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The number of people suffering from the health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

People's lifestyle has taken a new shape in recent years. Less physical activities have led to mental stress as well as myriad health-related problems. Some experts opine that alternative medicine can help to cure such diseases. Personally, I agree with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Schools should stop using books for teaching and instead use films, TV and computers. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many education centres switch the teaching method from books to multimedia. Those media, ranging from films to computers are widely used in schooling. Effective teaching attributes to rapid updates of database and eye-catching animation. I agree that schools should opt to utilise the media rather than books in terms of teaching.

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Some people think that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other in modern society, while others believe that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people believe that society has become more dependent on each other, others think the opposite, in other words, real independence. On both sides, there are many speculations and I believe in a society that has been more dependent. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain my opinion.

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Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local business are unable to compete. Some people thought that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree??

Shopping through grocery stores in your locality has conventionally been considered quite safe and convenient. However, due to the emergence of supermarkets, the local players are under threat and are on the verge of shutting down. I strongly agree that the small and local players are losing market share as against the supermarkets and bigger stores, resulting in local communities being in a dying state.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Researchers show that criminal activities are low when pupils have academic degrees. The effective way to reduce crime is to educate criminals while they are still in the prison house; however, in my opinion, educating people always do better in their personal and social lives.

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Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words.

In today's era young generation prefer to spend time playing games on computers and mobile phones and pay very little attention to traditional leisure activities. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the repercussions of playing electronic games and how this problem can be solved by giving certain solutions.

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Some people think in order to continually improve the quality of education, high school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others feel that this would result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

With agreeable to the order of the day, it is inevitable to find ways to improve education quality. Consequently, whereas some individuals claim that adolescents of secondary schools should evaluate their instructors so as to develop the standard of teaching, others contend that this might create indiscipline in classrooms and might be regarded as a way of disrespect. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that children do not have the proper ability to evaluate their respected supervisors.

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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In the past few years, medical care is constantly on the rise people are benefited by taking medical services and experience long life. This situation has some positive aspects, also has some drawbacks; however, in my opinion, the former outweigh the latter. All these will explore in the ensuring essay.

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Many people argue that smoking should be banned due to its harmful effects on human health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Smoking is a common addiction these days. Many experts opine that it should be banned completely due to its detrimental impact on the human body. Personally, I am in consummate accord with the aforementioned statement and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like . Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future , such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

It has been a controversial subject that people argued the university-level graduate should have the privilege of deciding the range they wished to pursue, while the others disagreed. While I am inclined to the former notion, I shall now discuss both sides of the coin.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As the upcoming decades are of the internet , it is believed that the population would stop purchasing the dailies and paperbacks as the whole required information is freely available on the world wide web.Even though I see a point in the given statement, I feel that the public will not stop purchasing age-old information origins.The aim of this essay is to elaborate on my opinion.

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18. The range and quality of food that we can buy has changed because of technological and scientific advances. Some people regard this change as an improvement, while others believe that it is harmful. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A variety of food products these days showcase an evolved change. Due to advancements in science and technology, the quality and range of food-related products have wider benefits. Some consider it harmful, while others see it as an improvement. In today's essay, I will be discussing my notes on both views and provide my opinion.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Climate change is a usual process that exists in the ecosystem. Many experts opine that people should find a way to live this utilitarian process rather than preventing it. Personally, I am in consummate disaccord with the aforementioned notion and the following paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Some universities have the same number of seats for male and female students in all of the subjects and some others do not. I completely agree that there should be an equal chance for both genders to be accepted in their desired major.

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The advent of technological inventions and various ways of transport have made individuals stay and perform from any corner of the world.Despite the fact that the transformation has a few pitfalls, overall, it has provided a lot of advantages.The aim of this essay is to outline both sides of the situation and elaborate on my opinion.

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Learning to play team sports is an important part of a child’s education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer. And include any relevant experience from your own knowledge.

It is an irrefutable fact that sports are essential in a school's curriculum. Some people believe that playing sports in a team is more beneficial for children rather than playing individually. Since the objective of learning is all-around development, I fully agree with this statement. The following paragraphs will highlight my personal perspective along with relevant examples.

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Do you think it is good to push students to study hard in their youth?

Many countries are redefining their education strategies to match the competitive environment across the world. Some experts opine that it is required to push students to study hard in their youth for a better future. Personally, I am not in consummate accord with the aforementioned notion and the following paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge to school-leavers in most countries. How far do you agree with this assessment? What other challenges face young people today?

Due to the development of multinational companies around the world, the employment standards have been raised; whereas, the education system has not made changes. School-leavers are set free into this challenging world with tiny knowledge. In this essay, I will be discussing my notes on this assessment.

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Advertising can influence the way people think, so it has negative effects. Do you agree or disagree?

In the current world, some people think that advertising has a negative influence on them while others think otherwise. From my perspective, there are some truths for both views. The following paragraphs will elucidate my stance.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinions?

With the advancements in modern technology, Artificial intelligence has brought a revolution in the world. Many experts opine that AI robots impose a threat to all human jobs. Personally, I am not in favour of the aforementioned notion and the following paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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