IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 35

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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More and more people are moving away from agriculture background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this. What solutions can you offer.

Nowadays, many people have a tendency of relocating from rural areas to urban cities for broader career opportunities. This essay believes the main consequences associated with this tendency are labour shortage in the countrysides and a surplus of the workforce in larger cities and suggests lifting motivation of workers and programs aimed at raising the economy in countrysides as the most viable solutions.

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4. Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in Zoos. Others, believe that there are good reasons of having Zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals are a necessary part of the environmental circle. However, a certain number of individuals believe that wild animals should not be staying in Zoos. In contrast, others think that there are a lot of advantages to having Zoological gardens. In my upcoming body paragraphs, I will explain each statement and illustrate my point of view.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in Zoos. Others, believe that there are good reasons of having Zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Animals are a necessary part of the environmental circle.A certain number of individuals believe that wild animals should not be staying in Zoos.While others think that there are a lot of advantages to having Zoological gardens.In my upcoming body paragraphs,I will give an explanation for each statement and will explain my point of view.

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Some People Believe Online Reading Materials Should Only Be Used For A Child To Learn To Read, Whereas Others Believe Only Printed Material Should Be Used. Discuss Both Views And Give Your Opinion.

People have different beliefs about the type of material to use for helping children in order to learn reading. While I disagree with the fact that they only have to use one source for their studies, I do believe online lessons and reading materials are way more useful than books.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is truly important for people to own their house in some part of the world. People prefer to purchase one instead of leasing one, which brings security to their lives. I believe that to be a household is more and more necessary, especially in the post epidemic. There are a few main reasons behind this situation, which I think is positive.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

It is considered by some that researchers and scientists should provide unlimited access to information they expose in their studies to the public. However, other people believe that such kind of knowledge is crucially precious to disseminate it through the crowd. I am personally of the first opinion. This essay will give reasons why.

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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is fair to state that education is people's first significant investment in their children as a successful student would stand a chance at a more positive career prospect. For many, learning lessons by heart is argued to be the ultimate way to graduate with flying colours. However, in my point of view, I mostly disagree.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

It is thought by many that nations, where wards are sent by their parent to a mixed-sex academy, have a better edge over their counterparts. In my opinion, I totally agree with the notion because it affects the build-up of early self-esteem in girls and restricts competitive spirit which affects the male child.

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In some countries,owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

The citizens of a few nations are inclined towards purchasing a building to stay than living in rented ones.The major objective behind this kind of situation is to have your own residence without any restrictions imposed.I opine that it is beneficial for all individuals.The aim of the current essay is to elaborate on my opinion.

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Do you think children behave better when they are physically punished or rewarded.

Children are the future of any country. Many experts opine that their demeanour is better when they are physically punished. Personally, I am in consummate disaccord with the aforementioned notion and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate my stance with lucid examples.

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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

With the advancement in technology, robots take place in our lives day by day, and I believe this has many benefits to human beings’ future, such as decreasing work errors. On the other hand, some opine machines should not be considered a solution to people’s development because there may be harmful effects on society like losing jobs.

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Some people think that robots are important for human’s future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, humans are heavily adapted to advanced technologies and it has become an integral part of life. Robots are considered to be one of the greatest innovations of mankind. Certain individuals believe that they are harmful to humans while some stratum of society argue that they are crucial for the future. I personally believe that robotics is a positive development for the world.

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Some today argue that schools are no longer necessary because children can learn so much from the internet and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet has made the world small, even our classrooms have shrunk into online meetings. It is the opinion of some people that traditional schools are no longer required since the internet offers a myriad of resources. They argue that homeschooling is better. I strongly disagree with this view, I feel that kids need to have a proper school setup. I 'll describe the reasons for my view in this essay.

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Many students find it difficult to focus or pay attention at school nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?

In the present day, most students have been having difficulties paying attention during classes. Although they make an effort to focus on the class it is a hard task. This essay will discuss what are probably reasons for this problem and what can be done to address it.

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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effect on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Whether we approve it or not, computer indeed has a prominent impact on our kids' future. This influence can be positive or negative depending on how long and in which way they are being used. I agree with the fact that its cons are being far more than its pros practically.

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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is claimed that a majority of the population is terrified of going outside for the reason of becoming a victim of crime. Essentially, there has been a heated discussion on what could be done. There are two-point views prevalent among them all. Thus, some part of the population believes that lawbreaking could be prevented from being committed and others are saying that there nothing can be done. As far as I am concerned, most of the atrocities can be prevented

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Many people try to balance work and other parts of their life. However, this is very difficult to do. What are the problems associated with this? What is the best way to achieve a better balance?

It is undeniable that plenty of people is struggling with being able to work and leading their lives apart from work. Indeed, there are a plethora of problems associated with the issue, such as personal life and mental health as well. Nonetheless, there is certainly a way to attain stability in between personal life and one's job.

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some people believe the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between poor and rich people. Others think it is having the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A set of individuals opine that the present technological advancements are oversizing the difference in the standard of living of the wealthy and the underprivileged,whereas, others argue that the reverse is the case.The aim of this essay is to outline these two views and give my opinion.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become use to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported.

News agencies control the type of reports to be shown to the audience. Many times, they do not publish the important information in visual media rather prefer to present it in printed form. There are many parameters that affect the selection; I will be discussing them along with the reason for creating interest in negative news. I agree that emphasis should be given to positive words.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern world, traffic creates many problems and hampering the economic growth of a city. It is believed by some people that the amount of travel can be reduced only by restricting the public movement from home for work, school or shopping. Although it will reduce the trip congestion a little bit, in my opinion, it is not the only practice to reduce the transportation problem. However, making digital and proper construction of roads may be another process of reducing transit.

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