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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think that it's good for a country's culture if people watch some imported film or TV programs while some people argue that it could be better if people watch films of their own culture. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

An overwhelming number of people consider that it is a beneficial way to watch imported films for country’s culture, however, opponents argue and believe that it could be better to watch national films. In my opinion, while national films can present the history of the country, I believe that the effect of getting knowledge of other cultures and learning different languages throughout the films is more significant.

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

I completely disagree with the notion that achievements play "no" or less role in the success of celebrities and people are influenced by their glamourous and wealthy lifestyles. In the first para,I will be discussing the importance of achievements in their success and in the latter one I will be presenting my arguments about the influence on people of the glamourous world.

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In countries some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Competition for lucrative remuneration is a social rivalry. Nowadays, there is a social conflict whether wage could be a beneficial contribution for a country or should it be limited to a certain amount. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in-depth.

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some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Other believe governments should tightly control the use of freshwater as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

From the birth of the earth, water is a fundamental resource for every species. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that each individual has their birthright on water usage; others 000emphasize that authorities ought to manage the use of drinkable water as its quantity is limited. In my view, under the natural cycle of freshwater, the consumption always lag behind the proportion.

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Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When the news came that art classes such as music, painting and drawing would be made mandatory in my high school, it was met with both approvals and objections. This mixed response reflects the different attitudes towards the role of art in the education of high school students.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Public health is a growing concern, with many countries reporting increasing levels of obesity. Some believe the problem can be addressed by adding more sports facilities, while others think this may not be enough. A closer look at the problem will help in assessing these views.

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Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Gender-based education has a strict obligation to our education system among the globe with western influence in the past. Education is the solid knowledge gain through practical and theoretical studies towards broadening the horizon towards immense success . Despite the sex, institutes register students but it generates the question whether it favours the idea of providing equal right or will it deviates student’s ability to understand their capacities. This essay will discuss the above matter deeply.

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Some people believe that a greater difference in age between parents and children is more beneficial than less of a difference .Do you think the advantages of a greater age difference outweigh the disadvantages?

The age at which parents should have babies has been always arising opposing views toward this matter. Some would claim that having large gap in age between parents and offspring can be beneficial because of the financial security and emotion stability whereas others would argue that this case has several drawbacks due to lower fertility rate and life span. This essay will discuss why this phenomenon is advantageous despite its minor downside.

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In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In Britain, the government pays for the nursing care of the sick and old in an Old age Home. While the government should undertake the responsibility to provide infrastructure, I believe, the family should also contribute towards the expenses to run them.

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Prevention is better than cure’. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

World population is growing exponentially and so are the number of diseases worldwide. Finding a cure for them does not come cheap nor does it happen quickly. Popular opinion suggests that people should focus on preventing themselves from acquiring a disease rather focusing on the creation of an antidote. I am in strong favour of this opinion and in this essay,

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Some people believe that social media can provide people with reliable information and news. Others, however, disagree with this view. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is a debate over whether people can rely on social media in providing true data and news. Although individuals face with the false story in social networking sites, I believe social platforms are more effective regards to conveying reliable material and news.

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Mothers generally stay home to take care of their children after pregnancy. Do you support the opinion that this mothers should be compensated by the government.

I agree with this statement, especially mothers, choose to stay at home and dedicate themselves to the upbringing the children after pregnancy should receive payment from the government. However, I believe mothers should get paid for their contribution to raising healthy and active kids.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Language plays a vital role in expressing the views and ideas of the person. On this topic some people say that work and travel is the only reason to learn a new foreign language whereas, others think that these are not the only reason to learn foreign vocabulary. This essay will discuss both of the views. However, I go with the latter view.

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The best way for the government to solve traffic congestion is to provide free public transport 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a widespread belief that offering free public transport all days and seven days a week is considered as the best resolution to fight traffic matters. I partly agree with this solution because it is not a mandatory key to solve traffic congestion.

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Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people argue that the verbal form of communication is more powerful than written communication. In my opinion, it varies from individual to individual and sometimes also depends on the context in which the matter is to be conveyed to the other person. Thus, both forms of communication hold equal importance.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e. g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement?

There is a currently a contentious argument over whether having a set retirement as 65 years for everybody is unfair. Some people defend that certain kinds of workers deserve to retire and receive a pension before this. I totally agree with this argument and this essay looks at some reasons that support this opinion and suggest some examples to illustrate this.

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Nowadays people like to use new electronic equipment. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is irrefutable that technology plays a significant role in individual's lives. As the population has advanced their lives with the use of electronic gadgets such as for work, education or even for domestic purposes. It has taken over our lives in a certain manner. Indeed this is a beneficial development owing to the factors hashed- out in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that when recruiting people a company should aim to find people who are innovative and are able to work independently while others think that they should recruit people who are able to work in a team and follow instructions.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that when recruiting people a company should aim to find people who are innovative and are able to work independently while others think that they should recruit people who are able to work in a party and follow instructions. We will analyze both points of view.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities. Other believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some people that children at any age should be given extra responsibilities, while others disagree. In my opinion, I believe that there are advantages and disadvantages to both views.

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Some parents believe that reading entertainment books is a waste of time. In their opinion, children should read only serious, educational books. Do you agree or dis agree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own experience.

Books always assist people in a better way to gain knowledge. One portion of the community in the favour of reading comics and storytelling books while the others have opposite opinions as they are supporting to read books related to their educational syllabus. As I believe no matter what is the content in the readings material but definitely it gives many advantages to readers. In this easy upcoming paragraphs gives a contribution to support my idea.

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