IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 35

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern world, life expectancy has been increasing gradually due to better health care and innovation in technology. It is believed by some people that as many people are living much longer, the pullout age should be increased significantly. However, in my opinion, I totally disagree with this. The increasing retirement life of the previous employer might be the reason for creating a higher unemployment percentage and demean the younger capabilities.

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Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

In today’s world, wives play vital roles in every aspect of society. Due to enhancement in education institutions, females got more options to work outside of their homes as compared to the ancient times. However, some people believe that this scenario leads to cause the problem rather than a solution to foster girl growth. This essay will discuss my views on why I am not convinced by the above statement given.

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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

Contemporarily, in several countries, bicycle and car users have a tendency to travel on the same tracks. There are galore problems caused by this propensity as well as some achievable contrivances for authorities and roadsters to diminish those route issues.

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More and more people are moving to big cities these days. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of living in a large city.

Issues related to living in a big city are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that nowadays, many people are leaving from suburban to urban areas. Despite the fact that this trend has some drawbacks, I would argue that there are more benefits.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, television became a hobby for children to watch in their spare time. Some people believe that TV cannot provide the level of learning as compared to books which creates a problem in society of illiteracy among kids. In this essay, I will discuss why I am completely agreeing with the statement.

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Some people say that parents have the most important role in a child’s development. However, others argue that other things like television or friends have the most significant influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The family's influence on a kid's upbringing is undeniably prominent, although there are some advocates of other elements to be the most impressive to raise a human being. Among these ,cases they refer to the children mates and social media. Following, I will argue why I think the latter is more similar to my point of view.

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More and more people are moving away from agriculture background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this. What solutions can you offer.

Nowadays, many people have a tendency of relocating from rural areas to urban cities for broader career opportunities. This essay believes the main consequences associated with this tendency are labour shortage in the countrysides and a surplus of the workforce in larger cities and suggests lifting motivation of workers and programs aimed at raising the economy in countrysides as the most viable solutions.

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4. Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in Zoos. Others, believe that there are good reasons of having Zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals are a necessary part of the environmental circle. However, a certain number of individuals believe that wild animals should not be staying in Zoos. In contrast, others think that there are a lot of advantages to having Zoological gardens. In my upcoming body paragraphs, I will explain each statement and illustrate my point of view.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in Zoos. Others, believe that there are good reasons of having Zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals are a necessary part of the environmental circle.A certain number of individuals believe that wild animals should not be staying in Zoos.While others think that there are a lot of advantages to having Zoological gardens.In my upcoming body paragraphs,I will give an explanation for each statement and will explain my point of view.

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Some People Believe Online Reading Materials Should Only Be Used For A Child To Learn To Read, Whereas Others Believe Only Printed Material Should Be Used. Discuss Both Views And Give Your Opinion.

People have different beliefs about the type of material to use for helping children in order to learn reading. While I disagree with the fact that they only have to use one source for their studies, I do believe online lessons and reading materials are way more useful than books.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is truly important for people to own their house in some part of the world. People prefer to purchase one instead of leasing one, which brings security to their lives. I believe that to be a household is more and more necessary, especially in the post epidemic. There are a few main reasons behind this situation, which I think is positive.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

It is considered by some that researchers and scientists should provide unlimited access to information they expose in their studies to the public. However, other people believe that such kind of knowledge is crucially precious to disseminate it through the crowd. I am personally of the first opinion. This essay will give reasons why.

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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is fair to state that education is people's first significant investment in their children as a successful student would stand a chance at a more positive career prospect. For many, learning lessons by heart is argued to be the ultimate way to graduate with flying colours. However, in my point of view, I mostly disagree.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

It is thought by many that nations, where wards are sent by their parent to a mixed-sex academy, have a better edge over their counterparts. In my opinion, I totally agree with the notion because it affects the build-up of early self-esteem in girls and restricts competitive spirit which affects the male child.

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In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

The citizens of a few nations are inclined towards purchasing a building to stay than living in rented ones.The major objective behind this kind of situation is to have your own residence without any restrictions imposed.I opine that it is beneficial for all individuals.The aim of the current essay is to elaborate on my opinion.

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Do you think children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded.

Children are the future of any country. Many experts opine that their demeanour is better when they are physically punished. Personally, I am in consummate disaccord with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the advancement in technology, robots take place in our lives day by day, and I believe this has many benefits to human beings’ future, such as decreasing work errors. On the other hand, some opine machines should not be considered a solution to people’s development because there may be harmful effects on society like losing jobs.

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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, humans are heavily adapted to advanced technologies and it has become an integral part of life. Robots are considered to be one of the greatest innovations of mankind. Certain individuals believe that they are harmful to humans while some stratum of society argue that they are crucial for the future. I personally believe that robotics is a positive development for the world.

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Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has made the world small, even our classrooms have shrunk into online meetings. It is the opinion of some people that traditional schools are no longer required since the internet offers a myriad of resources. They argue that homeschooling is better. I strongly disagree with this view, I feel that kids need to have a proper school setup. I 'll describe the reasons for my view in this essay.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In the present day, most students have been having difficulties paying attention during classes. Although they make an effort to focus on the class it is a hard task. This essay will discuss what are probably reasons for this problem and what can be done to address it.

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