IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 46

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

Investing in roads and motorways instead of public transport systems is a common idea for numerous citizens. I completely disagree with this opinion due to the advantages of spending budget on public transportation and the reasons are outlined below.

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Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice. Other argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether the government should control a human’s meal by-laws has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that every individual has a right to choose what they want to eat and know what is better for themself and this substantially helps the crowd feel pleased and protected physically . On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that to help inhabitants to grow well, they have to obey the rules in order to be supplied with all nutrients necessary. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former for the following reasons.

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EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT, OVER THE NEXT DECADE, ROBOT WILL BE DOING MANY OF THE JOBS CURRENTLY DONE BY HUMANS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS.

Technology has revolutionalised the world in the last few years. In the near future, pundits reckon that machine will be taking over the work at present performed by humankind. I propound that using automation has numerous merits such as cost-saving and reduced accidents and the demerits like unemployment and increase dependency. This essay will discuss the reasons why I am holding this view.

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IN MANY COUNTRIES, SMALL SHOPS ARE CLOSING. WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT.

The business represents an organised effort of an individual or strata of the population engaged in making a living. Due to the advancement of technology, the majority of micro sellers subsequently forced to shut down their enterprise. There are multifarious reasons why small enterprises winding up such as competitive price and constraint in stocking the variety of products. I propound that it is an advantageous process for the development of a country.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that parents are the best teachers. Some folks support the idea of teaching how to be a good parent in schools. I disagree with the aforementioned notion. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on this and will explain the skills needed to be a nice parent as well.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While some people are of the opinion that students need to study the nature of food by science and how to cook them, others take the view that schools are the places where they should learn academic subjects. I believe the university will encourage them to learn more about basic nutritional knowledge and ways to prepare healthy meals.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Recently, the debate on whether physical or mental strength is more important for success in the sport has been heated. As far as I am concerned, the importance of strength depends on the type of sport. In this essay, I will outline both sides and elaborate on my view.

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Some people believe that children's Leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Some think that the free time of children must be filled with educational activities, otherwise their time is wasted. I totally disagree with that statement as kids cannot constantly study and they need to release their energy in non-educational activities.

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Now days many mothers take care of the family and don't go out to work . Some people believe that they should be given salaries by the government . Do you agree or disagree?

Motherhood is one of the toughest responsibility in society today. Many of them have no decent jobs and just stayed at home to take care of their children and family. I am of the view that the government should give them payment for being a hard-working mother.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views these views and give own opinion

It is common for undergraduates to pursue their passion and chose their prefered major. However, a part of society disagrees with this opinion, stating that only learning subjects related to science and technology should be allowed since it could be more practical in the future. The essay will clarify my opinion that university scholars should be able to enrol in whatever they want to study, as well as discuss aspects of the opposite statement.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays, the amount of waste has multiplied widely. This situation happens due to the lack of basic education in society, being, thereby, the responsibility of the government to act in favour of settling this setback. In this essay, I will outline why this phenomenon is taking place and what the government can do to reduce it.

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The best way to solve world’s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

Some opinions that rising the gasoline and diesel is the most perfect method to deal with the global environmental issues. Personally, I completely disagree with this thought.

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It is expected that there will be a higher proportion of older people than that of young people in many countries in the future. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Several countries are expected to have an aged population in the future years. As far as I concern, this movement has many negative consequences, thus governments should try to slow down the disproportionate growth of the population.

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Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice. Other argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether the government should control a human’s meal by-laws has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that every individual has a right to choose what they want to eat and know what is better for themself and this substantially helps the crowd feel pleased and protected physically. On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that to help inhabitants to grow well, they have to obey the rules in order to be supplied with all nutrients necessary. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former for the following reasons.

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Many countries thought that children have to do homework in their free time while other say children should do more outdoor activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Children are the backbone and the future of every country; therefore, their better education and character building are considered as the state's responsibility in developed and educated countries. To accomplish this various policies are generated for their education by the government. One of them is to decide whether they should study or do some recreational work during their leisure hours. I strongly agree that children should be allowed to do some outdoor activities after school time

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decided to do this.

There is a growing trend towards taking a gap year before entering tertiary education among school leavers in certain parts of the world. While it is true that such practice is not without its disadvantages, I would argue that the benefits of going to work or travelling before one embarks on college far outweighs these disadvantages.

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Many scientists are concerned about global warming. Research shows that the worldwide increase in temperature is getting worse. Furthermore, global warming seems to be related to levels of pollution in the atmosphere. Discuss the causes of global warming and possible solutions to the problem.

The world has witnessed global challenging ,as high temperature attributed to air pollution for the last few decades. This paramount issue is an alarming problem even for scientists. There are many reasons that can be illustrated for existing the world problem as well as many solutions that can be shown for tackling and avoiding this matter.

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Due to the rapid development and expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a competitive world where competition is so tough, Many people think that due to the creation of mega shops and multinational brands, local enterprises can not survive. In my opinion, I believe that national companies can still operate although the presence of that aggressive rivalry. That's because governments are still supporting their local corporations and they can take measures to defend their presence. Moreover, these local businesses are much aware of the market dynamics and small communities rather than the big supermarkets.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offenses are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the vehicle ratio increase dramatically than ever before at the same time way casualty is increasing. A fair amount of society thinks that a severe penalty can decrease shipment disaster while others say that take other actions would be more successful in order to develop line safety. I believe strict laws should be there to punish the driving offenders whereas a combination of other methods would bring better results.

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Advertising campaigns on TV that are targeted at children should be banned. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We live in a world which is full of advertisement and these promotions are consciously and subconsciously shaping our purchasing power. Nowadays, many ads are targeting only children on TV, billboards or the internet. I strongly agree with this statement. This should be prohibited as their strategies to target child is totally unethical and have detrimental effects on our young generation.

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