IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 78

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both these views and give your opinion?

Movies are the biggest source of entertainment and at the same time, instills audience enough knowledge regarding different walks of life. It is reckoned by some people that films can be enjoyed on their personal smartphones or other technological gadgets rather than going to theatres. However, others believe that movies must be watched in a theatre for full enjoyment. I, completely accord with the latter notion and various reasons associated with both statements will be discussed in upcoming fragments.

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Some people think that trial marriage is currently a positive trend for youngsters in order that they know each other better before marriage. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the rate of divorce surges to a great extend, and one of the reasons is, the life partners do not know each other properly or any of them is not able to satisfy physically, which make people think about that engaging in cohabitation is good or bad before the marriage. I partially agree with the above notion and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in the following paragraph.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many people exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Health plays an indispensable role in every person's life and physical workouts aids in maintaining it. However, it is reckoned that the majority of employed people devote minimal or no time to Physical activities, which have given rise to various health issues. This ongoing trend has numerous reasons associated with it, which are discussed in upcoming fragments along with personal suggestions.

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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good employment, while there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that enhancing soft skills and gaining experience is far more important.

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In today's job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many employers are likely to find wisdom, skilled workers for competitive occupations rather than those having merely formal qualifications and less practical experience. From my anticipation, job applications will not appeal any requirements of certifications. Thus, I am convinced by that statement because of the considerations at two aspects, such as productivity and wage of the employees.

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Advertising encourages customers to buy in quantity rather than promoting quality 10th do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that advertisements are playing a major role in hiking the annual turnovers of large organizations. However, this is reckoned that there are motivating common people to make purchases in huge quantities irrespective of paying attention to the quality of product. I, to a large extent believe that this is true. The essay will decipher various factors behind this standpoint.

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Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. what are the reasons for this? what would you suggest as a solution?

It is true that competition is a significant attitude in a workplace which is more prevalent among young and old employees these days. This essay will discuss the causes and the measures in order to solve this problem.

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More and more people today are moving from the countryside. Why is this happening? Do you think it is a positive or negative development

These days, the influx of residents from rural areas to metropolises is growing exponentially. From my perspective, there is a host of compelling reasons leading to this negative migration.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can a lack of sleep cause? What can be done about the lack of sleep?

In today's era, it is arduous for some sections of society to take an adequate amount of sleep. Because of this pattern, various problems arise, and this essay will discuss those as well as a measure that can be taken to ensure people will get enough rest and sleep.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people have different views on children's education. Some parents think that it is the only way to well educate their kids in a good manner by using violence. However, I firmly disagreed that this kind of punishment could be effective.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, Technological developments have revolutionised the way of shopping. In other words, all shops in the local markets, moreover cites are on the urge of the obsolete, the reason is emerging trends of shopping online. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with the statement and shed light on the reasons of convenience as well as time saving which lead people tend to E-commerce.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, the behaviour of undergraduates is a very drastic trouble for the institutions of many nations. I strongly believe that, Reason behind this is a lake of seriousness towards study of the pupils. However, Strict rules and engaging students with a more assignments and research can help to tackle this situation.

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

As a result of the population growth crisis, the ownership and driving of transport have increased with the progress of nations. Although this trend provides significant personal comfort, it is tremendously harmful for the atmosphere. Therefore, the disadvantage of the rise of personal vehicles outweighs the advantage.

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the recent era of technology, Some group of an individuals suggests that radio is the most appropriate way to gather news. In contrast, others opine that TV is far better to get updates. I firmly believe that, television is the best way to listen daily happenings. In this essay, we'll discuss relevant attributes for it.

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Some people say that educational success most of the time depends on having a good teacher. Others say that student attitudes also do matters. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the past decades, there are several reasons that have been determined for a person’s success. Some individuals argue that educational prosperity of a student is because of an exceptional teacher, whereas others think that a student’s behaviour also makes a difference. In my view, both of these points are equally important for achievement in any field. In this essay, we shall discuss these two thoughts further.

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Statement: Some people prefer to do physical activities to relax, while others choose mental activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern time, stress, increasing rapidly among society because of huge change in lifestyle. Many people choose to do exercise for physical and mental fitness. In contrast, others choose the medication for relaxation. I firmly stand by the former view, It's better to give physical efforts than mind games. In this essay, we'll discuss relevant attributes for it.

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The first smartphone was released in 1992. By then year 2020 there may be as many as 2.5 billion smartphones in the world. The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology and not our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The smartphone technology has invariably revolutionised the world. In the modern era, more than half of the population on earth has access to these smart devices. While it may be argued that the dependency on these phones is deteriorating our knowledge base and is harmful for our thinking ability, to me it seems to be a contradictory scenario. In this essay, I will outline why the reliance on these smartphones is rather beneficial to our cognitive intellect.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is considered by many that children who regularly use technological mediums might get negatively affected instead of getting benefits. I completely agree that these hi-tech devices will have negative consequences on children, as they may suffer from mental and physical health issues.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both view and your opinion.

According to some people, incorporating more sports programs can provide significant health benefits for the citizens, while others think other initiatives are also needed. In my opinion, gymnastic activities and awareness programs, together can have a useful impact for the welfare of public health.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, Technological developments have revolutionised the way of shopping. In the sense, that all the stores in local markets and cities are on the urge of obsolete, the reason is, emerging trends of shopping online. I completely agree with the statement because, once people start trusting the online retailers, they found shopping more convenient and time saving.

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