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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent decades, education play a crucial role in national development. Therefore, a school of thought holds that students should criticize or make a complaint to their teachers or tutors while some claim that it will lead to a loss of respect in the classroom. From my perspective, I firmly lean towards the first idea and this essay will discuss these two viewpoints in a depth.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

Many countries throughout the world contribute to the sphere of tourism in order to attract more foreigners. There are great benefits of having advanced hospitality such as economic growth of a country and developed infrastructure. However, sometimes an increased number of overseas attendees can cause pollution problems for a country. Moreover, relying on travel hospitality only lead to a limited source of income for the government. I personally believe that advantages from developed touristry might bring more benefits for a community in case of efficient management of that.

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Some people think that planting trees in open space cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that constructing new buildings on the free land in cities is more meaningful than re-planting. I strongly agree with this statement and I will explain my reasons to support this idea in the upcoming paragraph.

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Limited money should be spend on computer equipment or good teachers. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Money is an important asset in everyday life. It is a controversial idea on how much money should be spent on quality teachers or technological equipment. In my opinion, it is predominant to think that more money should be invested in a higher standard of teachers and educational instruments.

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It’s time to ban social media. It has been shown that it has made life worse for people all over the world, from politics, to self-image, to the spread of disinformation. It is a social experiment that has not worked and it is time to say goodbye.To what extent do you agree with the above statement?

Social media has spread out its popularity day by day. It has become the basic need and quality of human beings to be social. However, its impacts on human life are argued, its existence is being considered to ban or continue developing.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

Undoubtedly, video games have changed the children’s world. It is argued that nowadays more youngers are playing violent games and those games have a considerable impact on elevating aggressive behaviours and crime within the urban areas, in many nations. I am strongly agreeing with this, and I believe that the latest technology and limited social relationships have a considerable impact on this situation.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

Many people argue that music, theatre and art are an integral part of the community. I strongly agree with the statement and believe that art is still an important aspect of the modern lifestyle. I also support that arts should be included in schools and in this essay, I will give reasons and facts to support both statements.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When facing a complex unfortunate situation, people argue that it is in their best interest to accept the events because it would give them some peace of mind. While others allege that trying to solve the issue would be the most rewarding course of action. In my opinion, being a bystander is an absolute illogical choice since it wouldn't help us overcome the problem.

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Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Owing to the current trend, it is undeniable that online shopping has become more widespread among populations around the world within a short period which conduces to diverse aftermaths whether they are beneficial or not. From my perspective, this phenomenon tends to bring about harmful development more than favourable and I will explain my ideas why I believe like that in the essay below.

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Having big salary is more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a lot of people are working in a company and earning money. Having sufficient wealth is more essential than work pleasure. In my opinion, I agree with this statement for two reasons.

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THERE ARE SOME MOTIVES FOR PEOPLE TO DO WORK.SOME PEOPLE THINK MONEY IS THE MOST IMPORTANT. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

Everybody has the perspective to do their jobs but some believe that wealth is very important. I strongly disagree with this idea.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on more important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, nutrition and cooking have emerged as two necessary subjects for children. However, there is an opposing group that thinks that students should focus on the conventional syllabus. Even though both opinions are sensible, from my perspective, I believe that such education about food science and preparation brings overwhelming advantages.

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Some people think that the role of parent is to discipline their children and teach them about right and wrong. Other people consider that the main responsibility of parents is to nature their children and provide them with a safe environment to grow up in. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days, it has been debatable whether parents should play a vital role in forming the discipline of their pupils, or they should be mainly responsible for providing the necessary care and being a safe zone for children to vigorously grow. In the following paragraphs, both of these views will be discussed in detail before my opinion is presented.

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Some people sat that family is the most powerful influence in a child's development. Other's say that other factors such as (Television, friends, music, etc.) play a greater role today. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some of the populations consider that family plays an important role in a child's development. While others think that the media, such as television, music, the internet influence children more. In my opinion, I would say that both sides make sense, and it also depends on the living environment and parents' educational policy.

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There have been many technological developments in the past few decades, for example in telecommunications, transport and health. What technological development do you think has been the most important? How has it changed people's lives? Have all the changes been positive?

In this modern era, progression in every sector has been attained due to technological development. In my opinion, internet invention is the most essential for technological advancement as it connects people irrespective of the place. Although the internet has immense beneficial effects, it also has some negative impacts on society.

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Today, many educators believe that non-exam subjects such as music, drama, and painting are essential to be taught in schools. Others argue that academic subjects should be given more attention. Do you agree or disagree?

Education forms a solid foundation in most societies. In recent times, quite a number of teachers think that learning non-academic subjects like music, drama and paintings in institutions are not relevant compared to others. This essay will discuss the reason why it is important to also focus on these areas.

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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Someone believes that we should focus on the destiny of our own societies and nations because of the inability to assist others worldwide. I completely disagree with this idea and I assume that human beings are obliged to care for others.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been argued that whether humanities subjects have the same importance as other subjects at the early age of the child. I strongly agree that art’s subjects are extremely crucial for a child’s development because these subjects will help them to discover new things and will help the child to grow faster mentally.

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While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people do arguments for everything. The recent one is about environmental problems. Some people believe that global warming is a major environmental issue even though, others opine this by adding deforestation is the concern one. However, in my opinion, both deforestation and global warming are concern environmental issues because these problems affect the health of human beings. The essay will examine the topic in detail with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.

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Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by governments rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued whether studies in scientific fields should rely on the state or private sector. While national launched projects tend to gain more breakthroughs, researches led by individual companies are promising as well.

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