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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Many university degree holders cannot find a job in their chosen profession.What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it ?

Unfortunately many university students have to choose a different career path.The reasons for the same are mainly due to imbalances in the job sector.In my view, proper planning by the government can bring the situation under control.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction and also the trouble about closing sports and leisure centre which is very significant for dwellers.

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The Government has a responsibility to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people believe that government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extent do you agree?

It is a common perception that every Government should strengthen their defense system to protect their citizens, whereas, other sectors do not need much funding. I completely disagree with this statement that defense should be the first priority of every Government, while other sectors are equally important for the development of the country.

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Governments should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every country is investing a substantial amount for research and development work nowadays. While many may argue that medical research should be prioritized over environment, I disagree. According to me, understanding our environment more can truly be beneficial and can even help in evolution of medical field.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The important factor for become a winner in sport is debatable. However, there are 2 powers, which are physical and mental strength that players can rely on to achieve success. This essay will examine both views of this argument and give evidence why the mental strength is something that we count on.

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It is sometimes argued that prison is the best place for criminals, while others think that there are better ways to deal with them. What is your opinion?

Many people believe that prison is the best place for keeping criminals, others subscribe to the view that they should be handled in different ways. I agree with the statement, that there have to be other ways to deal with prisoners.

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Students today can access information online , so libraries are not necessary . To what extedn do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays online reading is being more common and some people think that , libraries are not being integral part of readers . I , however believe that even though technology has reduced our need to go to the libraries , our traditional libraries can never become redundant .

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At schools, students should only be taught academic knowledge to pass the exams, and skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should be learned from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Academic subjects ought to teach by schools, so learners can achieve decent grades in the exams. Whereas, another domestic science subject can be inculcated by families and peers. The current essay disagrees with the phenomenon that fundamental life skills should learn at academic institutions. It explores, firstly, why skills related to art should cultivate in educates, and secondly, how to domestic skills education can be worthwhile among scholars.

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Government money should be used to support children in school for sports rather than to support professional sports and arts that perform for the general public. To what extent do you agree?

It is believed by some that the government funds should be utilized to develop an interest in the sports among the students going to schools and colleges, whereas others think that it should be spent on preserving the cultural art and professional sports. However in my own perspective, the budget should be used with a plan to develop sport as a hobby for youngsters, and to generate the revenue from the art and professional sports events.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that raising the price of fast foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overweight and Obesity are considered as a major public health concern in the growing world of globalization. It is believed by some people that this problem can be tackled by increasing the price of the fast foods. However in my own perspective, I disagree with this notion and suggest that various other reforms should be launched into making a healthy society.

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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

The face of communication changed with the advent of the journal as it became very easy to communicate with people at large and spread any message. As technology advanced, mass media like TV set and internet came offering more services. It was believed that the weekly will soon be disregarded as an outdated form of media. However, did not happen and does not seem a reality in the near future.

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With the coming of new mass communication media like television and internet, newspaper is losing its importance. Do you agree with this or not?

The face of communication changed with the advent of the magazine as it became very easy to communicate with people at large and spread any message. As technology advanced, mass media like TV set and Internet came offering more services. It was believed that journal will soon be disregarded as an outdated scheme of media. However, did not happen and does not seem a reality in the near future.

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Some people say that watching TV programs and movies related to crime are popular. What do you think it's popular and how does it affect to society?

A series of telecast or films that associated with illegality has always been one of the welcomed topics. Here, I would like to explore the reason why publics are intrigued by it and its possible impacts to the entire society will also be discussed and elaborated in this essay.

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Some people believe that this is an illness and should be treated medically. Others feel that this is only a result of unhealthy habits and it is sport that must help. Discuss both point of view and give your own opinion.

In today’s world childhood obesity is one of the most pressing problems. There are many reasons for this issue and many effects have been associated with it. However, I believe that several steps could be followed to improve this situation.

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traffic and housing problems in major cities can be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many big cities, traffic and housing issues always raise some discussion nowadays. Some people believe that moving large companies and their employees to the countryside is an effective solution to these problems. I disagree with this idea.

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Some people believe that the whole family bringing up children is better than only parents. What is your opinion?

It is believed by the segment of the masses that children who are brought up in joint families are better than the one in the nuclear families. In the joint family culture, children get the warmth and affection of their grandparents and along with that there is always someone to give attention to them. However, in elementary family setup, the children are deprived of the grandparent’s love also, they feel lonely at times and the habit of sharing is also not inculcated in them. Hence, I agree with the given stance that children should be brought up in a combined family.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry. What benefit do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?

Over the last few decades, the world has seen that the development of tourism industry. I think it brings a lot of benefits to both individuals and our society. This essay will firstly some advantages of this issue.

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Some people think modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Technology is advancing day by day. Every aspect of our lives is related to technology. However, there are advantages and disadvantages when it comes to technology.

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Children are generally more successful in foreign language studies than adults. Thus, it is better to learn languages in childhood. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is generally claimed that the best moment to learn a foreign language successfully is during the childhood and I completely agree.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, hotly debated topic by many is alterations in climate and their impact on our planet.However, some argue that such changes are indispensable and humans have to cope with it by adopting various strategies.While some believe that avoidance is better than cure.In my view, finding new techniques to counter adverse climate conditions far outweigh the avoidance due to unstoppable factors.

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