IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 43

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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The higher proportion of older population will over take younger generation what is the reason? is it positive or negative development?

Undoubtedly, it is an absolute truth that senior communities will be skyrocketed dramatically than younglings, is the near future. This would be due to the better-advanced health care system. I, personally, opine that it is non-welcoming development; notwithstanding, the disquisition delves into in-depth grounds, as well as will also explore why I do think so.

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Some think youngsters are not suitable to hold position in government while others think they should get chance. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Undoubtedly, it is imperative to have certain qualifications to play a core role in politics. The argument has transmuted into a moot point as to whether or not younglings should be selected as a member of parliament. Notwithstanding, this discourse delves into both standpoints, and subsequently will advance why I believe it is not a matter of age, but of enthusiasm.

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Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, in today's entertainment era, adventurous activities have become imperative to youngsters namely sky diving and skiing; the majority of people postulate that it should be prohibited in lieu of the risk involved . Notwithstanding, the discourse delves into these both vantage points, and subsequently will explore why I do not think so.

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In the future, people may have to live on other planets. Some think that it is therefore important to spend money researching other planets such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to various reasons, living on the earth in the future may not be possible; therefore, it is better funding research for finding other planets to reside, according to some. In my opinion, Instead, squandering astonishing amount of money on space studies, protecting environment and solving current problems seems to be more beneficial than anything.

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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It is mostly observed that in few countries, belonging to the working class while the children are growing, women belong to the working class. I find this practice to show both sides, considering the benefit of financial help and drawback such as weak bonding between mother and her youngster.

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in many countries, the rich are becoming richer and poor are becoming ‎poorer.Why is this a problem?What solutions are there to tackle this ‎problem?‎

Undoubtedly, it goes without saying that the affluent population are leading more luxurious lifestyles and the underprivileged public are seeing more poverty in numerous countries. This disquisition delves into the details of why this kind of development is not welcoming and subsequently will advance some panacea to halting this menace.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Different communities are guided by their customs and traditions. It is often believed that community may lose its functionality if people show less interest in leading their life in line with the social principles. I think that the idea of strictly following the customs and laws of a society are completely preposterous. For this reason, people should be permitted to lead their life according to their own desire.

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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use, while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

New diseases keep appearing in the coming days; different types of medicines are being sought to treat infections. Some society residents think that they agree with the experiments being carried out to find new drugs on creatures, while others believe that it is unethical and against the laws of nature. Àlthough I think that researching wildlife is a form of ruthlessness, but many scientists have no choice but to do so. In the following article, I will try to prove my point.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government, while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Core positions in the government are considered challenging and they require capability. Some proponents argue that they are good choices for young individuals, while the opponents rebut that they are not qualified for these posts. Personally, I believe that important roles are suitable for those who have the determination to gain proficiency, regardless of their age.

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Some people think that it is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use while others argue that it is cruel to do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

When it comes to animal testing, there is a growing debate over whether researchers should conduct research at the expense of the lives of those animals for human benefits. While some community assert that it is ethically wrong and unacceptable, I believe that their sacrifice should be continued in order to create a better and healthier world.

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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary era, It is irrefutable that modern technologies help us with our major task. Some of the masses believe that the latest equipment is more complex to handle, while others are good to have it. I strongly agree with the latter. In this essay, I will explain these in detail with examples.

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In modern society, fashion is becoming more and more popular in people’s choice of clothes. Why? Do you think it is positive development or negative development?

Undoubtedly, in today's fast-paced era, the trend of modernization including fancy outfits, among youngsters has skyrocketed dramatically. In my opinion, it is due to the effect of globalization which is not a welcoming trend; notwithstanding, this disquisition delves into both standpoints, subsequently.

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Some people think that children under 18 years old should receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's fast-paced life, it is imperative to be educated; but the majority of society postulates that students should be gained full-time academic experience, especially those who are below 18 years of age. This argument, undoubtedly, has metamorphosed into a moot point. I strongly consent to the hilt with this mandate; notwithstanding, this discourse delves into the supporting grounds subsequently.

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Few young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study and work in cities. What are the reason? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Education and career play an essential role in our life. Youngsters prefer living in the metropolis instead of the countryside to maintain a job and to do their best schooling. Although there are several benefits of residing in these cities, some drawbacks can not be overlooked.

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Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the ‎cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its ‎disadvantages?‎

In today's fast-paced life, it is imperative for every human being to be educated and work as an employee at a good level of employment. Population from different countries leave their homes and are interested in the big metropolis for research and careers. Considering the advantages of the advancement that has taken place foremost and acknowledging its drawbacks too, the following article discusses the reasons and effects of this trend.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, educational institutions have their own approach to assess students' performances. Meanwhile, some people believe that a formal examination is the most effective way of knowledge evaluation, others argue that students should be assessed continuously. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and explain my support of the latter view.

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Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the ‎cities.What are the reasons?Do advantages of this development outweigh its ‎disadvantages?‎

It is true that the young generation tends to choose the big cities to be settled instead of living in their houses from remote areas. There are a variety of reasons to explain this problem, in my opinion, these are outweighed by the drawbacks of this trend.

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Some people say it is important to keep our home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Keeping your surroundings clean is very important for health, leading to the place of positivism in the whole environment. Several people believe that it is vital to clean and put things in the correct place in their house and offices. I agree with this given statement, and the forthcoming article will discuss the benefits of maintaining a residence and department.

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Some people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders while others think individuals can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A large majority of individuals are shy and they feel uncomfortable expressing their viewpoints in front of people. Communication skills are pivotal for success that is why school education must be focused on this point. I believe that educators should play their roles to make their graduates more expressive and bold.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some believe that governments should financially support creative artists. Others think that these artists should be given financial support from alternative sources. I support the latter idea as the governments have more important issues to solve.

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