IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 78

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both side of view and give your opinion.

Following the increase in children's education, parents and teachers argue that the fine craft classes are a crucial lecture or not. Some sets of people disagree that the painting lecture is a waste of both time and money, conversely, others believe the painting will bring various benefits of young children's growth. I personally agree with the latter opinion, and I will write both sides of view.

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Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is true that watching TV affects children. While some people believe that the length of the duration spent watching them that has a significant impact on children. In my opinion, it is the content of the program that has a more marked influence on their behaviour.

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Everyday traffic seems to get worse on our roads. How can we reduce the number of cars on our roads today? What alternatives can we offer car drivers?

Nowadays the cars have taken wide approach throughout the towns. Although it offers a comfortable journey to the citizens, the pollution damages the atmosphere significantly. However, the government ought to take measures to reduce traffic congestion, such as an introduction of bus service with cheap fare and employ a motorist as host in public transport.

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people have views that governments should fund artists, while there are opponents who argue that artists should support themselves. I believe that governments should help them.

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Global warming is the biggest threat we are experiencing today? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the rise in the temperature of the planet Earth, has become a major concerning issue for the whole society, in the present world.I completely love with the given perspective because it is responsible for some drastic changes, such as the loss of biodiversity and the rising levels of the seas.This essay will discuss the above-mentioned devastating impacts in detail with suitable examples.

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Global warming is the biggest threat we are experiencing today? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the rise in the temperature of the planet Earth, has become a major concerning issue for the whole society, in the present world.I completely agree with the given perspective because it is responsible for some drastic changes, such as the loss of biodiversity and the rising levels of the seas.This essay will discuss the above-mentioned devastating impacts in detail with suitable examples.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work. Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology.

Following the increase in cutting-edge technologies, some sets of people worry that advanced skills might ruin people's lives in a negative way. Conversely, I personally believe that if we use the technologies well, then it will bring various benefits to our lives, and careers.

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The best way to ensure the growth of children is to make parents take parenting courses. Do you agree or disagree?

Following the increases of people's needs that the government should educate parents to play a pivotal role in keeping children, the idea is a debating tactic these days. I personally believe that learning parenting skills will benefit in many ways.

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Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people have views that animal experiments should be prevented because they are immoral, while there are opponents who claim that animal experiments should not be banned due to some benefits. I believe that experiments should be partly limited.

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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides

Emerging technologies like the internet has made mankind's life easier. It is argued that the net plays a crucial role in holding loved ones together, whereas this booming technology has been held responsible for increasing distance among the human kind. This essay will elucidate both the views.

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Being a celebrity-such as film star or sports personality-brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

In this world, living as a VIP has its own benefits and consequences. Moreover, it relies on how they choose to view those things in person. Some may exploit it well, and the others may have some regrets for it. In my opinion, being as a celebrity have more advantages than the shortcomings.

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Many people believe that companies and individuals should pay to clean up the environment in proportion to the amount of pollution they have produced. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued by several people that the industries, and the public need to bear the compensation equal to the volume of waste produced by them, in order to decontaminate the surroundings. I completely agree with this statement because it can aid to control the pollution level and the recycling process. This essay will discuss the above- mentioned benefits in detail with a reasonable example.

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Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that technological advancements in the field of conversation have adversely affected one's personal and professional relationships. Personally, I strongly disagree with this view.

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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this ?

In some of the US states, teenagers are restricted by law to go outdoors after a specific time unless an adult is accompanying them. While allowing teenagers to be free, whenever they need to go out, could be a benefit to them, I believe that it might make them totally dependent on others in their future life.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

The computer is the most advance development of the 21st century, which is a boon for younger generations. However, many people believe that, children get affected in a more pessimistic way with the regular operation of the computers. I totally agree with this point of view and will elaborate in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, even though the rates of serious crimes are decreasing, people feel less safe than ever before. what do you think the causes of this problem and what measures should be taken to solve it?

Many nations around the world have improved major crime rates, nevertheless, people still feel unsafe. In this essay, I will explain the main reasons for this and some strategies to overcome these issues.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Novels and TV shows based upon crime are becoming increasingly popular in many parts of the world, nowadays. There is a myriad of reasons behind this trend and in my opinion, it has both ups and downs. This essay will further elaborate on the causes of the popularity and my opinion of it.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

More and more people now facing fitness and health related issues due to poor quality of food intake. To tackle this problem, it is argued that government should increase tax on unhealthy foods. It is true that higher taxes can control the problem at certain limits, but I personally think that there are many other ways which is more convenient.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

Selecting a place to live in is a big decision to make. In some parts of the world, people value for their own accommodation because it is a sense of achievement rather than renting which could not save money. From my perspective, house ownership is a natural human desire.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Advertising has been used as an important tool for promoting sales since time immemorial. While some people consider advertising extremely effective in boosting sales, a few others tend to differ, claiming, people no longer focus on them due to the presence of a myriad of these. In my opinion, both these claims are valid and this essay will discuss both views and support them with relevant examples.

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