IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 45

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The popularity of computer-based gaming is significantly high among all age-group people all over the world. It is often claimed by the guardians that pupils are not learning anything from this types of gaming. Moreover, it is detrimental to the young generation. I completely agree with the parents thinking, and I believe that addiction to gaming is not only wasting the valuable time of student life but also damaging the physical and mental health of the youngsters.

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The higher proportion of older population will over take younger generation what is the reason? is it positive or negative development?

It is not too distant past, the life expectancy was too low all over the world. Due to the advancement of science and technology, the longevity of humans has been nearly doubled or even tripled in some parts of the world. Despite believing it is a progressive movement, it seems that there are some negative repercussions that could be visible, especially, in economically deprived countries. This essay will support my view in the following paragraphs.

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Traditional ideas from older people about the way to live and behave are not helpful to young people and their futures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many are of the belief that past traditions now hold little future value for young people. In my opinion, there are still important lessons young people can learn from their cultural heritage.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. What is your opinion on this? To what extent to you agree or disagree?

It is believed that wild animals should not exist in today's world and it is pointless to spend money to protect them. I completely disagree with the view, and this essay will explain the reasons why the idea is totally absurd.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Increased life span is one of the results of an improved medical care system. It allows people to live longer than ever before. I think that the pros of this development outweigh the cons and I am going to explain why.

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Some people think that it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness, rather than funding the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals contend that the government fundings must be prioritized for the prevention and health promotion programs instead of squandering on palliative cares. There are certain pros and cons of this strategy but these advocates believe that it is better to nip the evil from the bud. I think that prevention is better than cure.

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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The advancement of technology has helped to execute the discoveries of science and blend them with our own needs. Researchers and travellers are able to visit the hinterland to experience mother nature. I strongly propound that it will bring a new dimension for the survival of the human race with the repercussions like a threat to the environment. This essay will elaborate on both the positive and negative effects of the development.

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Some people say that TV programs and movies on crime are more popular. Why is this increasingly popular? What are the effects on the society?

It is argued that films and series in the criminal genre are more requested by individuals. Different factors interfere in this case like the sense of adventurism and inquisitiveness of people, but these shows and movies have some undeniable impacts on the community.

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Some people prefer to help or support directly in the local community for people who need it; however, others prefer to give money to the national or private charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is a controversial topic about the way of philanthropy, either provide direct support or donate to charities. Personally, I prefer donations rather than direct help in the local community. In this essay, I will discuss both opinions and explain my idea with examples.

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Advertisements of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So advertisements to the children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, advertisement has become one of the important tools in the marketing of a product. Companies influence their consumers specifically, children and their parents, to buy unhealthy food and gaming items through several commercials. A school of people suggests that these types of ads should be restricted on television and I completely second this opinion because of the reasons, discussed in the following paragraph.

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Science and technology have improved the standards of living in all over the world. Some people claim that the role of the arts has become insignificant. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, the living conditions have become superior, much of this can be attributed to the growth in sci-tech. There is a view that the significance of art is very less in the improved lifestyles of people across the globe. In my opinion science and technology has aided to a better level of comfort, while, arts and humanities still play an essential role in our lives.

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Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extend do you agree?

Investing in roads and motorways instead of public transport systems is a common idea for numerous citizens. I completely disagree with this opinion due to the advantages of spending budget on public transportation and the reasons are outlined below.

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Government should make laws about people’s nutrition and food choice. Other argue that is their choice. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The issue of whether the government should control a human’s meal by-laws has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that every individual has a right to choose what they want to eat and know what is better for themself and this substantially helps the crowd feel pleased and protected physically . On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that to help inhabitants to grow well, they have to obey the rules in order to be supplied with all nutrients necessary. Viewing from a general perspective, the essay discusses both viewpoints, I personally agree with the former for the following reasons.

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EXPERTS BELIEVE THAT, OVER THE NEXT DECADE, ROBOT WILL BE DOING MANY OF THE JOBS CURRENTLY DONE BY HUMANS. DISCUSS THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF THIS.

Technology has revolutionalised the world in the last few years. In the near future, pundits reckon that machine will be taking over the work at present performed by humankind. I propound that using automation has numerous merits such as cost-saving and reduced accidents and the demerits like unemployment and increase dependency. This essay will discuss the reasons why I am holding this view.

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IN MANY COUNTRIES, SMALL SHOPS ARE CLOSING. WHY IS THIS HAPPENING? IS IT A POSITIVE OR NEGATIVE DEVELOPMENT.

The business represents an organised effort of an individual or strata of the population engaged in making a living. Due to the advancement of technology, the majority of micro sellers subsequently forced to shut down their enterprise. There are multifarious reasons why small enterprises winding up such as competitive price and constraint in stocking the variety of products. I propound that it is an advantageous process for the development of a country.

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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary world, it is irrefutable that parents are the best teachers. Some folks support the idea of teaching how to be a good parent in schools. I disagree with the aforementioned notion. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on this and will explain the skills needed to be a nice parent as well.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

While some people are of the opinion that students need to study the nature of food by science and how to cook them, others take the view that schools are the places where they should learn academic subjects. I believe the university will encourage them to learn more about basic nutritional knowledge and ways to prepare healthy meals.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Recently, the debate on whether physical or mental strength is more important for success in the sport has been heated. As far as I am concerned, the importance of strength depends on the type of sport. In this essay, I will outline both sides and elaborate on my view.

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Some people believe that children's Leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

Some think that the free time of children must be filled with educational activities, otherwise their time is wasted. I totally disagree with that statement as kids cannot constantly study and they need to release their energy in non-educational activities.

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Now days many mothers take care of the family and don't go out to work . Some people believe that they should be given salaries by the government . Do you agree or disagree?

Motherhood is one of the toughest responsibility in society today. Many of them have no decent jobs and just stayed at home to take care of their children and family. I am of the view that the government should give them payment for being a hard-working mother.

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