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Immigration has a major impact on the society what are the main reason of immigration? to what consequences can it lead?

Due to advancements in technology, the world has become a small village;that being so,it is common for people to move from one country to another.This essay will discuss some of the main reasons and the results of immigration in upcoming paragraphs.

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In schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects, while boys choose science subjects. What is the reason? Should the trend be changed?

In many academic institutions, gender-based segregation in the selection of academic subjects is a pervasive issue. Female learners gravitate towards art and humanities courses, while male scholars tend to pursue science-based majors. This essay will delve into the reason behind the persistence of such a trend and it is crucial to explore the root cause for such inclinations because it should be changed.

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In some contries,more and more people are becoming intersted in finding out about the history of the housr or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Buying a new place to reside is always a big achievement in one's life. Therefore, the curiosity to know about the past of the building being bought is increasing in the case of the purchasers. Analysing that this could be because of the elevating reports of many old homes being haunted or the buyer wanting to be aware of any structural rebuilds. Most of such data could be found in various local departments made by the government.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and the treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor . Do your think this is a positive or a negative development?

It is becoming increasingly common that much more people who have health problems start to try alternative medicine and treatment rather than see the doctor although there are some benefits of people using these approaches to solve their health problems, I would argue that there are far more drawbacks

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

There is an increasing number of public hiring private coaches, instead of joining in group sports and class exercises. After thorough consideration of all relevant factors, I believe it is a positive development since it gives more motivation and flexibility in one's time.

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In some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It is an undeniable fact that body health is extremely important to live a healthy life. In this contemporary era, people prefer to have a fitness coach instead of taking part in outdoor games or participating in some sort of exercise .I would argue that it has both benefits and drawbacks .This essay will elaborate on both sides.

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It is irrefutable that learning mathematics in educational system has become a topic of debate among parents. While some parents think that teaching mathematics is unimportant, other parents believe that this subject is a fundamental part of education. This essay wil discuss both sides of this topic.

It is irrefutable that learning mathematics in the educational system has become a topic of debate among parents. While some parents think that teaching mathematics is unimportant, other parents believe that this subject is a fundamental part of education. This essay will discuss both sides of this topic.

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In some countries the number of people who use bicycles as their main form of transport is decreasing even though riding bicycles has many benefits. What are the reasons? What could be done to encourage the use of bicycles.

In the contemporary world, people prefer to use other kinds of means of transportation, such as cars or buses, etc instead of bikes and it is increasing immensely these days. Although there are so many possible reasons for the usage of bicycles, society has changed especially during the past decades. I will talk about the reasons for this issue in further stages.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays paying attention at school has persistently been a subject of dispute among school children. Even though they try to concentrate on their lectures they failed to achieve it. This essay will discuss possible reasons for this and give some methods to tackle this issue as well.

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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials (e.g. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons and solutions?

It may be claimed that there is a lack of recycling of human waste such as cans and paper. The potential reasons for this are the lack of awareness of the benefits of recycling and the shrank of the machine which is needed to make the process. There are a number of solutions which should be disclosed to deal with this problem.

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In many countries today, there are concerns about the unhealthy lifestyles that people lead. What health issues are linked to modern lifestyles? What answers to these problems can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer, and support your essay with ideas and examples from your own experience.

In the modern era , while there is an ongoing debate with compelling reasons for the deleterious way of living nowadays , it leads to intriguing arguments and broadens a person's horizon . This essay believes that one of the principal problems of modern lifestyles is physical fitness disorders,and suggests the main solution to this complication is good nourishment.

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A lot of people nowadays are spending too much money and they don’t save anything for future use. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In this period of modernity, many people do not have financial discipline as they are spending huge money rather than saving for future needs . As a result, they are landing in problems at a later stage. My opinion, I strongly agree that this is a negative development and my opinion will be discussed in my further paragraphs along with a sensible conclusion.

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Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

It is argued that Father and Mother are the best instructors. I strongly agree with this statement because they are the person who knows me as well and the people with whom I have spent most of my time to bear with.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your option

It was opined by some people that the experiences gained before school and during learning centre which one will have the greatest influence on their future. I partially agree with the experiences received during education.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can't afford. What are the reasons of this behavior? What actions can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

People sometimes borrow money to acquire things which are extra in their lives even though they can’t pay their prices. There are many reasons that push them to conduct like that, but every problem has a solution that can be taken into consideration.

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Write about the following topic: Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The past few years saw a massive rise in green energy. One of the most prominent examples is solar power, particularly for domestic use. The mechanics include using the sun as a fuel to power solar plates and converting that energy into electrical. Most of the population are proponents of powering their houses using these ways, albeit there are a few disadvantages too which I will cover in this essay.

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Which would you choose a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Few people do not get much family time as they work extra hours to earn more salary. However many individuals are satisfied with low-income and short-time professions as they spend their precious time with loved ones and kids. I personally support the former view and I have tried to argue for the same in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries, people are now getting married at a later age than they did thirty years ago. What are the main reasons for this change, and what effects might it have on society.

It is observed in developing countries that thirty years ago people were getting married at an earlier age as compared to today's scenario. One of the main reasons behind this is that everyone is trying to build their career due to intense competition. However, this is impacting society by having a downward trend in population.

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Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, sports is a field with high wages for athletes and clubs in both financial and other ways. Personally, I think that it is a positive improvement for the business. In the paragraphs underneath, this essay shall see my thoughts about the topic.

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Many people think that some individuals are naturally good leaders. Other think that people can learn leadership skills. Discuss both views and give your own opion.

One of the social concerns today relates about become a talented leader. While it is strongly believed that everyone is a naturally good leader, others argue that people could learn leadership skills. In my opinion, some individuals are naturally good leaders and they can become professional leaders who had learned leadership skills at universities or colleges.

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