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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people believe that the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Education plays a vital role in the progress of the country. One section of the society thinks that an academic teaching can help students to get good career opportunities; on the contrary, some individuals believe that higher schooling has wider prospects. I will explore both the views in my essay.

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Artistic and musical expressions are critical for the complete development of societies. This essay will discuss whether their place is still accountable in a modern world like ours and whether children should learn these arts in academic institutes.

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Some people believe that children should be made disciplined by making them obey rules and do what their parents and teachers want them to do. Others, however, believe that those children who are controlled are not well-prepared to tackle the challenges life brings to them. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Discipline is necessary for all-around development of children. Some people believe that children should be trained to be disciplined by making them obey the rules and regulations set by the parents and teachers. However, others feel that controlling the children to a certain extent leads to them being unprepared to tackle difficult challenges and situations in life. In this essay, I will discuss both views and provide my view of the latter one.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the trend has been changed towards competition between people. A section of society that thought the competition in children is a positive thing and need to uplift their spirit. Although, others argue that the negative overweight the positive and teach them to cooperate with each other. It is more positive for the long term perspective to our society when they reach teenage. I partially agree with this statement and thought that both are important for society, in the course of the essay, I will discuss both viewpoints.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that being multilingual can be benificial in a lot of ways. Although some believe that this skill is useful just for tourits or migrant workers, I would strongly agrue that this plays a crucial role in having a good social life while living abroad.

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Question- Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums are exhibitions of various arts, these special talents should be exhibited so that the world can see and appreciate them. Most exhibits have an entrance fee while others don’t and this is because these artists have to be paid and hence it is important to raise money. Thus being charged at a gallery is an advantage which will be proved in the following paragraphs.

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Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a highly debatable subject to decide the mode of teaching in schools. Some people believe that history must be prioritized in lectures, as this is how the next generation carries our legacy, while others think that trending skills must be adopted by schools in order to make youngsters ready for future inventions. I tend to that schools should be the primary basis for the young generation to learn the required modern skills before they enter into a fast-paced world.

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Some People Say Music Is A Good Way Of Bringing People Of Different Cultures And Ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some crowd opine that music is an efficient means to bring people of various age groups, beliefs and nationalities together. I fully agree with this view. Music connects people and helps them find the common ground; thus, it brings them closer.

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In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The Job market nowadays requires applicants to have several years of practical training instead of theoretical education. I believe that in the coming future, the value of having multiple degrees instead of work practice will be irrelevant.

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traffic jam is a problem in many cities and towns, To solve this problem, some suggest building underground railway, while others suggest expanding the road. Which one do you think is the best way?

In recent years, the phenomena of traffic congestion usually happened in many cities. In the following essay, I will give my opinion and analyze this phenomenon.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Children are generally so sensitive that they can learn a lot from everything, including even punishment. Some parents even consider physical penalizing beneficial for educating their children when they are little because it helps them distinguish right from wrong. However, I believe physical penalty would never be a useful education method to teach children what is correct. This essay will suggest other proper punishments and reasons why I am against the corporal penalty.

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The widespread use of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Today, Internet has been widespread all over the world. Owing to this, we can quickly and easily access a massive amount of information by searching the websites. However, there is a controversial debate on whether the use of the web has harmful impacts on us. I believe it has many downsides; this essay will discuss the potential problems the Internet might cause us and one solution to tackle them and reasons to support my opinion.

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It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (eg.dinosour,dodo,..). There are no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In 21 century, the disappearance of animal species grow onwards, some believe that it occurs naturally, so ,there are no compelling reasons for protecting them, while others argue that they should be preserved by our hands. This essay agrees with the latter view and provides rationales behind as well as examples before the conclusion is reached.

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Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

In today’s world, women play vital roles in every aspect of society. Due to enhancement in education institutions, females got more options to work outside of their homes as compared to the ancient times. However, some people believe that this scenario leads to cause the problem rather than solution to foster girl growth. This essay will discuss my views why I am not convinced by the above statement given.

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Nowadays, there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past. Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved. What are your opinions on this?

In today’s world, girl play vital roles in every aspect of society. Due to enhancement in education institutions, females got more options to work outside of their homes as compared to the ancient times. However, some people believe that this scenario leads to cause the problem rather than solution to foster girl growth. This essay will discuss my views why I am not convinced by the above statement given.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have various views about whether tourists truly enjoy visiting museums, or they just tend to acquire academic knowledge from museums. In my opinion, I would argue that visitors could be educated in museums.

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Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been a debate on whether entertainment or educational values should be the goal that filmmakers opt for their movies. From my perspective, I would argue that educational benefits need to be incorporated into movie contents, although it is thought by some that films should only for amusement.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that authorities should allocate funds on railways instead of roads. I strongly believe that government should spend money on railways.

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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specIt is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

There are certain advantages and disadvantages of living in cities and the countryside. However, some people are focusing on living in villages rather than cities, but I personally disagree with the statement as there are more advantages for children living in the metropolitan than country. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the pros and cons of living in cities and villages before the conclusion.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said by some people that children should be taught to become a decent citizen of the society while others argue that these are obligations of school. In my opinion, I believe that both have their unique impact on children’s upbringing.

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