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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Computers are considered to be a friend and a foe of humankind. Be it any age, computer is used every day for various task completion. But, in specific, some believe that the continuous use of this electronic machine has more cons than pros for children. I agree with it to a great extent that using a computer on daily basis effects a child's health and cause problems like obesity and inactive lifestyle.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extend do you agree or disagree

One of the most challenging part of raising children for parents ishow to make them behave in a good manner. Some people think using physical punishment is the best way of training. This essay will argue that using corporal punishment is not definitely an accepted way of behaving with children.

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Some people believe that children that commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead.Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no doubt criminals should be penalized according to the gravity of their crime. However, there are some peolpe believe that, even, the young offenders need to be sentensed, the opponents of this argument says that the parents of these children must face the judisial encounters than their offsprings. In my opinion, the penalty should be based on the circumstances and emotional and intellectual level of the juvenile offender.

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Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Celebrities such as famous film star or sports personality are normal people with different and extravagant lifestyle. Although, being one is not easy, yet some people want to be famous in order to be distinctive amongst others. I believe, being a celebrity is not a big concern, but carrying and maintaining like one is very difficult because of the high expectations of the public.

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It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?

According to a large number of people, exercise is good for young children and teenagers. Hence, schools should make physical education and sports mandatory for all students. I agree with this idea of giving importance to physical education and sports in the school curriculum.

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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

Some people opine that the special taxes implied on sugary products are beneficial for the public, while others dissent and believe that they are impinge for the freedom. In my opinion, despite the drawbacks, the benefits of health justify the regulations.

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27. Having a lot of international sports events may promote world peace. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

International sports events have been popular since the ancient times in human history. Moreover, these competitions definitely maintain and enhance our peaceful living environment worldwide because of social harmony enhanced by the events, entertainment provided for the audiences and international cooperation among nations.

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Some people believe that part time job can be beneficial for better jobs in future. Others think it can easily distract students. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, a majority of students opting to go to a part-time job throughout their studies. While some people assert that students who have anything next to their study will distract them easily. I believe that doing a specific job beside your study is crucially important. Nevertheless, personality has an enormous impact on whether it will distract you or help you.

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IN MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD, ILLITERACY RATES ARE STILL HIGH. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?

Illiteracy is a big problem that every poor countries have to deal with. Knowing how to read and write your own language is the most necessary things to be succeeded in today’s technologically advanced. It happens because of the way the governments direct the countries and using the treasury in wrong ways.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. Agree or disagree

It is argued that students should study about domestic history rather than other countries’ history. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view. Because I believe that children need learn both national history and world past the same at the school

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that work stability plays an imperative role in a person's life; however, some people tend to give immense importance to work satisfaction to lead a life. In my opinion, both factors are vital, according to age and experiences. This essay will discuss both the views which will demonstrate how people's thought about job satisfaction and security changes over the period.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

According to individual liking and desire of living in a bigger house, new homes are getting constructed rapidly. Some people are building them in the countryside because of less space in the city, while others disagree in order to save or conserve the environment. In my opinion, proper planning on building a house could help the society and nature, without disturbing the natural beauty of one’s surroundings.

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Some people believe online reading materials should only be used for a child to learn to read, whereas others believe only printed material should be used. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion.

A few people think that website documents must only be utilized for an adolescent to gain to know the information, while others trust that xeroxed papers ought to be used. There are more benefits such as relevant, informative information, accurate, and easy access, while will browse the data in internet as well as no eye strain and easy go through the document while reading the printed papers. In this essay, I will portray both of the statements in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Present a written argument or case to an educated non-specialist audience on the following topic. Globalization has led to the introduction of many new international products into local shops and markets. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of this example of globalization? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

With the technological advancement, cultures and people are closer than ever before. Globalization is the result of the open flow of information, technology and goods among the countries and consumers. There are both pros and cons in this extension, which will be discussed in detail here.

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Some people believe that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university. Others think that young people will achieve more by focussing on their studies. Discuss both of the view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. days?

Over time, the cost of attending university has risen dramatically, making it necessary for many students to supplement savings and parental help with part-time jobs while studying. There are those who believe there are benefits to working while studying, while others believe that focussing on schoolwork is paramount. The key merits of both viewpoints are discussed below, along with my own views on the subject.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

People generally think that advertisement motivates the buyer to purchase items that they really do not want. On the other hand, the rest of them believe that commercial shows the details of the upcoming products that may give benefits to our lives. Well, I partially agree with that, the commercialization and promotion leave so much impact on us that we unwillingly buy some items which we don't require. However, some brochure also provides information about new objects which is highly helpful.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Artists require the ability of expression to some extent to develop innovative ideas. Some people argue that full opportunity to express any opinion or ideas need to be given to artists. In my opinion, artists should be given enough power to express their ideas, but total right is not required.

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Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on society is negative, while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people opine that entertainers are paid heavily and they have a negative influence on society while others dissent that they have a constructive influence on society and deserve the money. However, I agree with the latter view and believe that they should be paid more money compare to other professions.

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Some kids become famous at a very younge age. Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

There are children who get famous at a younger age, what kind of impact does the stars have in their life is it positive or negative?

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Some people think that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a genial conflict of believing between two groups of people. While one group of people believes wireless is the best way to improve our knowledge about world, country or city, whereas another group of people believe television set is the best source in order to improve our knowledge about the world or a state/city. In my opinion television set is the best source for improving once knowledge.

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