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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In this expeditiously evolving world, there has been a growing trend of purchasing goods via web. It is therefore believed by some that this will eventually lead to shutting of brick and mortar stores. I strongly believe in this assertion and this essay will discuss the reasons behind this inclination.

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Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible do you think this is a positive or negative development?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently,numerous citizens of working and studying from home due to the availability and affordability of technology to most sections of the society.In my opinion, the positive and negative impacts brought by this trend weighs almost the same.

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Violence in the society is largely promoted by violence shown in media. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people share an intimate relation with media and everything that is being broadcasted on it influences the decision making of individuals and their acts. I believe that the gruesome content telecasted on the media has a bad impact on mass especially younger ones. This essay shall depict my views with my consent.

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Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health To what extent do you agree or disagree

Schools are always a place to learn and develop many things. A few individuals are of the opinion that these educational institutions are not fully educating the kids on personal health. I agree with it to a large extent. However, I think schools cannot be totally blamed on this matter. In the current essay ,I will discuss on this and conclude.

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Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, parents and teachers in many countries are feeling increasingly concerned about the effect of digital devices on vital skills of school-aged children. Obviously, they are alarmed by the declining ability of young people to read and write and its suspected link to the influence of modern technology, and I wholeheartedly share their view. However, this essay will examine why overusing mobile devices has demerits.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music is proved to be an important part of our lives as thousands of people listen to music every day and many play different instruments. Thus, there is an opinion among those who work in a sphere of education that children should be taught how to play musical instruments. From my point of view, no one especially children should be obliged to learn how to play the piano, violin and other instruments.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Experienced persons have fit all sectors whereas knowledgeable persons are adjusted in certain areas. From my perspective, the positive sides of experience acquired by people outraced the negative effects. This essay will discuss both the pros and cons of expertise and wisdom.

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Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In the present days, technology is become a vital part of our life, especially with children. Although many people believe that watching Tv is good for children, I think it will bring a bad effect on a child.

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Nowadays, movies and computer games containing violence are very popular. Some people believe that they have negative effect on the society and should be banned, others, however, believe that it is harmless entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although cruel films and video games are considered to be detrimental by some people, others think there is no anything harmful. In my opinion, people are what they consume and the content with assault definitely impacts the human’s behaviour.

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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniably true that travelling has become quite popular among people. This can be widely well-liked among the young generation who love the idea of travelling. While some people claim that it is good to have a tour mentor who can provide guidance to overcome any hindrance that people encounter during the tour. I completely disagree with this fact as travelling without a tour counsellor can be beneficial to a tour group in many ways.

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Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience, whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is an irrefutable fact, that education is an important topic in all over the world. Further more, education have to up date on subjects that can match with the problems that society is having today. Music and other subjects, that are not added to educational programs are needed, now a days. The following up paragraphs will analize with explanations if learning music is are waste of time or not.

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In recent years foreign visitors should be charged more than local. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, people like to move around the world even for studying or for a long stay, some countries prefer to make visitors pay taxes more than local people. This essay is to completely disagree with the suggestion. In this essay will look at the first way some state think that his right to make visitors pay more as well as discuss the right of the visitor to be like local people.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

Few people believe that music, art and drama should be necessary subjects in junior school. This essay completely disagrees with the above statement because it would distract students from other important subjects, which helps them in building their career and also, they won't be able to focus on sports which is essential to keep them healthy.

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Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,due to the extreme developing and availability of internet access, and, due to the continuous developing of new videogames, children are always more dependent on computers and electronic devices. Some people argue that it would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. I strongly agree with this last statement for several reasons.

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Some people are of the opinion that we must discontinue using fossil fuels and adopt renewable sources of energy. Yet others feel that renewable sources of energy are not as dependable as fossil fuels. Discuss both views.

Our Society thinks that we should avoid using Non-Renewable sources and we all must pledge to use renewable sources to save our environment from all the harm it causes. However, some people claim that fuels like wind and solar energy are not available all times due to geographical limitations so these sources are not reliable. In my opinion, we should shift our focus from fossil sources since it will deplete over time and should start adopting natural modes of power.

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Some people believe that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Dedication and determination play a crucial role in making a person successful in life, but many people argue that wealth and how you look are more vital elements. This essay agrees that one's accomplishments are based on efforts and sacrifices a person makes to achieve his desired goals. Appearance and money are secondary what matters is the journey of ups and downs one goes through with the will of never giving up.

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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no suspicion that the internet has massively soared our reaching to data. In my opinion this has a beneficial effect on people's lives that will discuss in this essay.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

No doubt, in these busy days,no one has time to take care of their homes and offices as well. It is believed by most people that it is a very important thing to arrange offices and houses in a manner, where everything should be placed at their correct places. I agree with the statement and this essay will discuss how the managed office show that the work is doing in the manner and on time if the home will clean, there will be fewer chances of accidents.

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Most artist earn lower salaries and should therefore receive funding from the government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree ?

Many people assume that fine artist do not a reputed salary and hence they should receive financial help from the local authority so that it would be easier to resume their respective job.This essay disagrees with the notion because artists nowadays are getting help from many non-profit organisations and also due to advancement in technology has made it convenient for them to get recognised globally.

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Some people think that preventive measures are the best bet against a pandemic; others however believe that our attention and resources should be diverted to medical interventions. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this pandemic world, we are in the situation which we never thought and predict before it started. Some people in a group believe that follow preventive measures should be the better option to stay away from Covid-19 and other think that we have no control over people and spread of disease then we should have to provide more resources and efforts to the health system. In my opinion, social distancing and put a mask on the face while you are outside is the best thing to bet this lockdown.

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