IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 36

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Do you think children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded.

Children are the future of any country. Many experts opine that their demeanour is better when they are physically punished. Personally, I am in consummate disaccord with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the advancement in technology, robots take place in our lives day by day, and I believe this has many benefits to human beings’ future, such as decreasing work errors. On the other hand, some opine machines should not be considered a solution to people’s development because there may be harmful effects on society like losing jobs.

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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, humans are heavily adapted to advanced technologies and it has become an integral part of life. Robots are considered to be one of the greatest innovations of mankind. Certain individuals believe that they are harmful to humans while some stratum of society argue that they are crucial for the future. I personally believe that robotics is a positive development for the world.

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Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has made the world small, even our classrooms have shrunk into online meetings. It is the opinion of some people that traditional schools are no longer required since the internet offers a myriad of resources. They argue that homeschooling is better. I strongly disagree with this view, I feel that kids need to have a proper school setup. I 'll describe the reasons for my view in this essay.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In the present day, most students have been having difficulties paying attention during classes. Although they make an effort to focus on the class it is a hard task. This essay will discuss what are probably reasons for this problem and what can be done to address it.

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Whether we approve it or not, computer indeed has a prominent impact on our kids' future. This influence can be positive or negative depending on how long and in which way they are being used. I agree with the fact that its cons are being far more than its pros practically.

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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is claimed that a majority of the population is terrified of going outside for the reason of becoming a victim of crime. Essentially, there has been a heated discussion on what could be done. There are two-point views prevalent among them all. Thus, some part of the population believes that lawbreaking could be prevented from being committed and others are saying that there nothing can be done. As far as I am concerned, most of the atrocities can be prevented

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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

It is undeniable that plenty of people is struggling with being able to work and leading their lives apart from work. Indeed, there are a plethora of problems associated with the issue, such as personal life and mental health as well. Nonetheless, there is certainly a way to attain stability in between personal life and one's job.

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some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor and rich people. Others think it is having the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A set of individuals opine that the present technological advancements are oversizing the difference in the standard of living of the wealthy and the underprivileged,whereas, others argue that the reverse is the case.The aim of this essay is to outline these two views and give my opinion.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become use to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported.

News agencies control the type of reports to be shown to the audience. Many times, they do not publish the important information in visual media rather prefer to present it in printed form. There are many parameters that affect the selection; I will be discussing them along with the reason for creating interest in negative news. I agree that emphasis should be given to positive words.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, traffic creates many problems and hampering the economic growth of a city. It is believed by some people that the amount of travel can be reduced only by restricting the public movement from home for work, school or shopping. Although it will reduce the trip congestion a little bit, in my opinion, it is not the only practice to reduce the transportation problem. However, making digital and proper construction of roads may be another process of reducing transit.

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Discuss both the viewpoints and give your opinion.

Every country has some conspicuous history associated with itself. Many experts opine that past history is less important for the present generation.However, I am in consummate disaccord with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate both the stances with lucid examples.

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Should students be allowed to choose which classes they take, or should they be required to take the same classes as everyone else? What are the advantages and disadvantages of each approach to education? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is a very important factor to consider for society. On one hand, some argue that students should be given an option to choose their classes, while others state that all youngsters should have the same subjects. I 'll explore both of these ideas in this essay.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

In developed countries purchase of a home is considered to be an important task for an adult person. It is often thought to be a bad idea to rent an apartment rather than buying it. I will be discussing the reason for it and the disadvantages of having a house.

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Some people believe that only governments should deal with medical care. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is considered by many that medical service should be an area that only the government interest in. I think private and public hospitals must go together in modern world’s countries ,unlike communist ones.

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The number of people suffering from the health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

People's lifestyle has taken a new shape in recent years. Less physical activities have led to mental stress as well as myriad health-related problems. Some experts opine that alternative medicine can help to cure such diseases. Personally, I agree with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Schools should stop using books for teaching and instead use films, TV and computers. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many education centres switch the teaching method from books to multimedia. Those media, ranging from films to computers are widely used in schooling. Effective teaching attributes to rapid updates of database and eye-catching animation. I agree that schools should opt to utilise the media rather than books in terms of teaching.

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Some people think that individuals are becoming more dependent on each other in modern society, while others believe that individuals are becoming more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people believe that society has become more dependent on each other, others think the opposite, in other words, real independence. On both sides, there are many speculations and I believe in a society that has been more dependent. In this essay, I will discuss both views and explain my opinion.

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Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small local business are unable to compete. Some people thought that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree??

Shopping through grocery stores in your locality has conventionally been considered quite safe and convenient. However, due to the emergence of supermarkets, the local players are under threat and are on the verge of shutting down. I strongly agree that the small and local players are losing market share as against the supermarkets and bigger stores, resulting in local communities being in a dying state.

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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Researchers show that criminal activities are low when pupils have academic degrees. The effective way to reduce crime is to educate criminals while they are still in the prison house; however, in my opinion, educating people always do better in their personal and social lives.

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