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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The consumer society is always on its toes to boost the selling and buying of goods and this can go a long run to increase the state's economy. Some people consider that most customers are being influenced by the advertisement of goods and services. However, there is an equally voiced another perspective which claims that people do not have eyes for commercial messages due to its overabundance. In this essay, I will elaborate further on both sides of the argument and also puts forward my opinion before drawing a conclusion.

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

Typically, everyone is coming exams either home works to their mind if you ask about traditional education system facts. However, training aspects shouldn't content just exams. So I tend to agree with the idea that non-exam lectures should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum.

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in some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, a lot of bad habits become part of our day, such as eating fast-food constantly from the restaurants, which will surely reflect in our health by negative impacts. This essay agrees completely the suggestion that includes high taxes in this sort of meals. This essay will look at first in the reson made people attracted to this food as well as the taxes as a good solution to avoid the consequences of this bad habit.

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Some people believe that individuals are responsible for their own personal happiness. Others argue that happiness can be affected by other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that every person is responsible for their own joy. While some individuals think that they are responsible for their peace but others feel that depending on

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It’s believed that people who read for pleasure develop their imagination more and acquire better language skills compared to people who prefer watching television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, reading can be very enjoyable and educative as well. However, some people prefer watching shows and programs for relaxation, I believe that reading is very important if an individual wants to improve their creative and imaginative side. Although, this essay will examine both viewpoints and provide a plausible conclusion.

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Some people are of the opinion that children should be rewarded for good behavior. Others think they should be punished for bad behavior. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion and reasons.

Childhood is the most crucial stage where the young develop their positive and negative traits. These days, even parenting has become a challenge to deal with. Although the subject is contested by many, I would strongly believe in acknowledging both behaviours. The repercussions of encouraging the good and demoralizing the bad will be analyzed in the essay.

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The growth of consumerism has led to a ‘throw-away’ culture where people are more concerned with acquiring material possessions than protecting the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The twentieth century has seen a rapid rise in the consumerism all over the globe, primarily due to the increased access to markets generated by globalisation. As a result, there has been a real shift in people’s desire to own and replace their possessions more often. I believe that this has had an extremely detrimental effect on how the protection of the environment is viewed.

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Countries with long average working hours are economically more successful than those countries which do not work long hours. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that countries which extend working hours above the average limit are more achieving than nations which work fewer hours. This essay disagrees that prolonged working hours is useful, as this would affect the employees’ health and adversely affect the economy. This essay will discuss the health risks imposed by extra working hours, followed by economic effects.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as a part of curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Some people argue that the responsibility for children to have a regular physical exercise should be of the parents. So schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as a part of the study curriculum. I strongly disagree with the previous statement for several reasons.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Developing in physical, literate and business are drastically needed for the enhancing of few wealthy people and as a contrast more wealthy mankind should grab the liabilities for assisting helpless folks in some regions. From my perspective, this proposition is completely true.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Numerous companies hire men for high-profile jobs over women, whereas women account for half of the workforce in developed countries. This essay agrees that a fixed percentage should be designated for females, as many women are qualified and this should help them in financing their families

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Digital communication technology, such as email, instant messaging and social media, has improved communication and connections between people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Digital means of communication has strongly improved conversation and connections among people. I strongly agree with this statement for several reasons.

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In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In most of the nations, there was a general concept of having a lot of offsprings and living as a big family. Although it was a social belief that having a more male child was a symbol of inheriting fortune in near future. This essay will outline some of the advantages and disadvantages of this topic.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree?

Undoubtedly, it is the wealthy countries' responsibility to extend their support to poorer ones. Although the subject is contested by many, I strongly advocate this trend is mutually beneficial. The improved relations and economic ties that are created during this process will be analyzed to prove this thesis true.

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The reason that most people are in debt is the overuse as well as irresponsible use of credit cards. Banks ought to do a background check and only issue credit cards to individuals who have the ability to pay back their debts. What is your opinion?

Although credit cards are the means to survive in undesired financial situations, since, its overuse and capricious handling could lead to rising debts among the people. Despite, of strict rules and regulations which banks adopt, there is a need to push it further and verify if the customer will be able to repay the withdrawals before approving his post-paid card.

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The reason that most people are in debt is the overuse as well as irresponsible use of credit cards. Banks ought to do a background check and only issue credit cards to individuals who have the ability to pay back their debts. What is your opinion?

Although credit cards are the means to survive in undesired financial situations,however, its overuse and capricious handling could lead to rising debts among the people. Despite, of strict rules and regulations which banks adopt, there is a need to push it further and verify if the customer will be able to repay the withdrawals before approving his post-paid card.

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It is importance for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Many believe that discipline the children, they must be punished for their bad behaviour. This teaches them to differentiate between good and evil deeds. I utterly agree with this statement, this essay will opine my opinions and relative illustrations and will discuss what kind of strict measures can parents adopt to rehabilitate their offsprings.

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Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For the young generation, job seeking is always one of the serious arguments and people have different opinions about that. Although taking up the vocation by considering the future realistically has some benefits, I agree with those who say that creating a career whatever they like is better.

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Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like, while others say that they should think more realistically about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For the young generation, job seeking is always one of the significant arguments and people have different opinions about that. Although taking up the vocation by considering the future realistically has some benefits, I agree with those who say that creating a career whatever they like is better.

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Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people believe that talents are a good excuse for misbehaving inside and outside the game. This essay disagrees that the ability to perform well on games should not prevent players from facing the consequences of their misbehaviour, as they are advised to be role models to children and this will influence other performers to do the same.

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