IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 78

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often believed that the children who do their work as per their choices could make them selfish whereas others think that it makes them self dependent. In my point of view, doing their own chores makes the children learn more and intelligent. Though, this statement has dual aspects that will discussed in the below paragraphs.

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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people perceive that, the eminent way to prepare for a holiday is by not planning anything and leaving things to happen by itself. In my opinion, I don't agree with this statement, because we cannot start a voyage without knowing the final destination. In this essay, we'll discuss the relevant attributes for it.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweighs the disadvantages?

Nowadays, with the advancement of medical technology, people could live longer than before. Some believe that longer life expectancy is a benefit, whereas others think that it is a drawback. Personally, I agree that longer life expectancy will be more beneficial than detrimental.

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Some people think that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Exercise is must for being healthy in life. It is often believed that the one can be fit by performing workout in the gym whereas on the other side, few of them think that daily warm up exercises like jogging, walking and climbing is enough to stay healthy in the life. Both the nations have their own weightage and would like give the reason as well as my opinion in the below paragraphs.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

These day's, people are working hard to meet their goals of life, eventually degrading their well-being and hygiene. There are many reasons for it, excessive work, poor time management, laziness, where as the pertaining issues can be rectified by taking certain concrete steps, which we will discuss in the essay.

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Some people think that children should be taught at school to recycle materials and avoid waste. Other people believe that children should be taught this at home. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

In recent times, it's very important to recycle things like a plastic and glass and reduce the waste of it by teaching children. However, It's a highly debated topic, Some believe that it should be taught by schools and others think that it might be more effective if learn at home by parents. This essay will discuss both points of views further. I firmly believe that, Children should be aware and learn about this at the institution.

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Some people think that teenagers should be requested an unpaid job in their free time. They believe that these will be helpful for both individual teenagers and local communities. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons to your answer, and require examples.

The younger generations are considered the future, and every now and then, parents try to provide the best upbringings for their child. One way introduced by them is charity work during their leisure time, that would benefit both the community and children. In my opinion, I agree with this view, however, society should reward these youngsters for their time and effort. In this essay, we shall discuss this point further.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, Even though we have an advance mechanism and technology in farming, many people go to the bed with an empty stomach globally due to many reasons. In this essay, I will provide the causes of such type of situation and some major steps to solve it.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The zoo is the area where animals are kept safe. It is often believed that zoos must be closed because animals are not safe in it. On the other side, few believe that for some animals this area is essential. I will discuss both statement and my point of view in the below paragraphs.

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Some people think history has little or nothing to offer, while others say the study of the past helps us understand the present. Write on both views and give your opinion, citing examples from your experience

The history of every country is considered to be its treasure. But every individual has its own perception about this subject. It's often believed that the past has nothing to offer, whereas others think that it is the only past that clarify the present. I would like to discuss the both sides of the above notion with the illustrate example in the below paragraphs.

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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

The smartphone is the technology that has gained more popularity among every individual. But it is often believed that the cell phones have eliminated the social interaction among the people. It makes the people physically less and digitally more social. I completely agree with the notion and will discuss the reason in the below paragraphs.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a controversy that pursuing a career in the early years or changing jobs constantly will give an individual more job fulfilment. In my opinion, while job-hopping is a fitting choice for those having less career ambition, I partly agree with the notion that staying in a steady job will provide a more pleasant experience.

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In some countries, the government pays unemployed people on a weekly basis. How does this impact individuals and the government? Do you agree or disagree with this idea?

The grant to unemployed people is paid in many countries and it is definitely affecting the nation and the society.I partially agree with the statement and will discuss the point to support my argument in the below paragraphs.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Countries were becoming more and more similar by the same products which bought anywhere in the world. In my opinion, this progress comprises both position and negation.

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Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, the abolishment of university fees is a controversial topic. Many people hold the belief that everyone should be entitled to the whole fees, others opine that all the cost attached to college should be paid completely by students. In my opinion, these viewpoints are justifiable to a certain extent.

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Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The dispute about the priority of the high monetary reward and the cosy environment of the job has been there for years. Some people claim that the pay should be the main consideration when searching for the jobs, while others argue that the significance of working mood is more than its treatment. The idea of both sides with my own opinion together will be further discussed and elaborated in this essay.

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if a product is sold and people but it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. do you agree or disagree with this

It has been said that a running item has not required to advertise, instead it can be recognised an a way of amusement. I completely disagree with this statement, because without promotional activities, it is not possible to exist in the competitive market as well as update people about new features.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Movies are the biggest source of entertainment and at the same time, instills audience enough knowledge regarding different walks of life. It is reckoned by some people that films can be enjoyed on their personal smartphones or other technological gadgets rather than going to theatres. However, others believe that movies must be watched in a theatre for full enjoyment. I, completely accord with the latter notion and various reasons associated with both statements will be discussed in upcoming fragments.

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Some people think that trial marriage is currently a positive trend for youngsters in order that they know each other better before marriage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the rate of divorce surges to a great extend, and one of the reasons is, the life partners do not know each other properly or any of them is not able to satisfy physically, which make people think about that engaging in cohabitation is good or bad before the marriage. I partially agree with the above notion and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in the following paragraph.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many people exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Health plays an indispensable role in every person's life and physical workouts aids in maintaining it. However, it is reckoned that the majority of employed people devote minimal or no time to Physical activities, which have given rise to various health issues. This ongoing trend has numerous reasons associated with it, which are discussed in upcoming fragments along with personal suggestions.

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