IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

It is thought by many that there has been a rapid rise in poor attitude and lack of regard shown to others in the society. This is as a result of no parental guidance in the family. One way of tackling this is for parents to guide children in the right direction....
It is argued by some that reading during leisure time can improve the imagination and the skill to use a language better than watching the television. In my opinion, picking up a book for fun can help the individual to think and use language more effectively....
It is argued by some that reading during leisure time can improve the imagination and the skill to use a language better than watching the television. In my opinion, picking up a book for fun can help the individual to think and use language more effectively....
More and more people in the workforce are not exercising enough during the workday, and are becoming physically unfit. This is as a result of the hectic nature of some jobs experienced by workers. The solution to this must be that organizations must give more free days at the office....
It is true that people of today belong to a throwaway culture, wherein they buy and dispose things easily. There are reasons why this is happening and some issues can result to this trend....
Who is accountable for teaching the young generation how to be healthy and fit has become a hot topic of discussion these days. Some people perceive that schools have the responsibility to do this while others disagree. In this essay, I shall discuss why I partly agree with this viewpoint that schools should be responsible for this....
More and more people in the workforce are not exercising enough during the workday, and are becoming physically unfit. This is as a result of the hectic nature of some jobs experienced by workers. The solution to this must be that organizations must give more free days at the office....
Science plays an important role in making people immortal. While some think that it is considered valuable because it will increase the survival rate of human being, others argue that.In my opinion, science will definitely ensure people would live more than 200 years and it will bring positivity to the society....
In today’s society, it is widely acknowledged that the contentment has had a direct impact on people’s liveliness. However, some people do not even think about bringing gladness. This essay will explore why the concept of delight is hard to describe and what are the key element in acquiring elation....
In today’s society, it is widely acknowledged that the contentment has had a direct impact on people’s liveliness. However, some people do not even think about bringing gladness. This essay will explore why the concept of delight is hard to describe and what are the key element in acquiring elation....
In this modern world, workplaces generally do not have any kind of gender discriminations. Although, men are given more priority to be a part of some workforces, like police or army, some people argue that women should be given equal priorities in such fields. In my opinion, women should be given enough chances in such national security divisions, but there is no need of an equal participation....
In today’s society, it is widely acknowledged that the contentment has had a direct impact on people’s liveliness. However, some people do not even think about bringing gladness. This essay will explore why the concept of delight is hard to describe and what are the key element in acquiring elation....
Technological development has considerable impacted people’s lives. It is argued that due to the technology, traditional approaches and ways of life of a country vanished. It is further said that to maintain them is meaningless. I fully agree with this notion and this essay will discuss reasons for it....
It is argued by some that the closing of small scale businesses will cause the demise of local communities because of the rapid growth of supermarkets and the inability of small shops to compete. In my opinion, I agree that the termination of local shops will bring about an end to the local areas. Firstly, many local people cannot afford the prices of goods from these large stores. Secondly, most of these supermarkets are situated far away from rural areas....
The writer’s view, there is no denying that same educational opportunities should distribute between men and women. However, I disagree with the approach that the admission to universities depend on common of volunteers....