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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only Government and large companies can make difference. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Many people think that only the Government ,key organizations plays vital role in keeping the environment conditions, health, whereas individuals lack the responsibility and knowledge to keep the atmosphere in a wealthy condition. Individuals are lazy enough to make sure that their nearby places are hygiene enough and always Companies and public servants take additional care to do so. This essay talks about my opinion towards the Government, Industries and public role in improving the climate conditions.

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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people believe that a great number of people must have physical power for success in sport, others assert that mental strength plays a significant role in achieving success. In my opinion, I consider that people who want to win in sports events have excellent physical power.

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Some high schools have a requirement that students must complete a certain amount of volunteer work in order to graduate. What do you think about this type of requirement? Give details to support your opinion.

Nowadays, a certain amount of community service is being considered as a qualifying activity for graduating high schools. I think this is a positive development as it not only provides a purpose of life but also helps students to develop certain soft skills.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Despite several campaigns encouraging people to eat more healthily and to do more exercise, little progress has been made in dealing with the problem of obesity and declining levels of fitness. This essay will describe how this situation has come about and argue that the government needs to take action and implement more drastic measures to address this issue.

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Global warming is the biggest threat we are experiencing today? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question of global warming has become one of the most controversial ones in recent decades. It is my firm belief that this environmental issue is may cause a great amount of danger not only to humanity, but to all the living creatures on the planet. It is the goal of this essay to analyse the problem of global warming by demonstrating points and supporting arguments.

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20. Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are numerous crimes committing by the people, but Many had done by the teenagers only. These young adults need some guidance about the result after committing crimes. So, it can be given by the person who suffer from the same and learn from it.

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Today social skills are being more and more emphasized by employers. Some people believe that social skills are important besides good qualifications for their job success. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern work environment demands impeccable social acumen with academic grades to get success and progress in a professional career. Many people and educational institutions give equal importance to both, the educational achievements and the social skills. I fully agree with the belief as good grades can give you a job, but good interpersonal skills can ensure a successful job career.

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Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part-time to ensure better opportunities in the future. Others are of the opinion, job during study distracts the individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Is it often argued that student should work part-time while studying. Some people completely agree with this topic, however, other are against it. As long as, each group has his own arguments, what about you? First, do not judge without thinking, because this sensitive issue should be treated well.

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The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at a university or other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I completely agree that schools and colleges do not teach an individual how to achieve their goals in life instead it is the talent and dedication within oneself that drives him to the top of the ladder. Firstly, I shall discuss how institutions and academies cannot lend a helping hand and secondly, will talk about the other qualities that one needs to be successful.

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern advancements in the field of medical and awareness about a healthy lifestyle have increased the average life expectancy rate in human beings. Some people are suggesting that the increase should be compensated with expanding the current retirement age limit for working professionals. I completely disagree with the notion as it may discourage them from working efficiently and it can delay the availability of vacant jobs arising from the retiring workforce.

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The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

It is often suggested that the best way to reduce serious crime is the death penalty. However, I totally disagree with this notion because all crimes do not happen with intention so we can easily reduce serious crime in spite of applying this and this notion might affect the entire families and end up with another crime.

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For many young people today, shopping is their favourite free time activity. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time?

In recent times, due to increase of modernization, people's approach towards hobbies has changed drastically, especially among young people. At present shopping has become a favourite pass time. According to me, I believe this kind of activity is totally a waste of time unless it is for an important occasion.

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Parents of obese children should be punished by making them fat. Do agree or disagree ?

Overweight sons or daughters, the parents will be penalized by making them fat. I disagree with the statement because it is not some children can be caused by genetics and it is not the intension of the mother or father

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In some countries old people have more valued while in some younger people are more valued. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some nations have given priority to septuagenarian as well as younger ages people.In my opinion, both elder and younger are obligatory to support each other as well as exchanging opinion.However, this essay shall discuss the both prospective view from the bird's eye view up arriving a concrete answer.

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Some people think that prison sentences should not be used in dealing with criminals. Education and job training should be used instead. To what extent do you agree on disagree?

People hold different views about punishing a criminal. Some believe that instead of prison sentences, judiciary people should provide academic knowledge or teach some crafts to criminals. In my opinion, I partially agree with the view, as serious criminal offenders should be put behind bars.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

Nowadays, People wealth is increasing much more than the couple of decades ago, it brought a major different in shopping habit of human. With the increasing income people tends toward more shopping. I personally believe that person's behaviour toward shopping has some negative effects. My inclination is justified in following paragraphs.

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Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At the modern time, it is noticeable that technology has been improved a lot and provided a huge amount of changes to communities in different areas. Some people argued that the development of technology will eliminate the most significant environmental issue in the future. While it is true that science could make a contribution to environment, however I believed that laws or policies could also take part in help make our planet better.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.(

In the past several years, the shopping mall's popularity has grown rapidly and is transforming urban lifestyle. They are everywhere and are replacing small shops. The subject arouses two different opinions – are large shopping malls are good or bad.

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some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing and avoid any change . other how ever ,think that change is always a good thing .Discuss both views and Opinion?

It is irrefutable that change is the new stability. A segment of people is of the opinion that change is always a good thing while others opine to prefer to spend their lives doing the same thing. I would like to delve into both the arguments before forming an opinion.

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The only thing that interferes with my learning is my education” – Einstein. What do you mean by this? And do you think Einstein was correct in saying that?

Many people believe that education is the one and only way to acquire knowledge, but there are many successful people who think differently. Education has now become universal, and it has become the prime requirement for any kid. It is the acquiring of skills, knowledge, habits, and values from teachers. Education has always been an integral aspect of human civilization.

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